【正文】 如get good results, spend+時間+on sth, be strict with, however, care for, as well, once upon a time, help sb do, cheer up, be ready to, tell sb to do, try one’s best to do, be full of以及it is adj to do sth等，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。構(gòu)思提綱。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。同時還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。4．假設(shè)你是Beth,前段時間曾向英語?？端鸵黄}為My English Teacher Miss Zhang的短詩。為此，編輯部策劃開“A Letter to My Teacher”專欄，邀請你以信件的形式重新投稿。，稿件的首尾已在答題卡上給出，不計入總詞數(shù)：。根據(jù)編輯部策劃開“A Letter to My Teacher”專欄，邀請你以信件的形式重新投稿。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，考生要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。在寫作時，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。5．書面表達(dá)以“我是…… 的一員”為題，寫一篇80100字的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格。 內(nèi)容可以包括以下幾方面：Are you glad to be a member of...?What do you do in it?How do you feel as such a member?I’m a member of... (請將題目自行補(bǔ)充完整，已給的單詞不計入總詞數(shù))______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】I’m a Member of the Singing and Dancing ClubHello, everyone! I’m very glad I39。要求以“我是…… 的一員”為題，寫一篇短文。文章時態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時和現(xiàn)在完成時，人稱主要用第一人稱。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。請你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，寫一篇英語短文參加此次活動。（2）你應(yīng)該理解父母，他們是愛孩子的，希望孩子前程似錦。（4）……（至少一條）。（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名與校名。（4）短文的開頭己給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。請你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，寫一篇英語短文參加此次活動。意思連貫；【點(diǎn)睛】本文語句通順，段落分明。7．今年初《流浪地球》在中國火熱上映。影片多次提到“希望”。你的筆友Demon觀看后，印象深刻，給你寫了一封郵件。To: LiHuaChina. From: Demon America. Subject:Problems and hopeDear Li Hua, How are you? I hope you are well. I have watched a movie called Wandering Earth. I am deeply moved by those Chinese people who never give up. You Chinese are really brave and full of wisdom. As my Chinese pen pal, what will you do when you meet difficulty? Would you please tell me the following things?What problems do you often meet in your school life?How do you usually solve your problems?Who has influenced you most in your life and what do you think of him/her?What do you think about hope? Please write back and tell me everything.Best wishes,Demon注意：，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。、校名等相關(guān)信息。m glad that you like the film. Indeed, I have learned a lot from it as Please write to me and tell me your view.Yours,LiHua【答案】Dear Demon，I39。t want to study, I will think of the Chinese people who never give up in the film wandering Earth, who will inspire me to study hard.In life, my English teacher has the greatest influence on me. Whenever I have a great need, my English teacher always es to help me. She is the person who helps me the most in my junior high school life at the beginning of three years. . I like her very much and thank her even more.I think hope is the driving force of all, as long as there is hope, there will be motivation, it is possible to succeed. What do you think?Please write to me and tell me your view.Yours,LiHua【解析】【詳解】這是一篇書信作文。首先要注意書信的書寫格式，要對來信中的問題作出全面的答復(fù)。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。提示詞語:wear, role, perform, judge, suggestions, photos提示問題:When and where are you going to hold the English drama show?What are you going to do on the show?What will you ask Mr. Smith to do for the show?Dear Mr. Smith, I39。ll be an English drama show this weekend. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ We’re looking forward to your reply.Li Hua【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,I’m glad to tell you there’ll be an English drama show this weekend . It will be held at 8:00 this Saturday morning. We are going to hold it in our music club. All of us are going to wear nice clothes and play different roles in groups. We will perform English dramas. Speeches will be made during the show.I hope you can work as a judge and give scores for each group after their performances. Then at the end of the drama show, you can give us some suggestions. If possible, you can bring your camera with you and take some photos for us. I believe this English drama show will be successful with your help.We’re looking forward to your reply.Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，邀請外教史密斯先生參加英語戲劇展示活動。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如be going to, at the end of, give sb sth, if possible, take some photos以及with one’s help?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。初寫短文。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。修改潤色。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。，你最近認(rèn)識的美國筆友David給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件，向了解你進(jìn)初三以來在學(xué)習(xí)和生活方面的一些變化、收獲和感受。 提示：less free time，much homework，more pressure，get into a good high schoolmore exercise，lose weight join the English Comer，improve English a lotcolorful and meaningful，learn more knowledge注意：1）詞數(shù)80左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；2）回復(fù)須包括所有藥店，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使全文連貫、通順；3）文中不得提及真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。m happy to tell you about how my life has changed recently. 【答案】Dear David，Thank you so much for your mail. I39?！驹斀狻扛鶕?jù)題干“假如你是李華，你最近認(rèn)識的美國筆友David給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件，向了解你進(jìn)初三以來在學(xué)習(xí)和生活方面的一些變化、收獲和感受。英語作文一般分為三個部分：第一部分：開篇點(diǎn)題——介紹我進(jìn)初三以來在學(xué)習(xí)和生活方面的一些變化、收獲和感受。這里要分為三個小節(jié)：小節(jié)1：過去我的學(xué)習(xí)和生活是什么樣的——有肯多課余時間做自己喜歡的事情。小節(jié)2：進(jìn)初三以來在學(xué)習(xí)和生活方面發(fā)生了變化。小節(jié)3：介紹現(xiàn)在的生活狀態(tài)——忙碌的學(xué)習(xí)。第三部分：總結(jié)全文——我的生活很忙但是很