【正文】 詞數(shù)100左右。開頭語已為你寫好。文章行文活潑，感情真摯，語言表述準確，洋溢著作者因大熊貓得到精心照顧而對美方人員的感激之情，以及希望自己愿望成真，得到照片的希冀之情。積累卡片英漢互譯 ，快樂的 birth to ，生育好句I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the ，正是你們的努力工作讓蘇琳和它的父母在美國過著幸福和健康的生活。請你用英語為其 寫一篇文字介紹。：單人間(共20間)，100元/天。熱水淋浴。：全天免費開放。以使行文連貫。本文最大的特點是應用了很多比較復雜的句式，使文章比較出彩。which引導的非限制性定語從句的使用也很正確。積累卡片英漢互譯好詞 好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and arevery ，并且非常的愉快?！局貞c卷】【試題回放】據(jù)報道，7歲的美國女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后處于極度的痛苦之中，美國抗癌協(xié)會(ACS)決定，每當Amy收到一封慰問信，就給她增加3美分的治療款。Dear Amy，I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of ’m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great you should realize that you are young and have a promising great , stand up and fight against the disease!I’m sure you will is reported that the America anticancer association will donate three cents upon every fort letter you I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to that way, you will get enough money for you to be you can be well ，Li Hua[名師點評]本文依照要求，涵蓋了所有要點。作者對定語從句的使用恰到好處地修飾了文章，行文自然而通順，值得學習。好處：which引導限制性定語從句。,句式準確【江蘇卷】【試題回放】2007年4月29日上午10點到11點，全國億萬學生陽光體育活動在各地大中小學校同時進行，江蘇省1，100萬學生積極參與了這項活動。注意：發(fā)言稿應包括以上所有信息，要有適當發(fā)揮。發(fā)言稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。教育部——the Ministry of EducationGood afternoon, everyone，The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10：.~11: April 29，2007 in many primary and middle schools all over 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 whole life will be very my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is is a basic condition for our we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study every one of you, join the program now!Thank you!【名師點評】本文的結(jié)構(gòu)十分明晰，同時句式使用得熟練而準確。在句式使用上，作者用法多樣，使用了獨立結(jié)構(gòu)和虛擬語氣，十分出彩。積累卡片 Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 ，能夠健康地活50年。 we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study ，我們的學習成績就不會很好。第四篇：2015年高考英語滿分作文賞析2015年高考英語滿分作文賞析。假設你是李華，請給Jeff寫一封信，按照下圖順序介紹他來中國后的生活安排。第二，本文沒有采用華麗的辭藻，但用詞十分恰當，段落過渡自然，令人耳目一新。請你給她寫封回信，假如你是李華，美國一所友好學校準備與你們學校共同創(chuàng)辦一份中學生英文刊物，該校格林先生來信詢問有關情況。l 提出你喜歡的欄目。注意：。，以使行文連貫。由于這篇作文的出現(xiàn)，導致了安徽省該年的英語作文分數(shù)普遍偏低。比如說：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大膽運用，list, can39。英語能夠?qū)W到這種程度，不可謂不讓人佩服。注意：詞數(shù)不少于60提示詞：郊區(qū) suburbsApril 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the arrival, we began to work were digging were carrying and planting young were getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the leaving we took some photos to record our green the lines of trees, we all had a sense of feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.【名師點評】本文是設計巧妙的提綱要點式作文，與環(huán)保結(jié)合，立意較好?！颈本┚砀呖加⒄Z】【試題回放】開放作文請根據(jù)下面提示，寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)不少于50In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand an interesting picture!A western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a first glance, I think it’s a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating man in the picture is trying to copy he is doing it the hard using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we don’t need to copy others’ ways of a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.【名師點評】本文是開放性作文，要求考生把握好圖畫內(nèi)容，發(fā)散表達。行文結(jié)構(gòu)十分明晰，同時句式使用得熟練而準確?，F(xiàn)在蘇琳即將三歲。祝賀蘇琳生日。索取蘇琳三歲生日照。可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。例文：Dear Sir/Madam，Greetings from China!I’m Li Hua, a student in ’ve been a panda lover since I was a three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website,.Now she’s going to be ’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in truly，Li Hua【名師點評】本文寫作的內(nèi)容要點如下：。這封信格式正確，行文規(guī)范，描述有條不紊，稱呼、正文中的開頭及結(jié)尾、結(jié)束語均表達到位。長短句運用合理，結(jié)合了簡單句和復合句，流暢自然，不露痕跡，的確是一篇佳作。【高考英語全國卷II】【試題回放】一家賓館新開業(yè)，為吸引外國賓客，希望在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上進行宣傳。主要內(nèi)容包括：：距白山入口處500米。雙人間(共15間)，150元/天。：餐廳(中、西餐)，咖啡廳(茶、咖啡)。注意：，開頭語已為你寫好。Wele to Baishan Mountain Hotel!Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides singleperson room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per also provides hot water bath can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the swimming pool is open for free the whole these services can bring great convenience to you and are very e to enjoy yourself!Wele to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.【名師點評】本文開門見山，首先點明了主旨。開頭使用了獨立結(jié)構(gòu)交代賓館位置?？偟貋碚f，文章句式精煉，是篇不錯的滿分作文。評析：bring great convenience，帶來便利。假如你是新華中學的學生李華，請你用英文給Amy寫一封慰問信，主要內(nèi)容包括：自我介紹得知的情況表示鼓勵打算為她做什么祝她早日康復注意：。文章使用了高中常見的句式，如I’m sorry to hear that..., It is reported that...等，都比較好。積累卡片 m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great ，給你帶來了巨大的痛苦。, stand up and fight against the disease!因此，堅強地與疾病做斗爭吧!好處：擲地有聲，語言準確。教育部倡導學生：u 每天鍛煉一小時u 健康工作五十年u 幸福生活一輩子請你根據(jù)以上提示，用英語準備一份發(fā)言稿，向同學們講述一下陽光體育活動的有關情況，并就高三學生是否需要每天花一小時鍛煉，談談你的看法及理由。詞數(shù)：120左右。參考詞匯：陽光體育活動——a national student sports