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3. ……(自由發(fā)揮)現(xiàn)狀 1. 作業(yè)多,無良好讀書習(xí)慣 2. 不知道讀什么書,不會選擇倡議 ……(至少兩點(diǎn))注意:1. 詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開頭已為你寫好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);2. 短文須包括所有要點(diǎn),不要逐詞翻譯,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使短文連貫、通順;3. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。Dear classmates,Reading is very important in our daily life. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’s start reading now!【答案】Reading is very important in our daily life. First of all,reading will/can help us get knowledge from all kinds of books.It can also help to open up a whole new world to us.Second,reading will/can make us clever and happy.It is good for our study and it can help us grow up.Third,reading can help us think more and further and make our life more colourful. However,there is usually so much homework for us to do that we don39。t have enough time for reading.Moreover,some of us don39。t have a good habit of reading but often spend too much time watching TV and searching the Internet. In my opinion,our school can have aReading Weekonce a term.Teachers should encourage students to borrow books from the library.We must spend more time reading some useful books.As a result,we can have a better future. Let39。s start reading now!【解析】亮點(diǎn)說明:這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰,內(nèi)容飽滿,表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語,例如first of all,all kinds of books,help to do,be good for,more and further,so much,spend too much time doing,search the Internet,in my opinion,as a result等。同時First of all,/ Second,/ Third等時間副詞和However/ Moreover / As a result等結(jié)構(gòu)副詞的運(yùn)用,既使文章的思路清晰、層次分明,還豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容,使表達(dá)多樣,是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛:書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。4.書面表達(dá)根據(jù)要求完成短文寫作,請將作文寫在答題卡指定的位置上。每年春節(jié),每個孩子都能收到來自長輩的壓歲錢(lucky money)。隨著生活水平的提高,大部分孩子得到越來越多的壓歲錢,有些甚至通過微信(WeChat)或支付寶(Alipay)收壓歲錢。同學(xué)們該如何管理自己的錢,讓自己的錢用得更有意義?請結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際寫一篇文章,詞數(shù) 80 詞以上,文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名和人名。內(nèi)容包括如下:1. 你的壓歲錢的來源和用途;2. 對合理使用壓歲錢的建議(至少 3 點(diǎn));3. 呼吁大家節(jié)約用錢,把自己的壓歲錢用在最需要、最有意義的地方?!敬鸢浮縀very Spring Festival I receive a lot of lucky money from my parents and relatives. Now I even get it through WeChat or Alipay. I usually buy some of my favorite books, school things and some fancy clothes. Sometimes I also buy some gifts for my parents.In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games. Second, it is a good idea to buy something useful for our parents or teachers so that we can show our love to them. What is more, why not donate our lucky money to the poor kids in need? Helping others makes us happy.All in all, let us manage our lucky money properly. We should use our money in a meaningful way.【解析】【詳解】每年春節(jié),每個孩子都能收到來自長輩的壓歲錢(luckymoney)。隨著生活水平的提高,大部分孩子得到越來越多的壓歲錢,有些甚至通過微信(WeChat)或支付寶(Alipay)收壓歲錢。同學(xué)們該如何管理自己的錢,讓自己的錢用得更有意義?這是一篇給材料作文,本題所給材料比較詳細(xì),寫作中注意將所給內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來,不能逐字翻譯。通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱,時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài),注意謂語動詞的變化。動筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡單提綱,寫作中注意語義通順,符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞?!军c(diǎn)睛】文章使用了很好的短語和句子:In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video 。5. 近年來霧霾天氣在中國許多城市頻頻發(fā)生。霧霾天氣引起大家極大的關(guān)注。請你用英語寫一篇有關(guān)霧霾的短文向??坝⒄Z角”投稿,內(nèi)容包括:1. 霧霾的危害 2. 霧霾產(chǎn)生的原因(2個) 3. 應(yīng)對霧霾的措施(3個)提示:霧霾 smog poisonous 有毒的注意:1. 詞數(shù)110左右; 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫; 3. 開頭語已為你寫好(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________