【正文】 ies, catchy和trendy的大膽運(yùn)用，list, can39。英語能夠?qū)W到這種程度，不可謂不讓人佩服。注意：詞數(shù)不少于60提示詞：郊區(qū) suburbsApril 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the arrival, we began to work were digging were carrying and planting young were getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the leaving we took some photos to record our green the lines of trees, we all had a sense of feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】本文是設(shè)計(jì)巧妙的提綱要點(diǎn)式作文，與環(huán)保結(jié)合，立意較好。【北京卷】【試題回放】開放作文請根據(jù)下面提示，寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)不少于50In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand an interesting picture!A western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a first glance, I think it’s a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating man in the picture is trying to copy he is doing it the hard using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we don’t need to copy others’ ways of a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】本文是開放性作文，要求考生把握好圖畫內(nèi)容，發(fā)散表達(dá)。行文結(jié)構(gòu)十分明晰，同時(shí)句式使用得熟練而準(zhǔn)確?，F(xiàn)在蘇琳即將三歲。祝賀蘇琳生日。索取蘇琳三歲生日照?？梢赃m當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。例文：Dear Sir/Madam，Greetings from China!I’m Li Hua, a student in ’ve been a panda lover since I was a three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website,.Now she’s going to be ’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in truly，Li Hua【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】本文寫作的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：。這封信格式正確，行文規(guī)范，描述有條不紊，稱呼、正文中的開頭及結(jié)尾、結(jié)束語均表達(dá)到位。長短句運(yùn)用合理，結(jié)合了簡單句和復(fù)合句，流暢自然，不露痕跡，的確是一篇佳作?！救珖鞩I】【試題回放】一家賓館新開業(yè)，為吸引外國賓客，希望在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上進(jìn)行宣傳。主要內(nèi)容包括：：距白山入口處500米。雙人間(共15間)，150元/天。：餐廳(中、西餐)，咖啡廳(茶、咖啡)。注意：，開頭語已為你寫好。Wele to Baishan Mountain Hotel!Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides singleperson room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per also provides hot water bath can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the swimming pool is open for free the whole these services can bring great convenience to you and are very e to enjoy yourself!Wele to book rooms in Baishan 免費(fèi)答疑解題熱線 053186969606 ：1044738198 希望更多老師加入到公益教學(xué)中【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】本文開門見山，首先點(diǎn)明了主旨。開頭使用了獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)交代賓館位置。總地來說，文章句式精煉，是篇不錯(cuò)的滿分作文。評(píng)析：bring great convenience，帶來便利。假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，請你用英文給Amy寫一封慰問信，主要內(nèi)容包括：自我介紹得知的情況表示鼓勵(lì)打算為她做什么祝她早日康復(fù)注意：。文章使用了高中常見的句式，如I’m sorry to hear that..., It is reported that...等，都比較好。積累卡片 m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great ，給你帶來了巨大的痛苦。, stand up and fight against the disease!因此，堅(jiān)強(qiáng)地與疾病做斗爭吧!李老師滿分課堂 免費(fèi)答疑解題熱線 053186969606 ：1044738198 希望更多老師加入到公益教學(xué)中好處：擲地有聲，語言準(zhǔn)確。教育部倡導(dǎo)學(xué)生：u 每天鍛煉一小時(shí)u 健康工作五十年u 幸福生活一輩子請你根據(jù)以上提示，用英語準(zhǔn)備一份發(fā)言稿，向同學(xué)們講述一下陽光體育活動(dòng)的有關(guān)情況，并就高三學(xué)生是否需要每天花一小時(shí)鍛煉，談?wù)勀愕目捶袄碛?。詞數(shù)：120左右。參考詞匯：陽光體育活動(dòng)——a national student sports program。本文分為三段，前兩段敘述，后一段發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)，典型的作文結(jié)構(gòu)。復(fù)雜的句式是本文的特點(diǎn)之一。評(píng)析：advocate，其后接虛擬語氣，可以省略情態(tài)動(dòng)詞。評(píng)析：虛擬語氣。Almost all people see that the grass is greener on the other never feel satisfied with what they’ve already 、上癮get into one’s blood說來也怪，很多不好的事往往會(huì)使人上癮。I’m really bored stiff with his sitting there doing nothing but 、等不及了 champ at the bit 咱們快點(diǎn)吧，孩子們都等不及了。From the way she’s bowing and scraping in front of the boss, you’ll know what sort of person she 、瘋瘋癲癲go gaga 對他的話不要太在意了，他總是瘋瘋癲癲的。We cannot account on always goes back on his 、廢話連篇beat one’s gums 誰喜歡坐在那里聽你的廢話連篇？Who would enjoy sitting there listening to your beating your gums?恩將仇報(bào) bite the hand that feeds one 你難道不知道她是個(gè)恩將仇報(bào)的人？Don’t you know she’s the one that would bite the hand that feeds her?不忍心not have the heart to do 如果我是你，我可不忍心把孩子們就在家里沒人照看If I were you, I wouldn’t have the heart to leave the kids at home uncared 、勤快an eager beaver 他特別勤快，從來沒有閑著的時(shí)候。表達(dá)地道【北京卷】【試題回放】【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】這是一篇滿分作文。仔細(xì)分析了這篇文章，寫的的確是好，很地道的美式英語，一些詞語的大膽使用，讓人不得不猜測此人或者是家人可能有過國外生活的經(jīng)歷，否則這么地道標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的英語，可不是一朝一夕所能寫出來的。t wait to 簡直是perfect!況且文章中沒有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤，不管是書寫還是語法?！颈本┚怼俊驹囶}回放】情景作文假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三一班的學(xué)生李華，為響應(yīng)綠化祖國的號(hào)召，你班四月十二日去郊區(qū)植樹，請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，介紹植樹活動(dòng)的全過程，給某英文雜志的“綠色行動(dòng)”專欄寫一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”為題的英文稿件。文章思路清晰，要點(diǎn)連貫，在語言的表達(dá)上選詞新穎，同時(shí)運(yùn)用了分詞短語作狀語等較好的句式表達(dá)?？忌攸c(diǎn)要看出這個(gè)人是卷發(fā)高鼻的外國人，要體會(huì)到西式刀叉對中式食物的矛盾性?！救珖怼俊驹囶}回放】假定你是李華，從小喜愛大熊貓(panda),一直通過有關(guān)網(wǎng)站(website)關(guān)注三年前在美國圣迭哥動(dòng)物園出生的大熊貓“蘇琳”和她的母親“白云”。請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給動(dòng)物園工作人員寫一封信：自我介紹。感謝工作人員。注意：詞數(shù)100左右。開頭語已為你寫好。文章行文活潑，感情真摯，語言表述準(zhǔn)確，洋溢著作者因大熊貓得到精心照顧而對美方人員的感激之情，以及希望自己愿望成真，得到照片的希冀之情。積累卡片英漢互譯 ，快樂的 birth to ，生育好句I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the ，正是你們的努力工作讓蘇琳和它的父母在美國過著幸福和健康的生活。請你用英語為其 寫一篇文字介紹。：單人間(共20間)，100元/天。熱水淋浴。：全天免費(fèi)開放。以使行文連貫。本文最大的特點(diǎn)是應(yīng)用了很多比較復(fù)雜的句式，使文章比較出彩。which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句的使用也很正確。積累卡片英漢互譯好詞 好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and arevery ，并且非常的愉快?！局貞c卷】【試題回放】據(jù)報(bào)道，7歲的美國女孩Am