【正文】 will happen during the same period of our Winter Camp. And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn Canal. What’s more, I hope to learn more about London Canal Museum and even more about the UK.I’m looking forward to your reply!Yours,Li Hua【解析】這篇作文要求我們以中學(xué)生李華的身份，給Liz Payne寫一個留言。寫作時，應(yīng)根據(jù)題目的這些要求，組織語言，串聯(lián)成一篇短文。注意英語句子的表達(dá)和漢語習(xí)慣是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，而應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，使用正確的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以及適當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語和句型，保證句子的準(zhǔn)確性和語言的地道。穿插一些高級詞匯和復(fù)雜句式，提升文章檔次和水平，使表達(dá)更加流暢。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目要求的所有信息，沒有遺漏要點。如果分段敘述效果則會更好，那樣會使文章的層次更加清晰。短文以簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，也使用了一些復(fù)合句和較高級的句型，如I’m writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter ；From , I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals” February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter ；And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn 。3．（（1）上周晚飯后玲玲和媽媽一起出去散步，在社區(qū)的門口看見一個錢包；（2）玲玲把錢包撿起，發(fā)現(xiàn)錢包里有身份證和一些錢；（3）玲玲和媽媽把錢包交給保安，保安把這個消息發(fā)到小區(qū)的微信群中；（4）失主看到消息后，過來取回錢包并對玲玲和媽媽表示感謝；（5）你覺得……參考詞匯：社區(qū) munity 身份證 ID card 保安 guard 微信群 Wechat group 失主 owner要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80～100個。（3）要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，以“The Story of Lingling”為題，為社區(qū)宣傳專欄寫一篇短文，介紹在玲玲身上發(fā)生的一件事。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，考生要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。在寫作時，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。4．（要點如下： （1）. 雖然你大部分功課你都學(xué)得比較好，但是你對自己不滿意。 （2）. 你的父母對你嚴(yán)格要求，但是也很關(guān)心你。他們希望你們實現(xiàn)自己的理想。 （2）. 第2要點和第3要點要用2—3句話作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Hello!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Li Ming【答案】例文Hello!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. I have got good results in most of my subjects, but I am not happy with myself. I think I must spend more time on my studies.My parents are really strict with me. However, they care for me as well. Once upon a time, I failed in my physics exam and felt stressed and sad. They had a close munication with me and helped me solve my problems and cheer up again.My teachers are also ready to help us. They hope that we can realize our dreams. They tell us to try our best and not to give up. Life is always full of ups and downs. It39。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。初寫短文。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。修改潤色。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。重慶一中中考模擬）書面表達(dá)。我們，可以獨自出游么？”這是本月我校英語“煩惱墻”上最令人關(guān)注的內(nèi)容，并引發(fā)了大家的熱烈討論。參考要點：1. 解讀“煩惱墻”內(nèi)容； 2. 陳述你的觀點及理由；3. 提出合理的相關(guān)建議。Can Teenagers Take a Trip Alone?Nowadays, there is a message on the Trouble Wall attracting most of the students’ attention.______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Can Teenagers Take a Trip Alone?Nowadays, there is a message on the Trouble Wall attracting most of the students’ attention. The summer vacation is ing, and we hope to take a trip alone, but our parents don’t allowed us to do that, what should we do then? I like to travel to different places with my friends, so in my opinion, teenagers should be allowed to travel by ourselves. Here are my reasons.Firstly, we can see the beautiful scenery and get to know the different cultures. Secondly, our parents are too busy, so it’s difficult for them to acpany us all the time, we have to learn to look after ourselves. Traveling is a good way to train our selfcare capacity. But we need to get ready to deal with something unusual that may happen during the trip. But considering the safety, we must make plans in advance. Take notes of some important selfhelp knowledge. All in all, traveling alone is good.【解析】【分析】這是一篇話題議論文。解讀“煩惱墻”內(nèi)容并陳述自己的觀點——青少年應(yīng)該被允許獨自旅行。分條逐一闡明理由并提出合理的相關(guān)建議。6．（請給她寫封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：（1）表示歉意；（2）說明原因；（3）另約時間。主要從表示歉意；說明原因；另約時間這三個方面去介紹。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。語法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縄’m very sorry to say that I cannot go to the history museum with you on Saturday morning. 很抱歉，我星期六早上不能和你一起去歷史博物館了?！靖叻志湫投縄f it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8: 30 outside the school gate. 如果方便的話，我們8:30在校門外見面。7．（請你按照以下提示給他回一封。參考詞匯：霧霾haze注意：1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；2. 語言通順，句子連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；3. 詞數(shù)80左右，信件的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。題目中列出了三個要點，我們應(yīng)根據(jù)這些要點提示，來組織語言，充實內(nèi)容。因此文章應(yīng)主要分成三段，一個內(nèi)容一段。寫作時，應(yīng)注意英語句式表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，寫完整的句子，利用簡單句的基本句型，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文中作者根據(jù)題目要求介紹了自己家鄉(xiāng)治理霧霾的情況，并結(jié)合自身的實際情況，講述了自己日常生活中是如何做的。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，作者根據(jù)表達(dá)需要使用了一般過去時、一般將來時態(tài)和一般將來時態(tài)，動詞形式變化準(zhǔn)確，語法規(guī)范。句子結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主，也使用了一些并列句和復(fù)合句，長短句結(jié)合，使文章富有節(jié)奏。8．（請你根據(jù)提示以＂Bikesharing＂為題寫一篇英語短文，表達(dá)自己的看法和建議。Bikesharing Today, as a greener means of transportation, bikesharing is being more and more popular in many cities. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Today,as a greener means of transportation, bikesharing is being more and more popular in many cities. It39。s enjoyed by lots of people.First of all, it39。s helpful to people39。在短文中使用了大量的復(fù)合句、固定句式、連詞及固定短語，為文章增色不少，.如: It39。s very convenient for people to go somewhere.，Also, Besides, In t