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布包著的玩具槍),這里用到了過去分詞作定語,作者還描述了玩具槍的功能(small plastic pills),順便還描述了自己小時候玩槍的經(jīng)歷,準確使用了時態(tài)。A(n) _________ I have__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】A(n) toy gun I haveEveryone has an object that she/ he like best. So do I.In my drawer, there is a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth. It’s a black toy gun and it can shot some small plastic pills for ten meters. When I was young, I played with other kids with my toy gun. They all admired me and put me in the place of leader. I was so happy then. When I was a little boy, I liked watching the war movies best. I was eager to have my own toy gun. One day, it was my birthday. I asked for it when my father came back. My family was poor then and my father didn’t promise me. From then, father worked harder and came back more lately. A week later, father put a box to me. A black toy gun in it! I was moved with tears. In order to get it, father worked late and hurt himself. He died a month later.Now I hope I can be a soldier and own a real gun to protect my country and family. I will remember my father’s love forever. Every time I miss him, I’ll take out the toy gun and say “Thank you, my dear father!【解析】寫作分析:這篇作文需要就自己最喜歡的物品展開描述,要求是進行描述,并談談你是如何得到它的,以及它存在的意義。要求:1. 請在題目空白處填上你心愛物品的名字;2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱。短文里還使用了一些較好的短語和句型,如In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow.、Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city bees cleaner and cleaner、More and more people have their own cars and live a fortable life、There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every 。整篇文章內(nèi)容充實、完整,敘述清晰、條理,結構合理。然后是家鄉(xiāng)現(xiàn)在的樣子,這里主要以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主?!军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,短文作者按照題目要求,介紹了自己的家鄉(xiāng)這些年來的變化。注意句式的多變,長短句結合、簡單句、并列句或復合句穿插使用,提升文章的檔次。這兩個地方需要學生們展開想象,合理發(fā)揮,注意要與文章的其他部分能夠很好的結合起來,內(nèi)容也要統(tǒng)一,符合題目要求,合情合理。題目中用表格的形式,給我們對比的家鄉(xiāng)的過去和現(xiàn)在,我們應用正確的英語將這些內(nèi)容表達出來,并對將來提出兩點希望。將來希望……(兩點)要求:1. 短文的開頭已為你寫好,不計入總詞數(shù);2. 短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點,并適當發(fā)揮,使短文連貫通順;3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名、地名等相關信息。交通:新的飛機場已投入使用多年。生活:住房寬敞明亮;許多人搬進了新公寓。污染嚴重,垃圾遍地。請根據(jù)下表提示,以“The Changes in My Hometown”為題,用英語寫一篇100詞左右的短文,不必逐字逐句翻譯。增強邏輯關系,增加上下文意思連貫,句子通順,行文連貫。(多數(shù)學生的觀點、男生的觀點、女生的觀點)。when you read是由when引導的時間狀語從句?!靖叻志湫鸵弧縎o it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. 所以保持良好的視力對每個人都很重要。語法要正確,表達要符合英語習慣,注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。注意作文中必須包含表格上的所有信息,并適當發(fā)揮。主要從原因和建議兩個方面去介紹。t read in bed or in a moving bus. And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. And thirdly, do eyeexercises every day. You should eat more carrots and other eyefriendly foods. It will also help you keep good eyesight. I think, you may prevent your eyesight from being nearsighted.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文,根據(jù)表格中的相關信息介紹一下如何保護視力。t read in the sun。t keep your eyes work for a long time. Don39。原因1. 不良的看書習慣,如在床上或陽光下看書……2. 長時間玩手機、看電視、玩電腦……3. 學習時間長,作業(yè)多……建議1. 認真做眼保健操2. 多吃胡蘿卜等對眼睛有益的食物3. ……參考詞匯: 近視 nearsighted 注意: 1. 內(nèi)容須包括所提示的信息,可適當發(fā)揮;2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的真實姓名和學校名稱;3. 詞數(shù):80100,開頭已經(jīng)給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。以下表格是學校針對本校學生近視問題做的調查表,假如你是校報編輯Jack,請根據(jù)所提供的信息,用英語寫一篇調查報告,陳述學校調查結果,并表明你自己的觀點和理由?!居⒄Z】九年級下冊英語書面表達解題技巧講解及練習題(含答案)及解析一、英語書面表達1. 世界衛(wèi)生組織的一項研究報告顯示,我國青少年近視率居世界第一。2019年全國兩會當中“小眼鏡”成關注重點,防控青少年近視迫在眉睫。我校學生的近視問題調查情況60%的本校學生戴眼鏡。According to a survey carried out by WHO, the number of teenagers who are nearsighted is the largest in 【答案】Ac