【正文】 to copying. There is no denying that , however, puters can function in the disservice of human beings, 這個句子有三個精彩之處，首先There is no denying that這個句型，還有however作為插入語， function in the disservice of 替換 do harm to Emerging 替換 appearing ( fading 替換 disappearing ) Net citizen 網(wǎng)民，屬于精彩用詞 As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people39。 lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet. No garden has no weeds 替換 Every coin has two sides Computers do play ，do 強調(diào) Positive 替換 important / good 等 A slice of 替換 a part ofUnfavorable 替換 bad Impacts 替換 effects / influences We should, therefore, take advantage of … 使用插入語 Fruits (而且fruits 用的非常形象， merits/ virtues) 替換 advantage ( defects 替換 disadvantage ) Facet 替換 aspect 　以下是30個最經(jīng)典的替換詞，各位同學(xué)可以參考一下: ,characters, folks替換(people ,persons) 2: positive, favorable, rosy (美好的)，promising (有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替換good 3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替換bad 如果bad做表語，可以有be less impressive替換 army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive. 滬江四六級4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替換many. 注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有詞。 Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that….同理 用most, if not all ,替換most. 5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替換some 6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替think (因為是書面語，所以要加that) 7:affair ,business ,matter 替換thing 8: shared 代 mon huge fruits 替換get many benefits )10:for my part ,from my own perspective 替換 in my opinion 11:Increasing(ly),growing 替換more and more( 注意沒有g(shù)rowingly這種形式。所以當修飾名詞時用increasing/，副詞用increasingly. has gained growing popularity. Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth. if anything, 或little or nothing替換hardly13..beneficial, rewarding替換helpful, ,client,consumer,purchaser, 替換customer,extremely, intensely 替換very necessary, hardly inevitable ... 替換 unnecessary, avoidable appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替換sb take interest in / sb. be interested in one39。s attention替換attract one39。s ,demension,sphere代aspect indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替換cause.22. There are several reasons behind sth 替換..reasons for sth 替換want. attention into 替換pay attention to in mind that 替換remember 26. enjoy, possess 替換have(注意process是過程的意思)27. interaction替換munication on sth替換 be against , disagree with sth name only a few, as an example替換 for example, for instance 30. next to / virtually impossible,替換nearly / almost impossible 寫作用得最廣的句式 以下是短文寫作中使用率最高、覆蓋面最廣的基本句式，每組句式的功能相同或相似，可根據(jù)自己的情況選擇其中的1－2個，做到能夠熟練正確地仿寫或套用。 1．表示原因 1）There are three reasons for this． 2）The reasons for this are as follows． 3）The reason for this is obvious． 4）The reason for this is not far to seek． 5）The reason for this is that．．． 6）We have good reason to believe that．．． 例如： There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life．Firstly，people’s living standard has been greatly improved．Secondly，most people are well paid， and they can afford what they need or like．Last but not least，more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life． 注：如寫第一個句子沒有把握，可將其改寫成兩個句子。如：Great changes have taken place in our life． There are three reasons for this．這樣寫可以避免套用中的表達失誤。 2．表示好處 1）It has the following advantages． 2）It does us a lot of good． 3）It benefits us quite a lot． 4）It is beneficial to us． 5）It is of great benefit to us． 例如： Books are like friends．They can help us know the world better，and they can open our minds and widen our horizons．Therefore，reading extensively is of great benefit to us． 3．表示壞處 1）It has more disadvantages than advantages． 2）It does us much harm． 3）It is harmful to us． 例如： However，everything divides into two．Television can also be harmful to us．It can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching television． 4．表示重要、必要、困難、方便、可能 1）It is important（necessary，difficult，convenient， possible）for sb．to do sth． 2）We think it necessary to do sth． 3）It plays an important role in our life． 4) It is of great significance to … 例如： Computers are now being used everywhere，whether in the government，in schools or in business．Soon， puters will be found in every home，too．We have good reason to say that puters are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age． 5．表示措施 1）We should take some effective measures． 2）We should try our best to overe（conquer）the difficulties． 3）We should do our utmost in doing sth． 4）We should solve the problems that we are confronted（faced）with． 例如： The housing problem that we are confronted with is being more and more serious．Therefore，we must take some effective measures to solve it． 6．表示變化 1）Some changes have taken place in the past five years． 2）A great change will certainly be produced in the world’s munications． 3）The puter has brought about many changes in education． 例如： Some changes have taken place in people’s diet in the past five years．The major reasons for these changes are not far to