【正文】 ll, he can apply for loan to bank. (誤 ) ?If one’ s family is not well off, he can apply to the bank for a loan. (正 ) ?Let alone touch the outside world of campus. (誤 ) ?Let alone get in touch with the world outside of the campus.(正 ) ?keep a good body health. (誤 ) keep fit .(正 ) 2. 句型要有變化性 ? 考生不可全以簡(jiǎn)單句拼湊文章，應(yīng)主動(dòng)使用復(fù)句、倒裝、排比、平行結(jié)構(gòu)及動(dòng)詞短語，體現(xiàn)出良好的語言駕馭能力。（考試中一般不要出現(xiàn) good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等） eg. It is, therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. Thus, its petitive edge will be sharpened effectively. applicable代替 proper, approaches代替 ways, implement代替 carry out, sharpen one39。s petitive edge代替 enhance one39。s petitiveness（提高某物競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力） , Computer and I I never fet the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a puter as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected, and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me. ? exceedingly 替換 very ? thrilling 替換 exciting ? sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替換 sb. be interested in sth. ? google 替換 search ? an army of ,a sea of替換 a lot of The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of puters. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, puters pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure! ? The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個(gè)精彩句型，用來描述在某個(gè)時(shí)期發(fā)生了什么事情； ? Increasing popularity 替換 more and more popular ? Coincident with … 非常地道的詞匯，表達(dá)“與 … 一致”的意思，替換 With … ? Advancement 替換 development ? Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替換 enter into ? Current ( currently )替換 now ? Appeal to sb. 替換 sb. be interested in sth. ? Growing individuals 替換 more and more people ? It is no exaggeration to say 經(jīng)典句型， 說某事是毫不夸張的 For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment. Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering . ? For a start 替換 To begin with ? We can, freely, search 用了插入語的寫作手法 ? Our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened 用了非常精彩的被動(dòng) ? Additionally 替換 In addition / Besides ? Deliver 替換 send There is no denying that , however, puters can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence, porn pictures, AVfilms emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few citizens to copying. ? There is no denying that , however, puters can function in the disservice of human beings, 這個(gè)句子有三個(gè)精彩之處，首先 There is no denying that這個(gè)句型，還有however作為插入語， function in the disservice of 替換 do harm to ? Emerging 代替 appearing ( fading 代替 disappearing ) As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds， puters do play a positive role in the development of people39。 Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that… 同理 用 most, if not all ,代替 most. 5: a slice of, quiet a few , several代替 some 6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替 think (因?yàn)槭菚嬲Z，所以要加 that) 7:affair ,business ,matter 代替 thing 8: shared 代 mon huge fruits 代替 get much benefit ) 10:for my part ,from my own perspective 代替 in my opinion 11:Increasing(ly),growing 代替 more and more ( 注意沒有 growingly這種形式。s attention代替 attract one39。 作為應(yīng)試手段，考生應(yīng)現(xiàn)實(shí)地去爭(zhēng)取做到開宗明義，將主題句 (Topic Sentence) 放在每段開頭。 這樣容易給閱卷者留下一個(gè)好印象，最好能用上一個(gè)復(fù)句，里面要用上 23個(gè)難的單詞或詞組 。 每次練習(xí)時(shí)，把這些成語、諺語、引語劃出來，以強(qiáng)化主動(dòng)使用的意識(shí)。 譬如，想表示某人過著豪華的生活，可以說 He lived a kind of luxurious life. 但考生如不會(huì)寫 luxu