【正文】 倒裝句在結尾補充再好不過。 There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration. 此句子表明圖畫所微妙傳達的象征含義，發(fā)人深思，十四個單詞增加亮點，彌補首段字數不足，為下文點名觀點作好鋪墊 Recent few years has witnessed a phenomenon that which plays an active part in our society. 二段：七句話，揭示象征含義，從正反兩方面論述該積極事 物的重要性。 PartB 部分是有的，但是 partA沒有， PartB 可以基本上把這個文章全寫完的一個模板方式。 第一段 (1)As is vividly depicted in the picture, ， which seems to be humorous and ridiculous but thoughtprovoking on second thoughts.(2)The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that unbelievably, ， (3)Recent few years has witnessed a phenomenon of 主題 which seems to be disastrous to individual survival and prosperity. (4)This phenomenon of 主題 should be condemned severely or made illegal. (5)There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration. 中間段落從兩方面論證問題的危害，并舉例論證，預測危害的趨勢 (1) To account for the abovementioned phenomenon, several serious effects have been put forward. (2)To begin with,主題 not only results does harm to our physical and mental health but also results in a frustrating and humiliating life. (3)In addition, nothing is more harmful than 主題 to contradict with a harmonious society. (4)Last but not the least, no issue is as harmful as 主題 to increase family burdens, which is a threatening situation we are unwilling to see. (5)No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below . (6)According to a survey made by China Daily, % of young people who have ever experienced 主題 will live a dull life or even feel loss of hope about the future. (7)If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may e out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of something. 最后一段要強調解決問題，談的兩點建議通常是提高人們的意識，加強執(zhí)法 (1)From what have been discussed above, it is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to prevent 主題 . (2)On the one hand, we should be sensible to strengthen the 2 enforcement of the laws to protect something. (3)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance of saving somebody out of the evil hands of destruction. (4)However, it is easier said than done. (5)Although the fight against it is longstanding and tremendous one,our efforts will eventually pay off.(6) Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later. 積極有利型的文章 第一段談的是三個句子 ,第一 ,二個句子都是在描述圖畫 ,第三句子這個現象對社會發(fā)展的積極的現象 ,第四個句子是圖畫簡單 ,寓意深刻 . 第二個段子 ,第一個句子談一個十二個單詞的爆發(fā)力的主題句 ,第二個句子談這個現象的永恒的社會含義 ,用一個三十五個單詞的鉆石級的排比句子 ,談只要有這個現象就可以讓我們不斷有意義的事情 ,征服挑戰(zhàn)和競爭 ,并最后走向成功 .第三個可以從反面談如果沒有這個積極現象 ,人們生活就憂悶 ,有挫折感 ,無前進動力 ,前途渺茫 .第四個句子談有兩個大的好處 .第五個句子談第一個好處 ,通常是讓生活豐富 ,有效率 .再談第二個好處通常是談一些個人發(fā)展或社會進步的好處 .第五個句子是代替for example的五星級的句子 .第六個是具體的舉例子 ,談根據一項調查表明 ,80%的人只要利用這個積極的現象就容易改變人生 ,提高素質 .也可以單獨舉個性例子 ,第七個句子是倒裝句子談只有這個現象才能讓我們成為社會的成功者 第三個段子首句 談二十五個單詞的超豪華的句子 ,談無論做大事還是小事 ,無論做難事還是容易事 ,都要這個積極現象 .第二個句子談有兩點建議讓它變的更好 .第三個句子談讓它變的更好的第一個方法 ,通常發(fā)揮它的好處 ,避免壞處 .第四個句子談第二個方法 ,第五個句子談個諺語 ,第六個談解決任務的任重道遠 .第七個倒裝句談只要有這個積極現象就會享受一個美好 ,豐富和有活力的未來 . 文章以團隊精神為例子 (1)As is vividly depicted in the picture,(描述圖畫 ).(2) The most striking feature is(圖畫重點信息 ).(3)There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration. (1)As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings