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【正文】 n recent years, getting a certificate has bee a new craze among college students. [1]Just randomly ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing, [2]quite possibly, you may get the answer [3]that he or she is preparing for a certificate [2]of some kind. [4]Why does this craze appear? [4]There are mainly two reasons behind this phenomenon. First, [5]it is the employment pressure that forces college students to get more certificates. With the admission expansion of colleges, a lot more graduates have to face the fierce petition in the job market. How can one make himself more petitive? More certificates at hand, maybe. Second, diploma and certificates are still important standards [6]by which many employers measure a person’s ability. In order to increase the qualifications for a job, the students pel themselves to run from one exam to another. [7]From my point of view, we should be more rational [8]when it es to certificates, [9]since certificates [2]do not necessarily prove one’s ability. Being crazy in getting certifications blindly is [10]nothing but wasting time. To conclude, we should focus on improving our ability [10]but not getting a certificate of no practical value. 【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評】 [1]祈使句使用恰當(dāng)。randomly意為“隨意地，隨機(jī)地”。 [2]限定詞使用恰當(dāng)，使文章表達(dá)更嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，增強(qiáng)了說服力。 [3]that引導(dǎo)同位語從句，修飾the idea。 [4]設(shè)問句引出原因，容易引起注意。 [5]強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，此處是強(qiáng)調(diào)主語。 [6]which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，充當(dāng)介詞賓語。 [7]用于引出“我”的觀點(diǎn)。 [8]“當(dāng)談到或提及…時(shí)”。 [9]since引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句，表示既定的原因，常譯為“既然”。 [10]“只是，僅僅”?！岸皇恰?。 佳句臨摩 ：You may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind. 臨摩：離婚率上升盡管令人難過，但卻是不爭的事實(shí)。 ___________________________________________________________________________. ?。篋iploma and certificates are still important standards by which many employers measure a person’s ability. 臨摩： 在過去的三十年，發(fā)展中國家在許多方面都取得了很大的進(jìn)步，其中包括健康水平的提高。 ________________________________________________
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