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clude, we should focus on improving our ability [10]but not getting a certificate of no practical value. 【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng)】 [1]祈使句使用恰當(dāng)。 [8]“當(dāng)談到或提及…時(shí)”。 [4]The following reasons can account for college students’ preference for famous brands. [2]Above all, in many college students’ eyes, a famous brand is a symbol of sophistication and taste. They expect others to admire their high class and good taste. [2]What’s more, in modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, [5]which has a great attraction to young college students. [2]Besides, parents’ spoiling their children helps form their bad consumption habit.beyond表示“超出…范圍”。 [4]過(guò)渡銜接詞語(yǔ),使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。 ___________________________________________________________________________. ?。篗eanwhile, I’ll spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career in order to pay back the loan. 臨摩:全國(guó)人民都不遺余力地支持北京舉辦奧運(yùn)會(huì)。 [2]“超出…的能力范圍”。 臨摹:很多同學(xué)經(jīng)常玩電腦游戲,這是浪費(fèi)時(shí)間,而不是一種有益的放松方式。 臨?。簩?duì)大學(xué)生來(lái)說(shuō),了解校園以外的世界是非常必要的。 [4]用于引出原因。 [1]“有…傾向”。 Nowadays many college students like to pursue famous brands. From clothes to mobile phones, even study articles like electronic dictionaries and pens, they [1]are inclined to buy famous brands. [2]Moreover, many students from poor families begin to [3]follow this consumption trend as well. This phenomenon has aroused wide attention.分析大學(xué)生熱衷名牌的原因。 ___________________________________________________________________________. :From my point of view, we should be more rational when it es to certificates. 臨摩:我認(rèn)為,對(duì)于我們來(lái)說(shuō),更重要的是盡可能提高自己的能力而不是獲得更多的證書。 [6]which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句,充當(dāng)介詞賓語(yǔ)。分析越來(lái)越多的大學(xué)生熱衷考取各種證書的主要原因。The World Expo in 2010(世博會(huì))英文作文 根據(jù)所給提綱,本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容:描述近幾年大學(xué)校園內(nèi)的“考證熱”。 [5]強(qiáng)調(diào)句型,此處是強(qiáng)調(diào)主語(yǔ)。 ___________________________________________________________________________. :Diploma a