【正文】 school life in Grade NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.At school, all of our teachers work very hard. Most of them are patient enough to help us with all kinds of problems, whether in our study or in our life. As a result, they won high respect from us.As for students, in class we listen to the teacher carefully and think actively. After class, we are busy doing our homework. Every student is making efforts to try to achieve our dreams.At weekends, we usually spend a lot of time doing our homework, too. So we can39。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)，例如at school，work hard，most of，patient enough，help sb. with sth.，all kinds of problems，in our life，as a result，as for students，listen to，be busy doing，try to do，spend a lot of time doing，not any more，play basketball等。點(diǎn)睛：書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。北京中考模擬）為了幫助同學(xué)們樹(shù)立集體觀念和提高班級(jí)責(zé)任感，你校英文報(bào)刊正在以“ Building a Harmonious Class” （創(chuàng)建和諧班級(jí)）為題征文，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，談?wù)劙嗉?jí)成 員應(yīng)該如何創(chuàng)建一個(gè)和諧的班集體，作為一名成員，你通常是怎么做的，以及還需要再做些什么。這是一篇開(kāi)放性的作文，題目中只給出了話題和大概的一個(gè)提綱，具體的寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容需要我們自己思考，發(fā)揮想象力來(lái)充實(shí)完成。這是寫(xiě)作中的一個(gè)難點(diǎn)。另外還應(yīng)注意語(yǔ)句之間的連接，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞或副詞，使文意銜接緊密、意思連貫。首先短文內(nèi)容完整、充實(shí)。短文中作者結(jié)合了自己日常生活中的所作所為，使文章的內(nèi)容非常真實(shí)。語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，句式表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)的習(xí)慣。這些較好的句型和短語(yǔ)有We should build a harmonious class, because it’s important for us to grow up happily.、When I have some problems, I always talk to them and listen to their advice. 、When some of my classmates are sad, I’m always ready to give a hand and cheer them up.、I’m really good at English, but some of my classmates aren’t. I will help 。廣東中考模擬）隨著社會(huì)的發(fā)展，通訊的方式從遠(yuǎn)古時(shí)代的書(shū)信到當(dāng)今的互聯(lián)網(wǎng)，經(jīng)歷著巨大的變化。內(nèi)容包括：1. 你喜歡使用的通訊方式有哪些？2. 它們的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)是什么？3. 你認(rèn)為使用現(xiàn)代通訊工具要注意什么？要求：1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的學(xué)校名稱(chēng)和姓名；2. 語(yǔ)意連貫，詞數(shù)80左右。As time goes by, there are many different kinds of munication methods now. As for me,【答案】As time goes by, there are many different kinds of munication methods now. As for me, I prefer to chat with others by mobile phone, but sometimes I chat by munication software, such as WeChat and .Mobile phones bring great convenience to people, but people can only hear the sound by phones. By using net software, we can easily see the people we talk to on the Internet. However, sometimes we concern more about mobile phones instead of the people around.In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the face to face munication and try not to waste too much time on mobile phones.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，談?wù)勎覍?duì)現(xiàn)代通訊工具的使用及看法。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。此處prefer to do sth, by phones, on the Internet, concern about, in one’s opinion, try one’ s best等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。北京中考模擬）我區(qū)正在全力創(chuàng)建全國(guó)文明城區(qū)。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文給某英文網(wǎng)站投稿，談?wù)勀銈內(nèi)チ四睦?，你做了什么，以及你的感受。s a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy. Our city should be kept clean every day. Don39。s good manners to say Thank you and Please and so on. We should never say dirty words. Be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus,we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies. We should also obey traffic rules. When the traffic lights are red, we should stop. And we39。動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；以提示的問(wèn)題作為寫(xiě)作的主線，重點(diǎn)從三個(gè)方面去寫(xiě)作：？？？結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱(chēng)，運(yùn)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。15．（要點(diǎn)如下：表示歡迎：有利于家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)展等；感到擔(dān)憂：造成環(huán)境污染等；希望了解有關(guān)環(huán)保措施及更多信息。注意：1．詞數(shù)80—100；2．請(qǐng)不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮以使行文連貫；3．郵件的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。m looking forward to hearing from you.Yours faithfully,John【解析】這是一篇提綱作文。注意電子郵件的格式，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)主要為第一人稱(chēng)。要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語(yǔ)法規(guī)則的正確性；文章必須涵蓋所提供的各個(gè)提綱要點(diǎn)，不要遺漏。作文完成后，應(yīng)該檢查、修改，以免遺漏需要表達(dá)的要點(diǎn)和細(xì)節(jié)。16．（學(xué)校英語(yǔ)?？队⒄Z(yǔ)天地》對(duì)此進(jìn)行調(diào)查，假如你是一名?？∮浾?，請(qǐng)你就此次調(diào)查的結(jié)果進(jìn)行總結(jié)，并談?wù)勀阕约旱挠^點(diǎn)。As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in . From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in . From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun. It can bring people closer , they can make more friends .Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives. About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets. They don’t have enough munication with their family members .They may feel a little lonelyPersonally, there39。s obvious that it is more convenient. However, as a saying goes, each coin has two sides. It is not an exception, it also has some bad effects. If people can39。s worse, it may lead to the crime.【解析】這篇作文要求我們對(duì)學(xué)校進(jìn)行的關(guān)于春節(jié)搶紅包這件事的調(diào)查結(jié)果進(jìn)行總結(jié)，并談?wù)勛约簩?duì)這件事情的看法。最后還要加上自己的看法。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不要逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，穿插并列句和復(fù)合句。語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文章整體意思連貫、表達(dá)流暢。首先短文內(nèi)容完整、結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。第二段中作者表述了支持和反對(duì)玩這個(gè)游戲的人們各自的理由；第三段中作者發(fā)表了自己的看法。文章以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，特別注意了謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確。s no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form.、If people can39。文章中也出現(xiàn)了一些語(yǔ)法上的小錯(cuò)誤，總的來(lái)說(shuō)，不影響整篇文章的質(zhì)量。天津中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá) 假設(shè)你叫李明，曾榮幸成為天津國(guó)際馬拉松賽的一名志愿者。（1）年4月國(guó)際馬拉松賽在天津舉行；（2）作為志愿者，賽前接受了培訓(xùn)；（3）在閑暇時(shí)間里，和運(yùn)動(dòng)員用英語(yǔ)交談，為他們提供幫助；（4）和許多運(yùn)動(dòng)員成為了朋友，也了解了許多不同的文化；（5）你認(rèn)為……參考詞匯：志愿者 volunteer要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80～100個(gè)。（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)，例如be glad to do，talk about，Tianjin International Marathon，hold on，in spare time，talk to，in English，at the same time，learn about，different cultures，be good for