【正文】 此處would like to, encourage sb to do sth, promise to do sth, turn to sb for help, make progress等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。s helped me a lot. Once, I failed my English exam. When she found I was very worried, she encouraged me to study harder and promised to help me. After that, I turned to her for help every time I had questions. She was always patient to make me understand every single question. With her help, I39。某英文雜志社正向九年級(jí)畢業(yè)生征文，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇題為“Thank you, My ________”的短文，將你對(duì)你的父母、老師、朋友或同學(xué)的感謝表達(dá)出來。 show your reasons why you remend them。Dear Sir/Madam, I am glad to share my opinion with ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,I am glad to share my opinion with you. I would like to remend Chinese paintings as a gift because Chinese paintings have a long history. What’s more, they are quite different from the ones in the US. Foreign friends can learn more about Chinese art from them. The second gift I want to remend is silk scarves. Silk is a symbol of our great culture and popular among Chinese people. It feels very soft and fortable. Why not buy them some silk scarves? I believe the exchange students will like the two gifts and always remember the moments with us.【解析】【詳解】本文主要是向別人分享想法，推薦禮物。Hi,I’m David, the editor of YOUTH. We all know the exchange students are going back to the US soon. We would like to give them some traditional Chinese things as gifts, such as Chinese paintings, silk, tea …Today I would like to collect some ideas. In your article, you should:216。修改潤(rùn)色。初寫短文。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。【亮點(diǎn)說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如convenient，disadvantage，in good quality，figure out，have the chance to do，be attacked by，of course，take care of等。 商品 goods。7．隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的發(fā)展、人們消費(fèi)觀念的轉(zhuǎn)變， 購(gòu)物方式也在悄然的發(fā)生變化。With the development of the Five Onehundred Project in Yangzhou, our school has had a discussion about whether it is necessary for middle school students to read English classics. 【答案】With the development of the Five Onehundred Project in Yangzhou, our school has had a discussion about whether it is necessary for middle school students to read English classics. I think reading English classics is not only necessary but also important. First, we can learn a lot about Western history and culture by reading. Second, by reading classics we can enlarge our vocabulary and improve our writing. Finally, it can help us with our lifelong learning. So I often spend my free time reading English classics. I am in the Reading Club. And I often take notes while reading. What’s more, I sometimes ask the teacher for help if I have difficulty reading books. If some students are weak in English, they can read the short and easy English stories at the very beginning. Well begun is half done. Next, they should keep reading and never give up. Then their English will be improved little by little.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇要求關(guān)于某校正在開展中學(xué)生是否有必要閱讀英文經(jīng)典文學(xué)的大討論，請(qǐng)根據(jù)問題和要求用英語(yǔ)寫一篇文章參與討論。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意積累，牢記一些常用句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。word、同時(shí)，文章還使用了一些常用的句式和短語(yǔ)，如：祈使句的使用、we寫作時(shí)注意人稱、時(shí)態(tài)的搭配及主謂一致問題。Travel Safety is very important to everyone._______________________________________________________________【答案】Safety is very important to everyone. Middle school students are like precious flowers – so their safety is being a focus for us all.First, we must obey the traffic rules when we go out. Don’t cross the street when the light is red. Secondly, we should eat healthy food. Don’t eat junk food. Eat more fruits and vegetables. Eat less meat and eggs. Finally, be careful not to hurt yourself while you are playing outside. It’s dangerous to go swimming by yourself, so don’t go swimming without permission. These are some important safety tips to remember.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文。中學(xué)生年齡較小，學(xué)生安全更是人們關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。要求不少于80個(gè)字?？梢赃m當(dāng)使用高分句子。細(xì)心檢查避免疏漏。 參考詞匯: civilized 文明的Dear Danny,I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interes