【正文】 用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，描述具體建議時(shí)，描寫細(xì)致，條理清晰。句型：Though I am not good at cooking, I can ask my mother for help；I am eager to receive your early reply。湖南中考模擬）假如你是李華，請你根據(jù)以下提示用英語寫一封保護(hù)大象的倡議書。目前數(shù)量在減少，因?yàn)椋?）人們砍伐森林，大象漸漸失去家園；2）人們捕殺大象，獲取象牙。要求：1）恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用比較級(jí)和最高級(jí)；2）80詞左右。參考詞匯：哺乳動(dòng)物mammal。s contribution （貢獻(xiàn)） can make a big difference. Yours,Lihua【答案】Dear classmates,Elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in the forest, so elephants are losing their homes. Secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.As a result, we need to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the law to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants. I believe everyone39。文章共分為三個(gè)方面的內(nèi)容，首先描述大象想在所處的現(xiàn)狀，然后說明出現(xiàn)這種狀況的原因，最后為了保護(hù)的大象我們應(yīng)該如何去做。提出倡議時(shí)可以使用We can/ We should/ Let’s/We’d better的表示建議的句子。本篇文章內(nèi)容完整，符合材料要求，Elephants are the largest mammals …,及First, we should plant more trees 也使用到了比較級(jí)和最高級(jí)；Firstly,…. Secondly,…等詞的使用使文章具有層次性，條理清晰。6．（請你用英語給他寫一封電子郵件，告訴他集合的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)，你們將在孤兒院做什么，以及他可以做什么準(zhǔn)備。本材料給的提示比較多，學(xué)生可以按照提示，進(jìn)行問題的回答即可。【詳解】文章為邀請信，開頭問候，點(diǎn)明寫信內(nèi)容，寫信是為了邀請你和我們一起參加希望之家的志愿活動(dòng)。同時(shí)，建議對方做一些事情，可以向孩子們展示一下你的家鄉(xiāng)?！军c(diǎn)睛】本書面表達(dá)：這篇文章語言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，敘述清楚，語句通順，意思連貫，文章具有條理性，思維縝密。（2）列好提綱和要點(diǎn)及需要的重要短語或句型。注意表達(dá)的順序。（5）注意檢查：單詞拼寫、語法、動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、語序、主謂一致等。湖南省岳陽開發(fā)區(qū)長嶺中學(xué)中考模擬）時(shí)光荏苒，轉(zhuǎn)眼間你已經(jīng)成長為一名即將步入高中的青少年。請你以“_______ makes me happy”為題并根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)提示, 寫一篇英語短文給校英語廣播站投稿，跟大家分享一下使你快樂的事情及理由。要求: 1. 請補(bǔ)全標(biāo)題, 如reading，traveling或helping others等；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3. 詞數(shù)80左右，短文的標(biāo)題已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I like……，Reading can……，When I feel……，When I am lost in……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。開頭介紹了讀書讓我感到快樂，接下來介紹讀書的好處，最后指出我會(huì)一生保持讀書的習(xí)慣。8．（你認(rèn)為健康的生活習(xí)慣應(yīng)該是怎樣的呢？請根據(jù)以下的信息提示，寫一篇短文。要求：必須包括所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；80詞左右；文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校名和地名。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。構(gòu)思提綱。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。9．（上周我班學(xué)生對如何減壓、放松進(jìn)行了討論。請根據(jù)提示，以How Can We get relaxed為題，寫一篇短文。（2）開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。The students offered different good suggestions. As well as going to the movie, listening to music, even going sightseeing at the weekends, some students think it a good way to take exercise between lessons. After all, too long study without exercise is harmful to our health. Other students feel it important to municate with our parents. We can get help from them when we are in trouble.In my opinion, we should spend a little time developing our hobbies like reading or doing sports while working hard. In this way, we can get relaxed and reduce the pressure.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，主要講述如何減壓放松。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如as well as，a good way to，take exercise，after all，be harmful to，municate with，get help from，be in trouble，in my opinion，spend+時(shí)間+（in）doing以及in this way，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。構(gòu)思提綱。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。10．（她在信中訴說了她的煩惱，請你根據(jù)Lucy的來信，用英語寫一封90詞左右的回信。Dear Lucy,I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks._______________________________________All the best!Betty【答案】Dear Lucy,I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks.In recent years, electronic books, as a product of information technology, have gained more and more popularity. It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits. For one thing, they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. For another, their appearance will make paperwaste less.However, as every coin has two sides, electronic books also have some disadvantages. For example, long time of reading ebooks does harm to our eyes. And there are more radiation which is harmful to people39。s an useful product. I think that ebooks are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over.All the best!Betty【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如in recent years，as a product of，live in，more and more，so…that，for example，do harm to，be harmful to，in my opinion，take the place of，instead of等。s body./ I think that ebooks are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。山東中考模擬） 書面表達(dá) 你的的筆友Tom居住在北京，請根據(jù)表格中提供的信息，介紹一下他的情況。旅游曾經(jīng)去過長城，故宮等名勝。工作情況早晨8點(diǎn)起床，乘坐地鐵去上班，空余時(shí)間練習(xí)漢語。I have a pen friend named Tom. 【答案】I have a pen friend named Tom. It has been two years since he came to China and worked in Beijing. And he has been to the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and other places of interest. He used to like to read science fictions. Now he is very interested in Chinese classical books and has read 2 classics. He gets up at 8 . and takes the subway to work every day, and practices Chinese in his spare time. He teaches English in a middle school in Beijing. He works hard. He likes China. He hopes to go to a lot of different places, know about Chinese culture and taste Chinese food in the future.【解析】試題分析：本文是材料作文。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文使用的時(shí)態(tài)有一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，一般過去式和現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無拼寫，語法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)，主謂一致等）。It has been two years since he came to China and worked in . 曾經(jīng)去過長城，故宮等名勝。He used to like to read science fictions. Now he is very interested in Chinese classical books and has read 2 . 早晨8點(diǎn)起床，乘坐地鐵去上班，空余時(shí)間練習(xí)漢語。He hopes to go to a lot of different places, know about Chinese culture and taste Chinese food.（二）根據(jù)提綱連詞成句，連句成篇，注意連詞的使用。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文，語言表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確、句子通順。（2）注意給出的起始句（這就給出了時(shí)態(tài)），學(xué)生運(yùn)