【正文】 【點(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。11．（江蘇中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)無(wú)錫被評(píng)為內(nèi)地最宜居城市。假設(shè)你班對(duì)此進(jìn)行了一次班級(jí)討論，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)討論主題并結(jié)合所給信息，以“Be a Beautiful City”為題寫(xiě)一份發(fā)言稿，號(hào)召?gòu)V大學(xué)生為建設(shè)美好城市作貢獻(xiàn)。內(nèi)容提示如下：1．政府修建了很多新路、大橋，甚至還有地鐵；2．新添了很多露天開(kāi)放公園，每到周末和節(jié)假日，人們常常去那里野餐，游玩；3．私家車(chē)越來(lái)越多，停車(chē)已成了大問(wèn)題；4．城市變化有利有弊；5．你的希望：……注意事項(xiàng)：1．發(fā)言稿須包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫；2．第5個(gè)要點(diǎn)須用2至3句話展開(kāi)合理想象。作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3．詞數(shù)90左右，發(fā)言稿的開(kāi)頭已在答題卡上給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4．發(fā)言稿內(nèi)容必須寫(xiě)在答題卡指定的位置上。Be a Beautiful CityThere have been great changes in Wuxi in the past few years．____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Be a Beautiful CityThere have been great changes in Wuxi in the past few years．The government has built lots of new roads, bridges and even undergrounds．There have been a number of open parks．People often go there to have a piic and have fun on weekends and holidays．More and more people have their own cars and it39。s being difficult to park cars．The changes have brought both advantages and disadvantages．I hope the government can deal with the problem．Our hometown can be more and more beautiful in the future．【解析】這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了大量短語(yǔ)，例如in the past few years，lots of，a number of，open parks，have a piic，have fun，on weekends and holidays，more and more，both …and，deal with the problem，in the future等。而More and more people have their own cars and it39。s being difficult to park cars./ Our hometown can be more and more beautiful in the and more句式結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，表達(dá)流暢，是短文的亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容可知用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，可把提示內(nèi)容結(jié)合實(shí)際展開(kāi)合理的想象，把它們拓展成一個(gè)個(gè)英文句子。還要注意在行文中使用一些常見(jiàn)的短語(yǔ)，會(huì)給習(xí)作增色。12．（曲靖市馬龍區(qū)通泉中學(xué)中考模擬）近年來(lái)，習(xí)近平主席提出了實(shí)現(xiàn)中華民族偉大復(fù)興的“中國(guó)夢(mèng)”。學(xué)校開(kāi)展了“夢(mèng)想少年”的主題演講活動(dòng)，假如你是張明，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提供的要點(diǎn)，以“I39。m a Dream Teenager”為題，寫(xiě)一篇80－100詞的短文，向大家推介自己。（可聯(lián)系實(shí)際，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮）注意：1．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名。提示詞語(yǔ)： good at ..with ...rules up popular with... to do something【答案】I39。m a Dream Teenager Good morning， dear teachers and friends， I am Zhang Ming． It39。s great honor for me to make a speech here． As a fifteenyearold boy， my dream is to be a good teacher． To make my dream e true， I study hard at school and I am good at all my subjects． Also， I am an outgoing and healthy boy who likes football very much， and I really enjoy sports． At school， I always follow the school rules， so I am popular with my classmates and teachers． On weekends， I39。d like to help people． For example， I volunteer to visit sick children in the hospital and cheer them up．In a word， I believe that the man who holds his dream will be able to achieve his dream one day． That39。s all． Thank you!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表作文。學(xué)校開(kāi)展“夢(mèng)想少年”的主題演講活動(dòng)，假如你是張明，要求根據(jù)圖表提示內(nèi)容，以“I39。m a Dream Teenager”為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文，向大家推介自己。根據(jù)所給出的材料提示可知文章時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)主要為第一、第三人稱(chēng)。首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作。在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要將圖表內(nèi)提示信息用英語(yǔ)正確的表達(dá)出來(lái)，要涵蓋圖表中提到的所有要點(diǎn)，注意理順要點(diǎn)，防止漏寫(xiě)。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。13．（黑龍江中考模擬）（B）圖示作文：根據(jù)圖畫(huà)內(nèi)容，展開(kāi)想象，寫(xiě)一篇小短文。小安是一名初三的學(xué)生，運(yùn)動(dòng)讓他的生活發(fā)生了巨大的變化。請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給圖畫(huà)，展開(kāi)適當(dāng)?shù)穆?lián)想，完成下面的短文。要求：（1）話題作文或圖示作文任選其一。（2）詞數(shù)在80?100詞之間。（3）要求字跡工整，語(yǔ)法正確，意思連貫，合乎邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮?！敬鸢浮縎port makes a differenceXiao An is a Grade 9 student. He used to be very weak and had to take a lot of medicine. He wanted to be as healthy as his classmates, so he decided to do sports.He joined Zhao Yang Football club and practiced hard there. Because of football, his life has changed a lot. He finds himself much healthier than before. Now, he has grown into a tall and strong guy. What’s more, he is very good at playing football. Last month, he took part in School Football Match and won the Best Player Award. Xiao An needn’t take a lot of medicine any more. Sport makes a great difference to his life.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于圖畫(huà)作文，表達(dá)運(yùn)動(dòng)讓小安的生活發(fā)生了巨大的變化。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如used to do, take medicine, as+形容詞原級(jí)+as, decide to do, because of, what’s more, be good at, take part in, not...any more以及make a great difference等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。14．（山東中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)。根據(jù)下列圖畫(huà)，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇約80詞的短文，要求敘述完整。 1 2 34 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】We had a class meeting and decided to go on a trip on the mountain on Sunday. We set off by bus at seven o’clock in the morning, and we got to the mountain at 8:00 . We felt very excited and began to climb the mountain. When we got to the top, we found a lot of rubbish there. So we picked them up with our bags and put them into dustbins. After about two hours, we cleaned there and made the mountain more beautiful. We were all tired but happy.【解析】【分析】這是一篇看圖作文，介紹我們?cè)谝淮闻郎竭^(guò)程中保護(hù)環(huán)境，撿拾垃圾?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱(chēng)為第一人稱(chēng)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：We felt……，When we got to……，we cleaned……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。【點(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了我們決定去爬山，接下來(lái)介紹我們?cè)谏巾斏习l(fā)現(xiàn)垃圾，然后撿拾垃圾，最后表達(dá)我們的感受。此處set off, get to, pick up, put...into…等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。15．（江蘇中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)流感季通常在每年的10月份到3月份爆發(fā)，據(jù)報(bào)道114個(gè)美國(guó)孩子在今年2月死于流感。流感季節(jié)我們應(yīng)該如何保持健康呢？易患病人群老人和孩子原因1. 免疫系統(tǒng)弱；2. 流感知識(shí)缺乏：流感病毒引起流感；口、鼻、手傳播；公共場(chǎng)所人與人近距離傳播；3. …… （至少1點(diǎn)）預(yù)防措施1. 多鍛煉；2. 注意保暖；3. …… （至少1點(diǎn)）要求:1. 所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容必須包括提供的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 文章不少于90詞，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3. 語(yǔ)意通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；4. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名等信息。參考詞匯：weaker immune systems （較弱的免疫系統(tǒng)