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For example, I want to get some books about western history. Next, I’m not so good at English, I have trouble in reading. Would you please share some good books with me and give me some advice on reading?I expect to hear from you soon.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這是一篇書(shū)信作文。請(qǐng)給你的英國(guó)朋友Nick寫(xiě)一封向他求助。在寫(xiě)作時(shí),要注意理順要點(diǎn),防止漏寫(xiě);注意緊扣主題,連句成篇,要層次清楚,要點(diǎn)分明,中心突出。最后,要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等,還要檢查字?jǐn)?shù)是否符合要求。(如:缺少相關(guān)書(shū)籍、英語(yǔ)閱讀困難……);。江蘇中考模擬)書(shū)面表達(dá)隨著中國(guó)國(guó)際地位的日益提高,越來(lái)越多的外國(guó)友人開(kāi)始關(guān)注中國(guó)。請(qǐng)認(rèn)真閱讀下面的郵件,并根據(jù)信中的內(nèi)容及你的了解用英語(yǔ)回復(fù)。s February. It39。m having a long summer vacation. I39。s the season in China now?●What39。,信的首尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear David,I39。m sure you39。所提供的材料中問(wèn)到了關(guān)于中國(guó)的幾個(gè)問(wèn)題:●What39。s the most popular festival at this time of the year and what do you do during the festival? ●Which city in China is worth a visit and what can I do there? ●What gifts can I choose for my Australian friends and relatives? 主要從這幾個(gè)方面去介紹。注意作文中必須包含電子郵件上的所有信息,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。語(yǔ)法要正確,表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣,注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題?!靖叻志湫鸵弧縂uilin is worth a visit if you like natural views. 如果你喜歡自然風(fēng)光,桂林值得一游?!靖叻志湫投縄’m sure you’ll have a wonderful time here. 我相信你會(huì)在這里過(guò)得很愉快。6.(要點(diǎn)包括: 1. 變化是什么?2. 變化是如何發(fā)生的?3. 變化后有什么感受?___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The biggest personal change I’ve ever made is falling in love with rending.When I was a child, I didn’t enjoy reading books at all. Later, my mother always read stories for me and bought me a lot of books. Gradually I began to love reading. While reading, I feel like I am talking with a wise man. Reading is also a fantastic way to pass my free time.Books are my friends. They will continue to benefit me even more.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文,介紹我比起小時(shí)候有了哪些變化。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用?!军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。此處fall in love in, at all, buy sb sth, begin to do sth, love doing sth, feel like, talk with, continue to do sth等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。陜西師大附中中考模擬)書(shū)面表達(dá)“文明是一面鏡子,折射出一座城市的品質(zhì)”。在你身邊有哪些不文明現(xiàn)象?作為中學(xué)生,我們應(yīng)該從哪些方面做起,為文明城市的建設(shè)出一份力?請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示詞,以“Let’s help Xi’an be better”為題,號(hào)召全體中學(xué)生共創(chuàng)美好西安。 traffic rules。 collect the trash。 clean the streets。Let’s help Xi’an be betterOur city is making its effort to bee an international city. But in our daily life, we find_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Let’s help Xi’an be betterOur city is making its effort to bee an international city. But in our daily life, we find many bad behaviors around us. For example, many students spit everywhere. Some students don’t follow the traffic rules. Also, some students don’t respect others. These are not right. As students, we should do our part to build a civilized city. We can plant more trees to make our environment better. On weekends, we can help clean the streets and collect the trash in public places. Besides, we can do volunteer work to help others. Let’s work together to make our city more civilized and more beautiful.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們闡述身邊的不文明現(xiàn)象,并闡述我們應(yīng)該如何做,為文明城市的建設(shè)出一份力。需要注意題目中給出的提示詞在文章中必須要用上,可以根據(jù)表達(dá)需要調(diào)整順序。審題可知,短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主,第一人稱來(lái)敘述。為提升文章檔次,在文章中應(yīng)穿插幾個(gè)并列句或復(fù)合句的結(jié)構(gòu)?!军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,短文作者根據(jù)題目提示,介紹了自己身邊的不文明現(xiàn)象,并對(duì)中學(xué)生如何創(chuàng)建文明城市貢獻(xiàn)自己的力量提出了自己的看法。文章內(nèi)容分成兩個(gè)部分:第一部分列舉了一些不文明現(xiàn)象;第二部分介紹了為創(chuàng)建文明城市,中學(xué)生應(yīng)該怎么做。其次短文使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱,語(yǔ)法規(guī)范,用詞準(zhǔn)確。短文中的一些好的句型和短語(yǔ)有Also, some students don’t respect others、As students, we should do our part to build a civilized city.、We can plant more trees to make our environment better. 、On weekends, we can help clean the streets and collect the trash in public places. 、Besides, we can do volunteer work to help others等。黑龍江中考模擬)Writing現(xiàn)在視力不好的人越來(lái)越多,有的孩子很小的時(shí)候就戴上了眼鏡。六月六日是“全國(guó)愛(ài)眼日”。內(nèi)容:(1)眼睛的重要性;(2)保護(hù)眼睛的措施:①不要長(zhǎng)時(shí)間讀書(shū)看報(bào);②不要在太強(qiáng)或太弱的光線下看書(shū);③堅(jiān)持做眼保健操。2)要求字跡工整,語(yǔ)法正確,意思連貫,合乎邏輯,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮?!驹斀狻扛鶕?jù)題目要求可知,本文說(shuō)的時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。第三部分:再次點(diǎn)題,并提出號(hào)召——現(xiàn)在開(kāi)始養(yǎng)成保護(hù)眼睛的好習(xí)慣。無(wú)錫市江南中學(xué)中考模擬)書(shū)面表達(dá)親子關(guān)系是目前廣受關(guān)注的話題。通過(guò)搜集資料,你查找到中國(guó)青少年研究中心(CYCRC)近日就中美兩國(guó)親子關(guān)系進(jìn)行了問(wèn)卷調(diào)查,結(jié)果如下表。ChinaUSKids often talk to their parents%89%Kids think their parents understand them61%%Kids have different ideas from their parents%76%Kids have different ideas from their parents mostly because of…Schoolwork (%)Pocket money (20%)注意事項(xiàng):;、意思連貫、符合情境;,首尾已經(jīng)在答題卡上給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);4. 內(nèi)容必須寫(xiě)在答題卡指定的位置。寫(xiě)作前,應(yīng)仔細(xì)審題,觀察所給表格,弄清楚表格中每一項(xiàng)的內(nèi)容以及它的意義。短文應(yīng)主要以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主,第一人稱和第三人稱來(lái)敘述。合理安排各部分內(nèi)容之間的關(guān)系,注意分清結(jié)構(gòu),表達(dá)要有條理。句式結(jié)構(gòu)要完整,可以簡(jiǎn)單句為基礎(chǔ),穿插使用并列句和復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜句式?!军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,短文作者根據(jù)題目要求,介紹了中美兩國(guó)親子關(guān)系的對(duì)比,并結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際對(duì)如何與父母相處,發(fā)表了個(gè)人看法。短文分三段:第一段引出文章的話題parentchild relationship,點(diǎn)明文章主旨Here’s my understanding of how to get along well with our parents;第二段對(duì)調(diào)查結(jié)果的第一項(xiàng)內(nèi)容進(jìn)行了介紹,并結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷,講述了如何與父母相處。其次短文使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱,語(yǔ)法規(guī)范,用詞準(zhǔn)確,語(yǔ)句通順。行文連貫、自然,表達(dá)流暢。10.(請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封倡議書(shū)。塑料袋。要求:1詞數(shù):80100;,適當(dāng)發(fā)揮?!敬鸢浮緿ear classmates,As we all know,the earth is in trouble because of the way we are polluting one of us must do something to help save our ,transportation is the main factor of air we should walk more instead of ,industrial pollution is water from factories is poured into rivers and lakes and this causes water ,we should stop using plastic bags when we go ,remember to turn off the lights and taps whenever we’re not using them and we should plant more trees to protect our earth.The Students’ Union【解析】【詳解】這是一篇要求假如你是學(xué)生會(huì)主席, 你校學(xué)生會(huì)打算以“保護(hù)環(huán)境”為主題搞 一次社會(huì)實(shí)踐。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn),圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料,然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái),在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系,語(yǔ)意連貫。山東中考模擬)寫(xiě)作現(xiàn)在,戴眼鏡的學(xué)生越來(lái)越多,為此,國(guó)家把每年 6 月 6 日定為愛(ài)眼日。提示:1.吃有益于眼睛的食物,如胡蘿卜、雞蛋等;2.多做眼保健操,長(zhǎng)時(shí)間用眼后可看看遠(yuǎn)方;3.養(yǎng)成良好的用眼習(xí)慣,如:不躺著玩手機(jī)或看書(shū)等。(開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)) Nowadays, more and more students are getting near173。sighted, so National Eye Care Day is set on June 6th every year