【正文】 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】School safetyMore and more people pay special attention to the school safety nowadays. Here are some rules to keep us safe.First, as students, we should follow the school rules, such as not being late for school and leaving school early. Second, we shouldn’t go with strangers and we shouldn’t accept things from strangers. Third, it’s better for us to have partners on the way home and to school and we must get home before dark. Fourth, if we are in trouble, don’t forget to tell our parents or teachers as soon as possible.I think these rules are good for us. We must obey them.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下校園安全。主要從1. 遵守校規(guī)，按時(shí)到校、離校；2. 不接受陌生人的物品；3. 結(jié)伴同行，天黑前到家；4. 遇到麻煩及時(shí)告知家長和老師。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。語法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縎econd, we shouldn’t go with strangers and we shouldn’t accept things from strangers. 第二，我們不應(yīng)該和陌生人一起去，也不應(yīng)該接受陌生人的東西?！靖叻志湫投縄 think these rules are good for us. 我認(rèn)為這些規(guī)則對我們有好處。4．（上周我班學(xué)生對如何減壓、放松進(jìn)行了討論。請根據(jù)提示，以How Can We get relaxed為題，寫一篇短文。（2）開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。The students offered different good suggestions. As well as going to the movie, listening to music, even going sightseeing at the weekends, some students think it a good way to take exercise between lessons. After all, too long study without exercise is harmful to our health. Other students feel it important to municate with our parents. We can get help from them when we are in trouble.In my opinion, we should spend a little time developing our hobbies like reading or doing sports while working hard. In this way, we can get relaxed and reduce the pressure.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，主要講述如何減壓放松。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如as well as，a good way to，take exercise，after all，be harmful to，municate with，get help from，be in trouble，in my opinion，spend+時(shí)間+（in）doing以及in this way，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。構(gòu)思提綱。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。5．（假如你是其中的一名志愿者，請根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇150字左右的英語短文。（以上背景內(nèi)容無需表達(dá)） 內(nèi)容提示： ，幫助他們做家務(wù)活；，排隊(duì)候車，不隨地吐痰、不亂扔垃圾；不在公共場所抽煙、喧嘩（比如在圖書館或博物館），不撒謊，不說臟話；，幫助別人；坐車時(shí)請讓座給老人，殘疾人，尤其抱小孩的婦女；，做到紅燈停，綠燈行；。t forget to protect our environment. Though we are young, we can still do something to help. I’m sure our city will bee more and more beautiful and cleaner as long as we all try our best to do something for it!【解析】【詳解】本文就具體的話題給出一定的范圍。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示，至少包括五個(gè)點(diǎn)：we should respect our parents at home。We should never spit or litter everywhere。及we should be polite and helpful to others等。t forget to protect our environment補(bǔ)充作者個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)。文中針對現(xiàn)象提出想法，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，且用第一人稱陳述。重慶中考模擬）書面表達(dá)。作為即將畢業(yè)的初中學(xué)生，我們也是時(shí)候該思考我們的職業(yè)生涯規(guī)劃了。寫作要求:：80—120詞；。s more, to be a teacher could contribute a lot both to their students and to the society. To be a teacher should be interesting but challenging. So I must study hard to learn a lot of knowledge and I should learn how to get on well with others. If I have a chance one day, I will choose to be a teacher.【解析】【分析】這是一篇話題作文，以My Career Planning為話題，介紹我的職業(yè)規(guī)劃。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。此處a variety of, what’s more, both…and…，get on well with, choose to do sth等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。江蘇中考模擬）加入你是英國交流學(xué)生 Neil，你在南京 Sunshine Middle School 兩個(gè)月的學(xué)習(xí)生活即將結(jié)束。216。ve learned about Chinese culture216。 what your homestay family do for you注意：1. 對所有要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。3. 文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。根據(jù)以下提示，以 Neil的名義，用英語給 Sunshine Middle School 校長寫一封感謝信。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，考生要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。在寫作時(shí)，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。8．（臨近中考，壓力驟增，父母的嘮叨，老師的殷殷期望，自己的學(xué)業(yè)與夢想……傾訴是一副良方。請根據(jù)以下提示寫一封給自己的信。第一段指出導(dǎo)致壓力的兩個(gè)方面First,I can’t ignore my parents’ expectation . Second, there is endless homework and tests every , Second點(diǎn)出。用What’s more表遞進(jìn)結(jié)構(gòu)。整篇文章層次分明，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。安徽中考模擬）假如你是李華，你的美國朋友Johnson打算暑假來合肥玩，而合肥的夏天經(jīng)常持續(xù)高溫，請你根據(jù)以下提示，用英文給他寫一封郵件，告訴他防暑降溫的方法。Dear Johnson Wele to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some advice on how to beat the summer I hope the advice is useful to you. Wish you a good holiday! Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack, Wele to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some advice on how to beat the summer heat. First of all, you should drink more water and eat light meals, such as salads, fruit and vegetables. Next, you’d better get some sleep after lunch. Don’t stay up and make sure you get enough sleep. It’s not a good idea to stay out when it’s very hot. What39。在文章最后可以提出自己的期望和祝福。本篇文章首先第一段對別人的到來表示歡迎，接著對合肥的天氣進(jìn)行總的描述，并引出下文自己的建議。用first of all, Next, What39。結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，層次分明，詞語及句型使用正確，很不錯(cuò)的一篇文章。北京中考模擬）題目①假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校的英國友好校下周將要來訪。你想成為志愿者。提示詞語：get along with, friendly, places of interest, Chinese dishes提示問題：1. Why would you like to be a volunteer?2. What do you plan to do during the weekend?Dear Sir/Madam，I would like to be a volunteer to receive the British students. I39。s easy for me to get along well with them.I have some plans for the of all，there are a lot of places of interest in Beijing，so I plan to take them to some places like the Great Wall，the Forbidden City and so on.I39。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours，Li lHua【解析】【分析】本篇是材料作文，以書信格式，根據(jù)所給材料寫申請信；書寫時(shí)材料要用全，注意緊扣主題，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)。，第一層闡述自己申請的理由，介紹自己開朗的性格適合志愿者的