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. 存在問題 I am quite satisfied with the travel agency. First of all, the local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and considerate to all tourists, especially to the older people. … (1) I am quite satisfied with the travel agency and the local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and considerate to all tourists, especially to the older people…. 錯(cuò)誤診斷:總體信息和細(xì)節(jié)信息不能合并 (2) However, the food provided in the restaurant didn’t agree with many of us. Quite a few of us had to buy extra food. 錯(cuò)誤診斷:因果關(guān)系的信息合并 However, the food provided in the restaurant didn’t agree with many of us and quite a few of us had to buy extra food. (He had a high fever and went to see the doctor.) ? (3) I am quite satisfied with the travel agency, the local tour guide John was very enthusiastic, he could concern old men in our group. ? 錯(cuò)誤診斷: ‘‘ 一逗到底”的中式英語(yǔ)表達(dá)導(dǎo)致信息表達(dá)出現(xiàn)問題,不能用多個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句表達(dá)多個(gè)不同類型的信息內(nèi)容。 四 、 總體信息和細(xì)節(jié)信息不能合并; 五、要正確使用標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)避免影響信息的正確 表達(dá) 人們對(duì)學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友持不同意見 .請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一篇關(guān)于學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友的短文 ,介紹人們的不同觀點(diǎn) ,并表達(dá)自己的看法 . 贊成的理由 反對(duì)的理由 1. 廣交朋友 1. 浪費(fèi)時(shí)間 2. 可跟同齡人交流 2. 影響學(xué)習(xí) 3. 利于外語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí) 3. 可能上當(dāng)受騙 注意 : 1. 必須用五句話表達(dá)表中的全部?jī)?nèi)容 。[如內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性和合適性 ] 1. 旅行社 travel agency 2. 食物不合味口 the food didn’t agree with us 3. 他講解清晰 ,生動(dòng)。 ? I am quite satisfied with the travelling pany. ? I am quite satisfied with the traveler centre. ? ,體貼,耐心照顧團(tuán)中的老人。 ? The interview of the view is clear and funny and it’s clearly that we improve knowledge for John’s direction. The local tour guide explained everything about the places we visited in a clear and lively way, which helped us broaden our horizons. ? 4. 飯館提供的膳食不合口味。 The diet provided in the restaurant didn’t fit us so many of us and quite a few of us had to buy extra food. However, the food provided in the restaurant didn’t agree with many of us and quite a few of us had to buy extra food. ? 。 2,引入市場(chǎng)后,該產(chǎn)品大獲成功。 Faced with/Facing difficulties, he never gives up. Introduced to the market, the product made a great success. Having finished his homework, he returned home. 方法二 . 巧用倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)增強(qiáng)句子的表現(xiàn)力 1. He didn’t realize his foolishness until he returned home. Not until can save the earth by changing the way we live. Only is clever but he does not work hard. as/though 4. The clock tower stands on the other side of the street. On the other side of the st