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穿插一些并列句結(jié)構(gòu)或復(fù)合句,以及使用一些復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu),如非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞、被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)等。短文有如下幾個(gè)特點(diǎn):首先文章內(nèi)容完整,包含了題目中要求的所有內(nèi)容,并對(duì)細(xì)節(jié)進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充和修飾,使內(nèi)容更加充實(shí)、豐富。全文敘述清晰,層次清楚,主次分明。短文以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)來(lái)敘述,注意了謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞第三人稱單數(shù)形式的變化。6.書面表達(dá)假如你是李華,你們學(xué)校正在進(jìn)行課堂教學(xué)改革,經(jīng)過(guò)一段時(shí)間的適應(yīng),同學(xué)們發(fā)現(xiàn)現(xiàn)在的課堂跟以前比較發(fā)生了一些變化,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給提示以“The Changes in Class”為題目,用英語(yǔ)寫一篇100詞左右的文章,談?wù)勀愕母惺芎拖敕?,開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。The Changes in ClassThanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in 【答案】 The Changes in ClassThanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in class. I like the class like think it is very interesting and lively. We can tell stories, play games and listen to music.I think it is open and free. We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this class. The changes in Class are good for us.【解析】【詳解】假如你是李華,你們學(xué)校正在進(jìn)行課堂教學(xué)改革,經(jīng)過(guò)一段時(shí)間的適應(yīng),同學(xué)們發(fā)現(xiàn)現(xiàn)在的課堂跟以前比較發(fā)生了一些變化,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給提示以“The Changes in Class”為題目,用英語(yǔ)寫一篇100詞左右的文章,談?wù)勀愕母惺芎拖敕?,開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。7.書面表達(dá)以下圖畫呈現(xiàn)了林濤和梅梅在公園里發(fā)生的事情。要求:?!敬鸢浮縊ne day Lin Tao and Meimei were playing in the garden. They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to die. So they decided to do something for the young tree. First, Meimei kept the tree straight and pushed the earth hard down with her foot. Then Lin Tao knocked a board into the earth. It said, “Please take care of trees.” After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of them.Trees are good for the environment. We should protect them.【解析】這是一篇看圖作文,要求我們仔細(xì)觀察圖片,弄清楚里面發(fā)生的事情,用英語(yǔ)將這些內(nèi)容完整地?cái)⑹龀鰜?lái),并簡(jiǎn)單陳述自己從中學(xué)到的東西。通過(guò)分析可知,這篇短文講述的是過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情,應(yīng)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài),注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式的變化,尤其是不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去式形式。還需注意的是英語(yǔ)表達(dá)和漢語(yǔ)的習(xí)慣不同,不能逐詞去翻譯,應(yīng)從句子整體考慮,使用簡(jiǎn)單句的基本句型,如主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)。語(yǔ)句之間注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分,使文意連貫。首先短文內(nèi)容完整,符合圖片所傳達(dá)的信息,表述準(zhǔn)確。整篇文章按照事情發(fā)生的先后順序敘述,條理清晰。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱,文章以一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)為主,謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用了過(guò)去式,尤其是注意了不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞過(guò)去式的形式,如found, kept, got, were, spoke等。短文中還使用了較豐富的句型和短語(yǔ),如They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to ;再如So they decided to do something for the young tree這句話中使用了句型decided to do ;After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of that, speak highly of等等。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開(kāi)展以“Going Green”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。提示詞語(yǔ): pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action提示問(wèn)題:● What are the main environmental problems we have?● What can we do in our daily life? ● What’s your wish?Now there are many environmental 【答案】例文Now there are many environmental problems. Such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to school by bike or on foot. We can use less water by turning off the tap while we brush our teeth, and taking shorter showers. When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins. I hope everyone can take action. Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference. Let’s work together to make a better place to live.【解析】【詳解】題干解讀:該題目屬于說(shuō)明文寫作,寫作時(shí)要把我們面臨的主要環(huán)境問(wèn)題是什么,為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么,以及你的期望全部包括。高分亮點(diǎn):短語(yǔ):save energy;brush our teeth;put it into different bins;take action;make a big difference?!军c(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá),例如save energy;brush our teeth;put it into different bins;take action;make a big difference。9.俗話說(shuō),國(guó)有國(guó)法,家有家規(guī)。我們的國(guó)家主席習(xí)近平多次強(qiáng)調(diào)良好家風(fēng)家規(guī)的重要性。要點(diǎn)提示:三條家規(guī)尊老愛(ài)幼,禮貌待人誠(chéng)實(shí)守信,不斷學(xué)習(xí)按時(shí)作息,杜絕熬夜你對(duì)你家家規(guī)的看法......簡(jiǎn)單闡述你是如何受益的......寫作要求:,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使行文流暢、通順;;。Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of our Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tel