【正文】 y home, you will study and go to bed in a bedroom which has a WC. 從句使用的有效性差 room where you will live in is a fortable room. room which I prepared for you is a bright and beautiful one with a bathroom. morning we can go to school together by bike, which is not far from our school. noon, we have lunch in a big diningroom which stands in our school 語言基本功差 （ 1）短語： 1) Now I’m getting ready for a room which you will live in. 2) We are preparing for your living. 3） 在早上： on the morning, at morning, in morning 4) 在中午： on noon, 5) 在 12點(diǎn)： in 12 o’clock, 6) 吃午飯： have a lunch, 7） 取得進(jìn)步： make a progress （ 2）詞匯及拼寫 1）游泳池 /館 : swimming poor/pour/room/hall/gym 2) 食堂，飯廳： students’ dinning hall/restaurant/building /eating room/food building/food inn 3) 自行車： bick, 語言羅嗦，廢話太多 1） Now your room is ready with a table and of course a chair for you to study. There are also a TV and a bed in your room but sorry we don’t have a sofa, so we find you another chair instead. (42w) 寫的內(nèi)容與圖不相干（正常 /適當(dāng)發(fā)揮） 請對比： 1） In the weekend, we can also go shopping, you will know more about Chinese culture and Chinese people are very friendly to abroad students. 2） In the middle of the day, we must have lunch at school because there is no one at home to prepare lunch for us. 缺乏對文體的把握 I’d like to introduce the life here to you. Firstly living in your own room, you can make yourself at home. Secondly, it is you and I that will be good friends. And of course we’ll go to school happily by bike every day. Thirdly, as is known to all, just as water is to fish, so is the food to people. Fortunately, we can have the delicious meal at school. Finally I am a sports fan. So wonderful is the sports centre in our school that you can’t choose but take sports. ?. （五）寫好作文的基本要點(diǎn) 認(rèn)真審題，把握文體 應(yīng)用文？記敘文？說明文？議論文？ 內(nèi)容的完整性 根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)確定檔次，不能丟要點(diǎn)。 2）特別注意避免 “不能容忍” 的低級錯誤 tell(telled), cost(costed) I have went there several days ago. I have been there before long. C. 句型結(jié)構(gòu) ? because of there have a lot of people. It’s really save money. 表達(dá)的多樣性與靈活性 要指導(dǎo)學(xué)生學(xué)會 變通 。在不影響基本意思的前提下，使用同義詞語、同義句型，以增強(qiáng)可讀性與生動性。 語言的得體性 所用語言要合乎一定的語言環(huán)境，譴詞造句要恰當(dāng)。 （六）訓(xùn)練建議 作好詞匯和語言準(zhǔn)備 , 積累一定量的單詞和短語。 書面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練要有過程性語言訓(xùn)練。 練習(xí)各種文體的寫作。 不僅重視語言訓(xùn)練還要重視思維能力的培養(yǎng)，積累 語言經(jīng)驗(yàn) 與培養(yǎng) 思維能力 并重。 （七）解題思路專題訓(xùn)練 1．審題定位：定時態(tài)、定人稱、定體 裁、定內(nèi)容； 2．列要點(diǎn) : 中文提示和圖示中的要點(diǎn)； 3．按要點(diǎn)選詞、詞組； 4．用適當(dāng)句型連詞、詞組成句子：并列 句、從句、非謂語短語等； 5．潤色：用恰當(dāng)過渡詞聯(lián)句成文。 ?高考前的任何一天都叫“平時”。 ?請看兩位語言心理學(xué)家是怎么說的： M. Anisfeld認(rèn)為： “ Things that are stored together tend to be recovered together.” 譯文：“一起儲存起來的東西往往一起被回憶起來?！? 換句話說，你以單詞形式 “ 背誦默寫 ” ，則 “ 臨場發(fā) 揮 ” 時，能夠 “ 想起來 ” 的必然是一個個孤立的單詞， 必然會面對 “ 突出語篇 ” 的高考考試，束手無策。 英語學(xué)習(xí) “會、熟、化” 標(biāo)準(zhǔn)： 看上去順眼 說起來順口 聽上去順耳 寫起來順手 聞起來順鼻子 ??? 順心 最好的備考材料是近幾年的高考真題。 高考語篇來自“真實(shí)語篇”，解決課外 閱讀量是“親近”真實(shí)語篇的有效途徑 沖刺階段如何鼓勵高三學(xué)生勤學(xué)巧學(xué) 值得研究 (二 )“ 課本語篇”的處理 選出要學(xué)生朗誦的語段（ 20段左右， 每段 200— 300字），要求學(xué)生早晚朗 讀，并在課外檢查和課堂上抽查。 以其他方式再現(xiàn)，如：短文改錯等?？蓪⒃幕蚋膶?、或縮寫的短文挖空，利用補(bǔ)全訓(xùn)練的方式，使學(xué)生對原文的理解得以強(qiáng)化。 (三 ) 定時練過的高考真題需要再現(xiàn) 練過的題一定要有后續(xù)處理程序，特別是完形填空、單項(xiàng)選擇、短文改錯和書面表達(dá)等練習(xí)。 方式可靈活多樣，老師要辛苦一點(diǎn)。 再現(xiàn)目的：學(xué)生在考場上真正“順眼順口” 例 2：單選題的擴(kuò)寫訓(xùn)練 —— “ 三分鐘小作文 ” 學(xué)生習(xí)作： 原題 1： There’s coffee and tea, you can have ___. Thanks. (2022 全國， 32) A. either（答案） B. each C. one D. it 擴(kuò)寫： ( a knock on the door) M: Lily, go and open the door. It must be your uncle! L: Yes, mum. I am doing that. Oh, yes, it’s my uncle. (Lily goes into her room to study) M: Tom, there’s coffee and tea, you can have either. I am now busy cooking. Help yourself as a host! U: Thanks. I will. ( Tom goes to the kitchen, help his sister with cooking. They talk together about their recent days happily) 原題 2： Susan, go and join your sister cleaning the yard. Why _____? John is sitting there doing nothing. (2022 全國， 33) A. him B. he C. I D. me（答案） 擴(kuò)寫： ( One day, my mum made us (John, Mary, and I ) clean the yard) M: Oh, my god! Our yard is so dirty. Let’s clean it. (She said to us three) (Quickly, Mary went to clean the floor. Mum went to fetch some water. When she came back, she saw me reading an amazing book at the table) M: Susan, go and join your sister cleaning the yard. Susan: Why me? John is sitting there doing nothing. But I am reading my book! It’s unfair to me! Mum: OK! Ok! John, Susan, you two, please go and join your sister cleaning the yard! Now pretty fair to the three of you! 例 3：真題再現(xiàn) 基本功訓(xùn)練 1 (根據(jù) 99年高考單項(xiàng)選擇題改編 ) 原題：－ I had a really good weekend at my uncle39。s very nice of you B. Congratulations C. It39。m glad to hear that 再現(xiàn)： I ____ a really good weekend_____ my uncle39。m glad to hear ______. 原題：－ I’m going to the post office. － _____ you39。re there, can you______ me some stamps? 真題再現(xiàn) 基本功訓(xùn)練 2 (根據(jù) 99年高考完形題改編 ) 原題： People of Burlington are being disturbed by the sound of bells. Four students from Burlington College of Higher Education are in the bell tower of the 26 and have made up their minds to 27 the bells nonstop for two weeks as a protest (抗議 ) against heavy trucks which run 28 through the narrow High Street. 26. A. college B. village C. town D. church 27. A. change B. repair C. ring D. shake 28. A. now and then B. day and night C. up and down D. over and over 再現(xiàn)： ____ of Burlington are being disturbed by the ______ of bells. Four students from Burlington College of Higher E