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books. Li Hua【解析】【詳解】題干解讀:該題目屬于應(yīng)用文寫作,但寫作時要按照應(yīng)用文格式寫,寫作時承接短文開頭,寫出對學(xué)生的倡議。例文點評:例文采用的是一段式,寫的是閱讀的好處,時態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時,描述倡議時,描寫細(xì)致,條理清晰。高分亮點:短語:Firstly;Secondly;Finally;a good way to do sth;broaden our knowledge and horizon。句型:reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills;reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future。7.為了宣傳和弘揚中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化, 某雙語雜志將舉辦征文活動來介紹中國的經(jīng)典故事, “程門立雪(Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully)”是其中一個選題。請你根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容提示, 用英語寫一篇短文參加此活動。內(nèi)容提示:1. 楊時去拜見老師程頤一老師在睡覺一楊時在雪地等一老師醒來發(fā)現(xiàn)楊時在門口2. 通過介紹這個故事, 發(fā)表你的看法或者觀點。要求:1. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié), 以使行文連貫:詞數(shù):100左右. 2. 不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實名稱、老師和同學(xué)的真實姓名?!敬鸢浮縇ong long ago, there was a man called Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher, Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was sleeping in the room. He didn’t wake up the teacher. So he stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and it was very cold. But yangshi still stood in the snow until Mr. Cheng woke up. When the teacher woke up, the snow was very deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, the teacher was moved deeply.After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文,主要介紹中國的經(jīng)典故事, “程門立雪(Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully)”。目的是宣傳和弘揚中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化。時態(tài)為一般過去時,靈活運用動詞的過去式。作文要包含材料上的所有信息,通過介紹這個故事,發(fā)表看法或者觀點。寫作時,避免漢語式英語。注意固定搭配及主謂一致的問題,例如:There was/ were...注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系,具有條理性。8. 朋友是我們生活的組成部分,他們總是在我們最需要幫助的時候陪伴我們。你最好的朋友是誰?你是怎么看待你們的友誼的?請以“My Best Friend ”為題,根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語短文。1. 簡要介紹你最好的朋友的外貌和性格。2. 介紹和你朋友之間發(fā)生的一件令人難忘的事;3. 你是怎樣看待你們之間的友誼的要求:1. 語句連貫通順,文章銜接緊密2. 詞數(shù)801003. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實校名及姓名Friends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My best friendFriends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need. Everyone needs friends to talk with and get confidence from.My best friend is Jenny. She is a quiet girl. She is always friendly and helpful. She is a tall girl with long hair. She does well in all the subjects and gets on well with others at school.I was weak in maths. One day, I failed in maths exam. I was so sad that I couldn’t help crying. Jenny encouraged me a lot. From then on, she helped me with my maths, With her help, I got an A in the next maths exam. I was really thankful to her.I think friendship is a necessary part of our lives. I want to keep our friendship forever.【解析】【詳解】試題分析:這是一個提綱作文。題目給出了標(biāo)題及寫作要點。根據(jù)題目要求可知,人稱以第三人稱為主。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時。我們要做的就是用正確的英語句子來組織這些材料,在描寫外貌和性格時,會用到系表結(jié)構(gòu),注意主謂一致關(guān)系。介紹發(fā)生的一件難忘的事情,要用到一般過去時態(tài)。另外在寫作時可以適當(dāng)使用一些連詞,使之上下連貫,合乎邏輯。【點睛】人物介紹是記敘文中常見的一種寫作類型。內(nèi)容可以是介紹自己也可以介紹他人,包括姓名、年齡、外貌特征、興趣愛好,有時也可以包括日?;顒印r態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)