【正文】 eng. Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes. He doesn39。s pingpang petition.You can see the good personality and the spirit of persistence in this small body. He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以The person who inspired me為題，介紹一個(gè)曾經(jīng)激勵(lì)過你的人。學(xué)生們可以這兩個(gè)問題為提綱，發(fā)揮想象力，充實(shí)細(xì)節(jié)信息，組織語言，連貫成文。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先要符合題目要求，包括題目中要求的所有信息，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意上下文的銜接。應(yīng)該從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)入手，寫完整的句子。為提升文章檔次，應(yīng)使用高級(jí)詞匯以及復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)。【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，介紹了一個(gè)曾經(jīng)激勵(lì)過自己的人。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理，主次分明。用詞準(zhǔn)確，語言得體，句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。t talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face.、If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out.、He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and pingpang.、He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he 。天津中考模擬）假如你是陽光中學(xué)的李華，你校成功舉辦了“中華詩詞朗誦比賽”，請(qǐng)用英語寫一篇短文，介紹活動(dòng)情況并呼吁更多的人參與這樣的活動(dòng)?；顒?dòng)介紹每學(xué)期舉辦一次。同學(xué)們的精彩表現(xiàn)得到了大家的高度評(píng)價(jià)。她極具朗誦天賦。呼吁參與的理由......（自擬1到2點(diǎn)）注意事項(xiàng)：（1）須包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語句通順、行文連貫作、適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；（2）詞數(shù)在80個(gè)左右，文稿的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；參考詞匯：中華詩詞朗誦比賽 Chinese Poetry Reciting Competition。 高度評(píng)價(jià)think highly of 。天賦gift。m Li Hua from Sunshine Middle School. Our school... 【答案】I39。 wonderful performances. Wang Li from Grade 8 won the first prize. She has a real gift for reciting .Each winner won a free ticket for the book show.I hope more people will take part in this activity and enjoy the beautiful Chinese culture【解析】【詳解】本題是一篇給材料作文，介紹“中華詩詞朗誦比賽”活動(dòng)情況并呼吁更多的人參與這樣的活動(dòng)。寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文，其次考生可根據(jù)表格中的要點(diǎn)提示去寫作。在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。陜西中考模擬） 假如你是李華, 你的美國筆友Bill給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件, 想了解你的夢(mèng)想職業(yè)。To: lihua china. From: bill006 america. Subject: Your dream jobDear Li Hua,Our teacher told us China is developing fast. You are lucky enough to live in China.Would you please tell me about your dream job in the future?◆What is your dream job?◆ Why do you like the job?◆ Do you think your personality is suitable for the job? Why or why not?◆ What do you need to do for your dream job?Drop a few lines if you have time.Best wishes,Bill要求:1. 參考提示語, 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 語句通順, 意思連貫, 書寫工整；3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)你的任何真實(shí)信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；: 不少于70詞（開頭已給出, 但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。s environment appeals to me and staying with students helps to keep me young and alive. To realize my dream, I have to make full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and enter a good university. What efforts are you making for your dream?Tell me about your ideal job!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本題通過描寫夢(mèng)想中的職業(yè)，讓學(xué)生對(duì)未來有憧憬，給一部分提示詞，讓學(xué)生有話可說。然后解釋為什么喜歡該工作，因?yàn)榭梢园炎约旱闹R(shí)分享給孩子們，并且喜歡學(xué)校的環(huán)境。最后向Bill提出問題，結(jié)束全文。8．（ Qiang騎車回家,在十字路口,看到一位老太太正要過馬路。,不敢獨(dú)自穿過十字路口。......要求: 。:80100。參考詞匯:十字路口 crossroads 在……猶豫不決 hesitate inLast Monday Wang Qiang rode his bike back 【答案】Last Monday Wang Qiang rode his bike back home. On his way home, at a crossroads he saw an old lady going across the road. Because the traffic lights didn’t work at that time, all the traffic crossed the road without stopping one by one. The lady hesitated in whether she should cross it, but she was afraid to do that When Wang Qiang saw that, he offered to stop the traffic with his bike in order to lead her to cross the road safely.In my opinion, Wang Qiang is such a good example that we should learn from him. At the same time we also suggest that all the drivers should let people cross first and then traffic when this situation happens.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹發(fā)生在我的好朋友王強(qiáng)身上的一件事。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。此處on one’s way, see sb doing sth, at that time, without doing sth, offer to do sth, learn from等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。廣州市天河中學(xué)中考模擬）書面表達(dá)請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以My lowcarbon life為題寫一篇英語短文，談?wù)勀愕摹暗吞忌睢?，以及你?duì)“低碳生活”的認(rèn)識(shí)。My lowcarbon lifeLowcarbon life is a kind of lifestyle. It’s a habit to save all the sources of energy around us. It’s important to protect our environment. ________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My lowcarbon lifeLowcarbon life is a kind of lifestyle. It’s a habit to save all the sources of energy around us. It’s important to protect our environment. First, I always go to school on foot and tell my parents to walk to work instead of driving the car. Second, I save water and electricity by turning off the taps , fans。t need them. What39。s take actions.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文。本文時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。認(rèn)真閱讀所給提示要點(diǎn)，確定主題，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)列出提綱，所寫內(nèi)容必須包括所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，語句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范。本文提綱：我的低碳生活低碳生活是一種生活方式。保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境很重要。其次，當(dāng)我不需要的時(shí)候，我會(huì)及時(shí)關(guān)掉水龍頭、風(fēng)扇、電視機(jī)和電燈，以節(jié)約用水和用電。第三，我使用紙張的兩面。通過這樣做，我們可以拯救許多樹木。我相信如果我們能做這些事情，我們的生活會(huì)越來越好。我們采取行動(dòng)吧。語言要規(guī)范，時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用要正確，敘述清楚條里，學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用。注意檢查：單詞拼寫、語法、動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、語序、主謂一致等。：要點(diǎn)是否齊全，適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充。合理使用連詞。：注意書寫工整美觀整潔。北京中考模擬）假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備組織學(xué)生本周五去北京世園會(huì)參觀。請(qǐng)用英語寫一封電子郵件，告訴他集合的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)，在那里可以做什么，以及參觀時(shí)需要準(zhǔn)備什么。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【答案】Dear Peter，How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition. We will meet at the school gate at 7:00 . this Friday. Then we will go to Beijing International Horticulture Exposition together. We can do a lot of things there. We can not only enjoy the special and beautiful plants but also learn different cultures in various indoor or outdoor shows. We plan to stay there for a whole day. You39。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】1. 題干解讀：這是一篇給材料作文，屬于應(yīng)用文寫作。2. 例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：文章采取郵件格式，時(shí)態(tài)以一般將來時(shí)態(tài)為主。3. 高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：school gate；invite sb. to do；a lot of；plan to do。d better …；I39。11．（自雙創(chuàng)以來，我們的生活環(huán)境得到了很大的改觀，人人積極參與雙創(chuàng)活動(dòng)，讓人點(diǎn)贊的文明行為隨處可見。要求：，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；，并做適當(dāng)?shù)耐卣梗?. 行文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名或地名；4. 詞數(shù)80左右，（短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；Since the government created the civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students,___________________________________________________________________