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cording to a survey carried out by WHO, the number of teenagers who are nearsighted is the largest in China. As we all know that the eyes are very important for us. So it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight?First, don39。t spend too much time on mobile phones, TV and puters. Secondly, pay attention to the following: Don39。 don39。所提供的表格中列舉了近視的原因和建議。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時。寫作時,避免使用漢語式的英語,盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。寫作中要注意使用祈使句,使上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系,表達具有條理性。本題運用句型:It is +形容詞+for sb. to so sth. 【高分句型二】And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. 當(dāng)你讀這本書的時候,你應(yīng)該把它從你的眼睛里移開一英尺。2.(B)根據(jù)要求完成大作文,詞數(shù):80100 We Get from Sports 的短文,應(yīng)該包含以下要點:1,學(xué)生參加體育運動的興趣不同,理由各異.,通過運動來放松自己.,希望運動能使自己更強壯.,希望運動使自己減肥和保持健康,苗條..:文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的名字和學(xué)校的名字,不計入詞數(shù).:keep slim (保持苗條)What We Get from SportsStudents in our school have one thing in mon an interest in 【答案】Students in our school have one thing in mon an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to bee stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise.In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作主要是談?wù)撟约簩\動的觀點和看法,應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài),寫作要點要包括:。亮點說明:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),語言表達符合英語習(xí)慣,準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài),主謂一致,在文中使用了時間狀語從句,定語從句,特別使用一些亮點詞句,如have fun,in order to,as for,in my opinion等。3.書面表達某英文報舉辦“家鄉(xiāng)的變化”主題征文活動。過去生活條件差,道路狹窄,房屋破舊。......(適當(dāng)發(fā)揮一至兩點)現(xiàn)在環(huán)境:政府采取措施來改善污染,城市變得越來越整潔。越來越多的人有自己的汽車;生活舒適。be in use(投入使用);旅游:每年有成千上萬來自各地的游客。Changes my hometownMy hometown has changed a lot over the years.In the past, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My hometown has changed a lot over the years.In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow. Houses were small and old. Rubbish was everywhere. Few people would like to e to my hometown. Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city bees cleaner and cleaner. The houses are big and bright. Many people have moved into new apartments. More and more people have their own cars and live a fortable life. The new airport has been in use for two years. There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every hope my hometown is being more and more beautiful.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以The Changes in My Hometown為題,介紹一下自己的家鄉(xiāng)這些年來發(fā)生的變化。審題可知,作文的基本框架和大概內(nèi)容都有了,需要注意的是在描寫過去的時候,需要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮一到兩點;還有對將來的希望也需要學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮。表達時,需要注意英語表達習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的,不能逐詞翻譯表格中的語句,而應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮,使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語和句型來表達。語句之間注意使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分,使文意連貫。文章是按照時間的順序,先介紹了家鄉(xiāng)過去的面貌,這一部分使用了過去時態(tài),謂語動詞都變成了過去式,形式準(zhǔn)確。最后對家鄉(xiāng)的未來表達了自己的愿望。文章中語言得體,語句通順,句式表達符合英語的習(xí)慣,語法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確。4.書面表達每個人都有自己心愛的物品,相信你也擁有一個自己心愛的物品吧!請以“A(n) _____ I have”為題,描述一個或一件你心愛的物品,并談?wù)勀闶侨绾蔚玫剿?,以及它存在的意義。3. 語言表達準(zhǔn)確,短文連貫通順,80詞左右。寫作的難度是逐漸加深的,在討論其如何獲得的時候要注意正確使用時態(tài),在談?wù)撘饬x的時候要注意表達的準(zhǔn)確性,避免不熟悉的表達。在描述得到的經(jīng)歷的時候不落俗套,講到了自己的家庭那時比較困難,父親是通過努力工作為我賺錢買槍的,寫作是富有感情的,也通過這段經(jīng)歷為這把玩具槍賦予了一定的意義。5.書面表達難忘的初中三年學(xué)習(xí)生活已經(jīng)接近尾聲,你一定既有收獲又有不足,也有許多對自己未來的期待。注意:。,并補充相關(guān)信息,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。、校名等相關(guān)信息。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文會用一般過去時態(tài)和一般將來時態(tài),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用。寫作亮點:本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,要點齊全,語言簡練。6. 書面表達共享單