【正文】 英語寫一篇短文，并發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)?，F(xiàn) 狀大約70%學(xué)生眼睛近視主要原因1. 睡眠不足2. 長時(shí)間看書、做作業(yè)、用電腦等預(yù)防方法1. 做眼睛保健操，多進(jìn)行體育活動(dòng)2. 養(yǎng)成正確的用眼習(xí)慣你的觀點(diǎn)… ….（至少一條）參考詞匯：近視的 shortsighted要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80～100個(gè)。（2）開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。The survey shows that many students have bee shortsighted at a very young age. At present,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The survey shows that many students have bee shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes.Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use puters for a long time.In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表作文。根據(jù)題干要求可知，本篇文章主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)寫作，人稱用第三人稱復(fù)數(shù)和第一人稱。內(nèi)容包括：學(xué)生近視原因：（not enough）、做作業(yè)、用電腦等（for a long time）防止近視的方法：，多進(jìn)行體育活動(dòng)（eye exercises）（have the good habit of）個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)：如：我認(rèn)為，我們應(yīng)該了解保護(hù)眼睛的重要性，盡最大努力保護(hù)我們的眼睛。（I think ???；try one39。s best to do sth.）。常用的重點(diǎn)句型和短語有：sb. spend some time doing sth.，in order to do sth.，try to do sth.，the importance of…等。4．書面表達(dá)每年的4月23日是世界讀書日，這個(gè)紀(jì)念日的意義在于推動(dòng)更多人去閱讀。假如你校將開展“讀好書，促成長”活動(dòng)，請你根據(jù)這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)的主題，向全校同學(xué)發(fā)出倡議。讀書的意義 1. 獲取知識，開闊視野 2. 使人愉悅，益于學(xué)習(xí) 3. ……（自由發(fā)揮）現(xiàn)狀 1. 作業(yè)多，無良好讀書習(xí)慣 2. 不知道讀什么書，不會(huì)選擇倡議 ……（至少兩點(diǎn)）注意：1. 詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2. 短文須包括所有要點(diǎn)，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；3. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。Dear classmates,Reading is very important in our daily life. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’s start reading now!【答案】Reading is very important in our daily life． First of all，reading will/can help us get knowledge from all kinds of books．It can also help to open up a whole new world to us．Second，reading will/can make us clever and happy．It is good for our study and it can help us grow up．Third，reading can help us think more and further and make our life more colourful． However，there is usually so much homework for us to do that we don39。t have enough time for reading．Moreover，some of us don39。t have a good habit of reading but often spend too much time watching TV and searching the Internet． In my opinion，our school can have aReading Weekonce a term．Teachers should encourage students to borrow books from the library．We must spend more time reading some useful books．As a result，we can have a better future． Let39。s start reading now!【解析】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如first of all，all kinds of books，help to do，be good for，more and further，so much，spend too much time doing，search the Internet，in my opinion，as a result等。同時(shí)First of all，/ Second，/ Third等時(shí)間副詞和However/ Moreover