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【正文】 inutes to write A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese： 1)簡單介紹個人情況 2)說明申請助學貸款的原因、數(shù)額 3)保證會合理利用貸款并表明還款的決心 A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 行文思路 本題屬于情景式命題，要求寫一封申請信。說明申請助學貸款的原因、數(shù)額。 高分范文 A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan Sep 12th, 2008 To whom it may concern, I am a freshman of Lianhe University, [1]majoring in Applied Physics. I am writing in the hope that I may obtain a bank loan to support my study in Applied Physics for the following four years. My parents are both laidoff workers, so it’s [2]beyond their power to finance me through the college education. [3]To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major operation. [4]Therefore, [5]with the college tuition being a much heavier burden on my family, I am pelled to apply a RMB20,000 bank loan. [6]I give you my promise that the loan would be used properly. [4]Meanwhile, I’ll [7]spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career in order to pay back the loan. I would be greatly obliged if my application is granted. And I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Sincerely yours, Song Xue 【亮點點評】 [1]“主修…”，現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語。 [3]“使事情更糟糕的是”。 [5]“with+賓語+賓補”的獨立結構。 [7]“不遺余力”。 ___________________________________________________________________________. ?。篢herefore, the college tuition being a much heavier burden on my family, I am pelled to apply a RMB20,000 bank loan. 臨摩：由于周圍交通不便利，人們只得步行回家。 5
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