【正文】 人稱，文章以第三人稱、一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主，語法規(guī)范，用詞準確，句式富于變化。s easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What39。正確文章行文連貫、語句通順、表達流暢。社會現(xiàn)狀自從出現(xiàn)，飽受贊譽?！澳愕挠^點”一欄用23句話展開合理想象，做適當發(fā)揮。Public bicycles are being more and more popular in our daily life. 【答案】Public bicycles are being more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared. Public bicycles have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it’s easy for us to get around on public bicycles. Also, Riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What’s more, using public bicycles costs so little that we can afford it. But there are some problems too. Some people can’t return public bicycles in time. Sometimes because public bicycles take up too much of the road, they are in our way. I think we should encourage more people to use public bicycles. After all, it’s a way of living a green life.【解析】這是一篇材料作文，要求給英文報社寫一篇投稿，介紹對共享單車看法。動筆前要認真審題，深入挖掘題材內(nèi)涵，不可遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。使用一些好的句型和短語，注意正確的時態(tài)和語態(tài)以及謂語動詞的形式，還需要注意英語表達和漢語習慣的不同，讓整篇短文表達流暢。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“Going Green”為主題的征文活動。提示詞語： pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action提示問題：● What are the main environmental problems we have?● What can we do in our daily life? ● What’s your wish?Now there are many environmental 【答案】例文Now there are many environmental problems. Such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to school by bike or on foot. We can use less water by turning off the tap while we brush our teeth, and taking shorter showers. When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins. I hope everyone can take action. Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference. Let’s work together to make a better place to live.【解析】【詳解】題干解讀：該題目屬于說明文寫作，寫作時要把我們面臨的主要環(huán)境問題是什么，為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么，以及你的期望全部包括。高分亮點：短語：save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference?！军c睛】首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達，例如save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。9． 假如你是李華，你的英國筆友 Jack 給你寫郵件表達了想?yún)⒓幽阈Ｊ钇跒橥鈬鴮W生舉辦的漢語夏令營的愿望，希望你告知活動舉辦的具體時間地點，活動安排以及你的建議。學生除了要把所給要點提示都表達出來外，還要進行適當拓展，使文章內(nèi)容充實。文章時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。：短語：as follows，take part in，What’s more，look forward to。10．你是一位九年級的學生李明，你用英語寫一封郵件給你的筆友Amy，感謝她對你關心，并告訴她目前你在全力以赴為中考而學習，并與她交流一下目前的學習和生活情況。你認為自己學習上還要多花工夫。（舉例說明，適當發(fā)揮2—3句）…… （3）. 老師很樂意幫助你們。他們說（適當發(fā)揮2—3句）……注意： （1）. 要求語句通順，意思連貫。 （3）. 詞數(shù)90個左右，郵件開頭和結尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。s important not to be afraid of any kind of difficulty. How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Li Ming【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，告訴艾米目前你在全力以赴為中考而學習，并與她交流一下目前的學習和生活情況。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如get good results, spend+時間+on sth, be strict with, however, care for, as well, once upon a time, help sb do, cheer up, be ready to, tell sb to do, try one’s best to do, be full of以及it is adj to do sth等，增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。審好題是寫好書面表達的關鍵。構思提綱。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀觥⒚鞔_的關鍵。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。