【正文】 前途渺茫 .第四個句子談有兩個大的好處 .第五個句子談第一個好處 ,通常是讓生活豐富 ,有效率 .再談第二個好處通常是談一些個人發(fā)展或社會進步的好處 .第五個句子是代替for example的五星級的句子 .第六個是具體的舉例子 ,談根據(jù)一項調(diào)查表明 ,80%的人只要利用這個積極的現(xiàn)象就容易改變?nèi)松?,提高素質(zhì) .也可以單獨舉個性例子 ,第七個句子是倒裝句子談只有這個現(xiàn)象才能讓我們成為社會的成功者 第三個段子首句 談二十五個單詞的超豪華的句子 ,談無論做大事還是小事 ,無論做難事還是容易事 ,都要這個積極現(xiàn)象 .第二個句子談有兩點建議讓它變的更好 .第三個句子談讓它變的更好的第一個方法 ,通常發(fā)揮它的好處 ,避免壞處 .第四個句子談第二個方法 ,第五個句子談個諺語 ,第六個談解決任務(wù)的任重道遠 .第七個倒裝句談只要有這個積極現(xiàn)象就會享受一個美好 ,豐富和有活力的未來 . 文章以團隊精神為例子 (1)As is vividly depicted in the picture,(描述圖畫 ).(2) The most striking feature is(圖畫重點信息 ).(3)There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration. (1)As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that(重復(fù)上面的圖畫信息 ) profoundly indicates that team work is momentous (重要的 ) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. (2)Undoubtedly, it is team work that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty, that makes us still full of energy to face the ing challenges and petition and that offers us the foundation for the ing success. (3)If we don not cooperate sincerely, we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated or feel loss of hope about the future. (4)As far as I am concerned, there are several advantages that can be given as below. To begin with, nothing is more beneficial than team work to overe our defects and improve our efficiency. (5)Secondly, no issue is as good as team work to make our life more colorful and energetic.(6)No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. (7)A person who is assigned various jobs along the production lines will make a mess just because no one can be proficient in all the things. (8)Only by cooperating with other people can you put your capacities into full play and can you be the winner in the society. (1)From what have been discussed above,it admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to involve yourself into a team work. (2)It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make your team work more efficient. (3)On the one hand, we should be sensible to be receptive to other people’ s opinions and benefits. (4)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be always helpful and honest to other people.(5) However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. (6)Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later. 人類社會的永恒話題 , 對比論述突出好處 ,比如堅持不懈 , 打敗自我 ,團隊精神 ,為人真誠 ,實事求是從正面列舉該積極事物的好處 ,克服困難 , 征服挑戰(zhàn) , 完善自我 ,走向成功 ,創(chuàng)造輝煌從反面列舉沒有這 3 個積極事物時的不好 , 郁悶迷茫 , 無成就感和前進動力 , 失敗挫折感最后要談兩點建議措施和聯(lián)想美好未來 話題：堅持不懈 在失敗的時候堅持 , 做好每一件小事為成功做好準備 . 首段：四句話，描述圖畫，表明圖畫發(fā)人深思。 As is vividly depicted in the picture, 描述圖畫 . The most striking feature is 圖畫重點信息 . 描述圖畫兩句，第一句宏觀表明圖畫的視覺效果。 第二句表明的圖畫的最大特色是什么。 There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration. 此句子表明圖畫所微妙傳達的象征含義，發(fā)人深思，十四個單詞增加亮點，彌補首段字數(shù)不足，為下文點名觀點作好鋪墊 Recent few years has witnessed a phenomenon that which plays an active part in our society. 二段：七句話，揭示象征含義，從正反兩方面論述該積極事 物的重要性。從正面列舉該積極事物的好處 ,克服困難 , 征服挑戰(zhàn) , 完善自我 ,走向成功 ,創(chuàng)造輝煌從反面列舉沒有這個積極事物時的不好 , 郁悶迷茫 , 無成就感和前進動力 , 失敗挫折感，而且要舉例證明使觀點具體化，并以倒裝并列句結(jié)尾，畫龍點睛。 As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fac