【正文】 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for your listening.【答案】Good morning, boys and girls! The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks.” Nowadays some students consider it natural to eat well and wear fashionable clothes. They think it is their parents’ duty to provide a happy life for them. However, they don’t show any sense of “Thanks”.I don’t think it’s right. It’s our parents who take good care of us and love us very much. In addition, we are supposed to be thankful to our teachers for teaching us so much knowledge. What’s more, we should say thanks to our friends because they share joy with us and give us courage to overe many difficulties.In my opinion, it’s time for us to learn to express thanks to them. First of all, we should be polite to our parents and teachers. Besides, we should try our best to help others when they are in trouble. Last but not least, we must study harder to make a great contribution to our country in the future. And only in this way can we better reward our parents, teachers, friends and so on.Thanks for your listening.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如provide a happy life，any sense of，take good care of；very much，be supposed to do；be thankful to，so much，share with，what’s more，say thanks to，in my opinion，be polite to，try our best，in trouble，in the future，and so on 等。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。4．（ 寫作要點(diǎn)： 1. 現(xiàn)在的狀態(tài)：為了中考努力學(xué)習(xí)。 （1）百分之四十的學(xué)生業(yè)余時間喜歡聽音樂。 寫作要求： 。 、語言精練、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、條理清晰。 Dear Diary, Today is less than 100 days from the Senior High Entrance Exam. _________________【答案】Dear Diary,Today is less than 100 days from the Senior High Entrance Exam. Now we are studying for the senior high school entrance examination. Today we had a discussion about what do you like during the spare time.40% of the students are fond of listening to music. They strongly believe that it is a good way to make them relaxed. 30% of the students prefer playing puter games. As far as they’re concerned, playing puter games makes them more energetic.As for some students and me, we like doing exercise. Doing exercise is important for us to keep healthy. If we are healthy, we’ll have more chances to get good grades.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，描述同學(xué)們業(yè)余時間喜歡做的活動以及運(yùn)動的好處。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如spare time, be fond of, strongly believe, make sb adj, as far as one’s concerned, keep healthy, have chances to do以及“主將從現(xiàn)”原則。【點(diǎn)睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。初寫短文。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。修改潤色。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。黑龍江中考模擬）（A）話題作文：現(xiàn)在視力不好的人越來越多，有的孩子很小的時候就戴上了眼鏡。六月六日是“全國愛眼日”。內(nèi)容：（1）眼睛的重要性；（2）保護(hù)眼睛的措施：①不要長時間讀書看報；②不要在太強(qiáng)或太弱的光線下看書；③堅持做眼保健操。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。構(gòu)思提綱。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。同時還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。6．（提示問題：1. What’s your hobby?2. Why do you like it?3. When did you start it?4. How do you benefit from（得益于） it?要求：1. 緊扣主題，語言表達(dá)要準(zhǔn)確，語意要通順、連貫；2. 不少于80詞。s always very hot. We can’t do any sports but swim. So I often go swimming with my friends in my hot summer. I began to learn swimming when I was eight years old. And now I am a good swimmer. Last year I got the first prize in a swimming petition. And I hope I can swim in the sea one day.【解析】【詳解】本篇作文按照要求可分為4塊兒內(nèi)容，首先指出我的愛好是什么But my favorite hobby is swimming.，接著說明為什么喜歡這個愛好Because I think it is cool and relaxing....., 然后I began to learn swimming when I was eight years ，最后Last year I got the first prize in a swimming petition. And I hope I can swim in the sea one . 中間用到短語such as…,以及連詞because…., when….and…等，使文章表達(dá)清晰，也具有連貫性，時態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，是一篇不錯的文章。湖北中考模擬）書面表達(dá)近年來，越來越多的中學(xué)將一些電子產(chǎn)品例如電腦、手機(jī)，甚至iPad 等引入了課堂。但人們對此的看法褒貶不一。要點(diǎn)：AgreeSave time, protect the environmentDisagreeToo expensive, easily to fall into the games。Nowadays, more and more electronic products are introduced into class．We can get our homework on the mobile phone and hand it in by 【答案】Nowadays, more and more electronic products are introduced into class．We can get our homework on the mobile phone and hand it in by save some people and protect the environment. Students can watch videos on the they are active in class.Some people think students shouldn’t use puters in are too is easy for students to fall into the games.I think students should use iPad in teachers don’t allow students to play games in is good for students to use iPad in class.【解析】【詳解】根據(jù)題意近年來，越來越多的中學(xué)將一些電子產(chǎn)品例如電腦、手機(jī)，甚至iPad 等引入了課堂。但人們對此的看法褒貶不一。我們所要做的首先是應(yīng)用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。如Some people think students shouldn’t use puters in are too is easy for students to fall into the games. The teachers don’t allow students to play games in ，使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。山東中考模擬）每一次變化都伴隨著我們的成長，作為初中生的你，你感覺自已比起小時候有了哪些變化?請寫一篇文章描述一下你認(rèn)為最明顯的變化?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：When I was……，my mother always read……，Gradually I began to……，Books are……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。開頭介紹了我最大的個人變化是喜歡上讀書，接下來介紹我小時候不喜歡讀書，最后指出現(xiàn)在書籍是我的朋友。9．（現(xiàn)在正在倡導(dǎo)“低碳”生活，只要我們不污染地球的環(huán)境，不浪費(fèi)地球的能源，就能夠讓我們的周圍變得更綠，生活變得更美好。內(nèi)容應(yīng)該包括以下幾點(diǎn)：1. 節(jié)約用水、用電；2. 節(jié)約紙張，循環(huán)使用舊課本，保護(hù)森林；3. 節(jié)約糧食，在更多的土地上種樹；4. 不亂丟雜物，保護(hù)環(huán)境；要求：短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名；80詞左右提示詞：the greenhouse gases lifestyle 低碳生活方式How does our earth turn better?The earth is