【正文】 ike sharing face to face while others prefer to share online like or Wechat.Once, I failed in a Math test. I had difficulty cheering myself up, but I realized keeping worries to myself would make it worse. After sharing it with my friend, I felt much better. Moreover, his words encouraged me a lot. In my opinion, sharing is really helpful. It can bring us more joy and provide us with useful suggestions.【解析】此篇書面表達(dá)的話題是“分享”。最后，我們還要注意“分享”的情感教育，讓我們學(xué)有所獲。在寫作的時(shí)候，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。最后必須認(rèn)真檢查是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】本文是一篇給材料作文，要求就學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備組織學(xué)生本周五去中國(guó)科技博物館參觀的事情，寫一封郵件，邀請(qǐng)交換生Peter參加。寫作要點(diǎn)包括：活動(dòng)的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、活動(dòng)內(nèi)容，以及參觀時(shí)需要準(zhǔn)備什么。同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。5．My dear friends,Reading is very important in our life. We can gain knowledge through reading. It c解析：My dear friends,Reading is very important in our life. We can gain knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds but also make us cleverer and happier. Our study can be improved if we read more books. Reading also helps us grow as a person. However, it’s a great pity that many activities such as listening to music, watching TV and going online take up much of our reading time. So here, I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books and read good books. It will do us good!Let’s start reading now!【解析】本文是一篇倡議書。內(nèi)容包括讀書的意義、大部分學(xué)生目前的狀況、最后發(fā)出倡議。本文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體，考生需要把所提示的內(nèi)容逐條翻譯成英文，要涵蓋提示內(nèi)容的所有要點(diǎn)，同時(shí)注意理順要點(diǎn)，防止漏寫。6．How time files! My colorful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think of about myse解析：How time files! My colorful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think of about myself.In the past three years, I have learnt a lot of knowledge. I was really grateful to our teachers for their help. I got on well with my classmates. We learned from each other. I had any interests such as reading books, drawing pictures and so on. However, I was not good at sports. Sometimes I was late for school. The teachers were very angry with me.In the future, I will have more sports and try to plan my time carefully. I’ll try my best to do better.【解析】1. 接著正文寫下來，將所給要點(diǎn)翻譯出來，分三部分來寫，寫出“三年所得、三年所失、未來的打算。在過去In the past，學(xué)到了很多知識(shí)learn a lot of knowledge, 對(duì)某人感激be grateful to sb, 對(duì)我們的老師感激be grateful to our teachers，和同學(xué)相處得很好get on well with my classmates, 互相學(xué)習(xí)，彼此幫助help each other and learn from each students, 盡自己最大的努力try my best to do, 上學(xué)遲到be late for school不太愛好體育運(yùn)動(dòng)I am not good at sports，在未來In the future…，簡(jiǎn)要寫出自己對(duì)未來的規(guī)劃。4. 最后一項(xiàng)對(duì)未來的規(guī)劃，既是對(duì)所得所失的理解，也是對(duì)未來的展望。7．Learn to SmileSmile is an attitude to life．In our life, there may be something unpleasant．For exam解析：Learn to SmileSmile is an attitude to life．In our life, there may be something unpleasant．For example, we may fail in an exam or we may be laughed at for some reason．These unpleasant things may make us feel bad．Why not learn to smile? Smiling to ourselves can cheer us up and bring back our confidence．It can also make us forget our worries．We should also learn to smile to others．It will help us to get closer to each other and bring us friendship．So, smile is a language that everyone can easily understand．【解析】這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。同時(shí)Why not learn to smile? / Smiling to ourselves can cheer us up and bring back our confidence./ It will help us to get closer to each other and bring us ，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，條理清晰，表達(dá)流暢，是短文的亮點(diǎn)。還要注意在行文中使用一些常見的短語，會(huì)給習(xí)作增色。結(jié)合所給的材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)，以第一人稱為主，要注意主謂一致，所寫的句子要符合英語語法，用自己熟悉的單詞和句式來寫。用了短語和句式，如：graduate from畢業(yè)于；share sth with sb和某人分享某事；wait for等候等，用來一些過渡詞或短語，如：Firstly, Secondly,In other words, At last等，上下文銜接很自然。這是一篇開放性的作文，題目中只給出了話題和大概的一個(gè)提綱，具體的寫作內(nèi)容需要我們自己思考，發(fā)揮想象力來充實(shí)完成。這是寫作中的一個(gè)難點(diǎn)。另外還應(yīng)注意語句之間的連接，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞或副詞，使文意銜接緊密、意思連貫。首先短文內(nèi)容完整、充實(shí)。短文中作者結(jié)合了自己日常生活中的所作所為，使文章的內(nèi)容非常真實(shí)。語法規(guī)范，句式表達(dá)符合英語的習(xí)慣。這些較好的句型和短語有We should build a harmonious class, because it’s important for us to grow up happily.、When I have some problems, I always talk to them and listen to their advice. 、When some of my classmates are sad, I’m always ready to give a hand and cheer them up.、I’m really good at English, but some of my classmates aren’t. I will help 。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如first of all，grow up，grow older，marry with，burden on，have to do， take care of，by oneself，have no playmate，the number of等。點(diǎn)睛：書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。 sometimes we are a little over confident. And many students have no brothers or sisters, so they may do everything for themselves. These problems may make us seem impolite, even we can’t municate with others well. So it’s the most important for us to learn how to get on well with others.【解析】本文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含題目中所提供的所有信息。語言力求準(zhǔn)確，簡(jiǎn)潔。點(diǎn)睛：這篇文章使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如in trouble；do sports；On the other hand ；municate with等；When；Besides ；And ；So等的運(yùn)用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理；同時(shí)語言流暢，內(nèi)容完整，是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)主題組織材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容，列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、關(guān)鍵單詞等問題。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，做到語句通順。還要注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意文后要表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)和想法。本文恰當(dāng)使用了had a discussion about，share parents’ love with，because of，play with, however，also, be good to等詞（組）。13．It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s a good way to get clo解析：It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s a good way to get close to nature.When we are outdoors and in the natural world, we can not only breathe fresh air and enjoy the beautiful scene, but also relax ourselves for the ing study or work.There are many different ways we can get out into the natural world, such as hiking, cycling, camping and climbing. Cycling is my favourite. I join a cycling club, and often go out with other members. While cycling, we can forget our worries and have fun together. Also, we can learn to be a part of a team and help each other.Whatever you do, remember to stay safe. When you’re outside, it’s better to be with your parents or friends.【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)以“outdoor activities”為話題，結(jié)合所給的寫作材料，寫一篇報(bào)刊征文稿。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，最后最好要表達(dá)出人物的感想