【正文】 詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。修改潤(rùn)色。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。安徽中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)共享單車(chē)為我們的生活帶來(lái)了極大的便利。請(qǐng)你給Jim回信，內(nèi)容包括：1. 這種單車(chē)的使用方法（如：APP查看車(chē)輛、掃碼開(kāi)鎖等）；2. 這種單車(chē)的優(yōu)勢(shì)；3. 你對(duì)這種單車(chē)的看法。參考詞匯：智能手機(jī)smartphone；掃碼scan the QR code；交通工具a means of transportation。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。北京中考模擬）某英文網(wǎng)站正在開(kāi)展以“我最喜歡的中華傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。提示詞語(yǔ):festival，get together, enjoy，moon cakes，harvest time提示問(wèn)題: What39。根據(jù)所提供的提示詞語(yǔ)可知，要求介紹中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日：中秋節(jié)。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)為第一人稱(chēng)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)把所給的提示問(wèn)題回答清楚就行。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。由and連接的并列句。句子中運(yùn)用了not only…… but also……，還有because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句。四川成都外國(guó)語(yǔ)學(xué)校中考模擬）Writing.In the past, most Chinese families have got one child in them. But recently, the government has relaxed the family planning policy, which means each couple are allowed to have two children. Would you like to have a brother or a sister who grows up together with you?Now please write a passage of about 80120 words to introduce your opinion. The following points should be included:1. Is it necessary for a family to have more than one child? Give at least two reasons for it.2. What’s the situation in your family? Are you the only child or not? List what makes you happy and unhappy.3. Give at least two suggestions to the families with two children.【答案】First of all, twochild policy is the gift for some only some families. maybe the parents are only child and they can also have only child. Put aside the loneliness of their child, when their child grows up and they grow older, their child may marry with an only child girl accidentally, the burden on their child and his wife is unimaginable heavy. Their child and his wife have to take care of two old couples.In my family ,my parents have a only child. I also have some happy can enjoy some delicious food by myself. But I have no playmate in my family. Sometimes. I may feel lonely.If parents have two children, they can share the burden of taking care of their parents. It would be much better. Also, twochild policy can guarantee the number of Chinese population.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。而For some families. maybe the parents are only child and they can also have only child. / when their child grows up and they grow older, their child may marry with an only child girl accidentally,/ It would be much ，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。15．（原因： 看法與建議：； ，學(xué)習(xí)發(fā)奮； 。________________________________________________________________________________【答案】At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habitcheating in examinations.There are three main reasons. First, schools have given students too many exams, some of which are too difficult. Second, some students are not hardworking and they don39。t enough time to prepare for the exams. Finally, students have to do so to make their teachers and parents happy.In my opinion, cheating in exams does great harm to our study. We students should be honest and diligent, and only in this way can we improve our study and make progress. Besides, our teachers should offer us fewer exams and more time to study for ourselves.【解析】寫(xiě)作分析：本文需要就考試作弊這一主題展開(kāi)討論。寫(xiě)完原因后還要提出自己的看法和建議，具體內(nèi)容也已給出：；，學(xué)習(xí)發(fā)奮；。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：第一段總起描述了現(xiàn)在存在的作弊現(xiàn)象，用到了一些較好的短語(yǔ)，如picked up a bad habit（養(yǎng)成了一個(gè)壞習(xí)慣）。一些短語(yǔ)運(yùn)用準(zhǔn)確，如waste a lot of time playing games（浪費(fèi)時(shí)間在玩游戲上），prepare for the exams（準(zhǔn)備考試）。總體來(lái)說(shuō)文章寫(xiě)作較為流暢，有許多亮點(diǎn)。江蘇中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)。就此，你班展開(kāi)討論美麗連云港應(yīng)該從何做起，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，并談?wù)勛约旱挠^點(diǎn)。Make Lianyungang More BeautifulWith the development of Lianyungang, more and more families have their own cars.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Make Lianyungang More BeautifulWith the development of Lianyungang, more and more families have their own cars. As a result, there is too much traffic on the road and the air pollution bees worse and worse. It has bee impossible for us to see the clear sky as often as before. This not only has a bad effect on our daily life but also does harm to our health. It39。s more, more trees and grass should be planted to reduce the pollution.. If we try our best, I believe in the future we will have more clear days and clean rivers. Let39。需要注意的是正確使用相關(guān)短語(yǔ)表達(dá)和時(shí)態(tài)，尤其是在描述展望未來(lái)時(shí)需要借助將來(lái)時(shí)，各個(gè)部分之間要注意合理連接，保證文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語(yǔ)言連貫。在銜接下一部分“采取措施”時(shí)，用了一句話過(guò)度，Therefore, action should be taken to deal with this problem.（因此，應(yīng)該采取行動(dòng)來(lái)解決這個(gè)問(wèn)題。s work together to do讓我們一起來(lái)做…這樣的句型，總體來(lái)說(shuō)文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，完成了要求的寫(xiě)作任務(wù)。江蘇中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)每年的4月23日是世界讀書(shū)日，這個(gè)紀(jì)念日的意義在于推動(dòng)更多人去閱讀。讀書(shū)的意義 1. 獲取知識(shí)，開(kāi)闊視野 2. 使人愉悅，益于學(xué)習(xí) 3. ……（自由發(fā)揮）現(xiàn)狀 1. 作業(yè)多，無(wú)良好讀書(shū)習(xí)慣 2. 不知道讀什么書(shū)，不會(huì)選擇倡議 ……（至少兩點(diǎn)）注意：1. 詞數(shù)90左右。Dear classmates,Reading is very important in our daily life. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’s start reading now!【答案】Reading is very important in our daily life． First of all，reading will/can help us get knowledge from all kinds of books．It can also help to open up a whole new world to us．Second，reading will/can make us clever and happy．It is good for our study and it can help us grow up．Third，reading can help us think more and further and make our life more colourful． However，there is usually so much homework for us to do that we don39。t have a good habit of reading but often spend too much time watching TV and searching the Inte