【正文】 用，比如：I like……，Reading can……，When I feel……，When I am lost in……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。開頭介紹了讀書讓我感到快樂，接下來介紹讀書的好處，最后指出我會一生保持讀書的習(xí)慣。5．（6月17日是父親節(jié)，請你根據(jù)你父親的情況，給他寫一封信，談?wù)勀愕目捶ú⒔o他提一些具體的建議。2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱等信息。Dear Dad,This letter is a gift for the Father’s Day.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Happy Father’s Day, Dad!Yours,Tom【答案】Dear Dad,This letter is a gift for the Father’s Day. June 17 is Father39。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。因為是寫給父親的一封書信，因此人稱為第二人稱。要根據(jù)短文提示，把父親身體不好的原因?qū)懬宄?，并提出中肯的建議，表達(dá)出對父親的體貼與關(guān)愛，同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊、行文連貫、表達(dá)清楚。四川成都外國語學(xué)校中考模擬） Writing. Thirtyyear old Sophie has been bullied（欺凌）at school for over two years. She had her bag, keys and mobile phones stolen. Have you ever got in campus bully? Please write a passage with 80120 words about your own opinions. Your passage should include the following points:1. Some mon forms of bullying you’ve seen or experienced. （At least two examples）2. Some effects（影響） on the students who have been bullied at school. （At least two effects）3. Some solutions you consider to solve the problem. （At least three solutions）【答案】Bullying, as far as I know, isin secondary schools. Most of us have seen or even experienced that more or less. I saw John had his money stolen .Sometimes he was made to do the cleaning for others. John often feels afraid and can’t concentrate on his study. Some bullying leads to tragedy consequences, which draw public attention nationwide. First, because students spend most of their time in school and it39。s responsibility to protect them andany forms of bullying. Schools should make rules for , as we all know, parents are the best teachers for children in this world. So they are responsible for their children.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹學(xué)校的欺凌事件。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用?！军c睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。此處as far as I know, more or less, concentrate on, draw public attention, be responsible for 等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。天津中考模擬）書面表達(dá)，星期五早上在上學(xué)的路上目睹了一起交通事故。時間星期五早上七點地點中山路和幸福大街交口事故過程。，女孩并無大礙。你的建議如何做到安全出行（補充兩點具體做法）參考詞匯：檢查make an examination 對……負(fù)責(zé) be responsible for sth.要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80~100個.（2）短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。At seven o’clock on Friday morning there was________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】At seven o’clock on Friday morning there was a traffic accident at the intersection of Zhongshan Road and Happiness Street．I saw this accident when I was waiting to across the road. While the light were changing to red, a girl who was riding a bike suddenly appeared the street. At the same time, a car was ing. It was going very fast and when he noticed the girl. He tried to stop his car, but it was too late. So the car hit the bike and the girl fell down. The driver called 120 and they sent the girl to the hospital. But fortunately, after making an examination, the girl was all right. The girl was still riding while the light is red, so she was responsible for the accident．We should pay attention to safety when crossing the also should obey the traffic rules.【解析】【詳解】首先這是一篇以一般過去時為主的文章，所以要注意時態(tài)。重點句型：（1）While the light were changing to red, a girl who was riding a bike suddenly appeared the street. 當(dāng)紅燈變紅的時候，一個騎自行車的女孩突然出現(xiàn)在街上。（2） He tried to stop his car, but it was too late. 他試圖停車，但為時已晚。（3） I saw this accident when I was waiting to across the road. 我在等過馬路的時候看到了這起事故。8．（你想請他來你的家鄉(xiāng)一安徴一游,請你根據(jù)以下提示用英文給他寫一封電子郵件。,不計入總詞數(shù)Dear DaveI know that you are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not e to Anhui, my home town, to have fun?【答案】Dear Dave，I know you are interested in Chinese culture and I’m glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not e to Anhui, my hometown, to have some fun.Anhui Province lies in the east of China. The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats. There are many famous places to see. For example, Mt. Huangshan, where you will see wonderful plants and special rocks. Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on. As a fan of Chinese culture, don’t forget to try green tea in Anhui which smells good and tastes better. What’s more, e and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!Wele to Anhui! I’m looking forward to seeing you here!Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份給自己的筆友Dave寫信，邀請他來你的家鄉(xiāng)—安徽一游，題目中列出了文章的提綱，審題可知，短文應(yīng)從以下幾個內(nèi)容敘述：首先介紹家鄉(xiāng)的位置；然后介紹來這里最好的時候；接下來是介紹家鄉(xiāng)的景點和文化，并給出建議。寫作時應(yīng)合理安排幾個內(nèi)容，分清主次，并注意上下文的連貫。如可以使用簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)，易于掌握，不容易出錯。【點睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求邀請Dave來自己的家鄉(xiāng)旅游，并介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的景點和文化。短文先對Dave發(fā)出邀請，然后具體介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的位置、景點、文化等，并提出了建議。第二，短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主，也使用了并列句、賓語從句、狀語從句等復(fù)合句，還有一些好的句型，如The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats、Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on.、What’s more, e and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!、I’m looking forward to seeing you here!等。上海市澧溪中學(xué)初三期中）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Yesterday once more”.（以“昨日重現(xiàn)”為題寫一篇不少于60詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。記憶中有沒有讓你留下深刻印象的人、事或物，對你現(xiàn)在的生活造成了影響。（注意：段文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。在寫作時應(yīng)注意選取一個給你留下深刻印象的人、事或物，對你現(xiàn)在的生活造成了影響。：例文采用三段式：用第一人稱來敘述故事內(nèi)容：時態(tài)采用一般過去式為主，敘述過去的經(jīng)歷，敘述完整清晰。句型：such…that…；so…that…引導(dǎo)的結(jié)