【正文】 , the fact that(重復(fù)上面的圖畫信息 ) profoundly indicates that team work is momentous (重要的 ) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. (2)Undoubtedly, it is team work that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty, that makes us still full of energy to face the ing challenges and petition and that offers us the foundation for the ing success. (3)If we don not cooperate sincerely, we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated or feel loss of hope about the future. (4)As far as I am concerned, there are several advantages that can be given as below. To begin with, nothing is more beneficial than team work to overe our defects and improve our efficiency. (5)Secondly, no issue is as good as team work to make our life more colorful and energetic.(6)No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. (7)A person who is assigned various jobs along the production lines will make a mess just because no one can be proficient in all the things. (8)Only by cooperating with other people can you put your capacities into full play and can you be the winner in the society. (1)From what have been discussed above,it admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to involve yourself into a team work. (2)It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make your team work more efficient. (3)On the one hand, we should be sensible to be receptive to other people’ s opinions and benefits. (4)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be always helpful and honest to other people.(5) However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. (6)Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later. 人類社會(huì)的永恒話題 , 對比論述突出好處 ,比如堅(jiān)持不懈 , 打敗自我 ,團(tuán)隊(duì)精神 ,為人真誠 ,實(shí)事求是從正面列舉該積極事物的好處 ,克服困難 , 征服挑戰(zhàn) , 完善自我 ,走向成功 ,創(chuàng)造輝煌從反面列舉沒有這 3 個(gè)積極事物時(shí)的不好 , 郁悶迷茫 , 無成就感和前進(jìn)動(dòng)力 , 失敗挫折感最后要談兩點(diǎn)建議措施和聯(lián)想美好未來 話題：堅(jiān)持不懈 在失敗的時(shí)候堅(jiān)持 , 做好每一件小事為成功做好準(zhǔn)備 . 首段：四句話，描述圖畫，表明圖畫發(fā)人深思。此萬能句子是任何積極事物都可以幫助我們克服困難 ,征服挑戰(zhàn) ,走向成功 . Unless we stick to our dream,(適當(dāng)把主題詞進(jìn)行同義替換 )we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated, only to be eliminated. 雙重否定句子從反面論證宏觀說明危害性，如果缺乏該積極事物就生活郁悶挫折被競爭所淘汰。此句很萬能，表明只有該積極事物讓我們永遠(yuǎn)成功； 三： 5— 6 句話，承上啟下總結(jié)上文，兩點(diǎn)建議，展望美好未來 From what have been discussed above, It admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to persevere than to despair. From 。想成功 但失敗因?yàn)樗麄儾荒軋?jiān)持特別是遇到困難的時(shí)候， Only by being perseverant can they guarantee a success and have a strong will to always challenge 倒裝并列句在段落末尾寫，增加氣勢，第二段結(jié)尾很重要，不要晚節(jié)不保。該段首句設(shè)置爆發(fā)力句型，增加氣勢，讓老師給出很高的第一印象分，借此開頭很有特色。 第二段七個(gè)句子 ,首先第一句從宏觀上談這種現(xiàn)象的總的有兩到三個(gè)點(diǎn)危害或者原因 ,第二句談這個(gè)現(xiàn)象的第一個(gè)危害 ,用 “ not only, but also”的五星 級(jí)句子 ,通常是談對個(gè)人身心健康的危害性 , 第三個(gè)句子談第二個(gè)危害 ,通常是用一個(gè)豪華級(jí)的比較級(jí)的句子 ,讓老師耳目一新 ,通常是談這個(gè)現(xiàn)象對社會(huì)的危害 .第四個(gè)句子談對家庭或?qū)W校的危害 .第五個(gè)句子談一個(gè)代替 “ for example”的十五個(gè)單詞的好句子 ,意思是說沒有更好的例子來證明正如下文 .第六個(gè)句子是例子群體的出現(xiàn) ,談根據(jù)一項(xiàng)調(diào)查表明 ,80%以上的人只要從事經(jīng)歷過這個(gè)消極的現(xiàn)象一定會(huì)對個(gè)人在精神和生活上有危害 .最后一句話是預(yù)測趨勢的二十五個(gè)單詞的鉆石級(jí)的句子 ,談以下預(yù)測趨勢 ,表明這種現(xiàn)象再這樣下去 ,就會(huì)導(dǎo)致惡劣 的結(jié)果出現(xiàn) ,甚至是毀滅性的后果。關(guān)于萬能模式的幾個(gè)問題： 一、我們選用的句子的靈活性強(qiáng)，經(jīng)過了精心的選擇 二、句型都是五星級(jí) ,并在開頭和長短句子方面有設(shè)計(jì) ,并注意語法的豐富 ,每句話語法都不同 . 三、我們選的句子與市面的任何資料都 不同 四、很多同學(xué)說寫的一樣是否是雷同，不大可能，因?yàn)楹茈y分到一個(gè)考場批判危害性的框架 總共寫十七個(gè)句子