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his situation happens.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文,介紹發(fā)生在我的好朋友王強(qiáng)身上的一件事。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用?!军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言簡練。此處on one’s way, see sb doing sth, at that time, without doing sth, offer to do sth, learn from等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。假設(shè)你是李華,請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示用英語寫一封回信給Danny。2. 回復(fù)必須包括所以要點(diǎn),可是當(dāng)發(fā)揮,是短文連貫,通順。 參考詞匯: civilized 文明的Dear Danny,I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization(文明) of China, I would like to share something with you. I hope you can e to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hear from you soon.All the best,Li Hua【答案】Dear Danny,I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization(文明) of China, I would like to share something with you.Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world. China is a country of 56 nationalities. Different nations have difficult cultures. In my country, we have many traditional festivals, such as, the Spring Festival, MidAutumn Festival and the Dragon Boat Festival . They are also called “three major Chinese holidays” in China. Here are the customs of eating Zongzi and racing dragonboat on the Dragon Boat Festival.China is a nation of etiquette (禮儀). Chinese people can respect, trust and help each other. We all learn and grow together. Everyone in my school should protect the whole public environment. Climbing the trees, picking the flowers and throwing garbage at random are not allowed there.I hope you can e to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hearing from you soon.All the best.Li Hua【解析】【分析】本文要求給你的印度朋友Danny寫一篇關(guān)于華夏文明的回信。表格中列舉了三個(gè)要點(diǎn),寫作時(shí)注意不要漏寫。細(xì)心檢查避免疏漏。【點(diǎn)睛】寫作中注意語義通順,符合邏輯關(guān)系,上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。可以適當(dāng)使用高分句子。China is a nation of etiquette(禮儀),中國是一個(gè)禮儀之邦。要求不少于80個(gè)字。而并列結(jié)構(gòu)Communicate more with you parents, and ask your teacher for help if necessary!和You should let them know that you’re serious about learning art and you’re clever enough to plan the future for yourself./ So this is the best chance for you to achieve your dream, though it’s just the very beginning to enter an art school./ If you fail, both your dream and your parents’ wish won’t be able to be ,豐富了短文內(nèi)容,使表達(dá)多樣化,是本文的亮點(diǎn)?!军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。所以,考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。中學(xué)生年齡較小,學(xué)生安全更是人們關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)。內(nèi)容提示::遵守交通規(guī)則,不闖紅綠燈等;:吃健康食物,不吃垃圾食品等;:進(jìn)行體育鍛煉時(shí),不要弄傷自己,不私自下河游泳等。Travel Safety is very important to everyone._______________________________________________________________【答案】Safety is very important to everyone. Middle school students are like precious flowers – so their safety is being a focus for us all.First, we must obey the traffic rules when we go out. Don’t cross the street when the light is red. Secondly, we should eat healthy food. Don’t eat junk food. Eat more fruits and vegetables. Eat less meat and eggs. Finally, be careful not to hurt yourself while you are playing outside. It’s dangerous to go swimming by yourself, so don’t go swimming without permission. These are some important safety tips to remember.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料,不可遺漏要點(diǎn),并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí)注意人稱、時(shí)態(tài)的搭配及主謂一致問題?!军c(diǎn)睛】這篇短文涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容,表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確,意思連貫,符合邏輯。同時(shí),文章還使用了一些常用的句式和短語,如:祈使句的使用、weshould、inword、+形容詞+在學(xué)習(xí)中注意積累,牢記一些常用句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。某校正在開展中學(xué)生是否有必要閱讀英文經(jīng)典文學(xué)的大討論,請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下問題和要求用英語寫一篇文章參與討論。With the development of the Five Onehundred Project in Yangzhou, our school has had a discussion about whether it is necessary for middle school students to read English classics. 【答案】With the development of the Five Onehundred Project in Yangzhou, our school has had a discussion about whether it is necessary for middle school students to read English classics. I think reading English classics is not only necessary but