【正文】 【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，針對某位同學(xué)考前焦慮進(jìn)行安慰，分析原因并給出消除焦慮的建議。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如hear from sb, get good grades, as far as I’m concerned, the+比較級，the+比較級，as long as, first of all, what’s more, make sb do以及only+狀語放句首，用半倒裝。【點(diǎn)睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。初寫短文。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。修改潤色。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。黑龍江中考模擬）話題作文：構(gòu)建文明和諧的社會是實現(xiàn)中國夢的一個重要組成部分，請你圍繞構(gòu)建和諧社會（build a harmonious society）寫一篇文章。（B）圖示作文：仔細(xì)觀察下列圖片，展開合理想象，寫一篇作文。（2）詞數(shù)在80～100詞之間。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Build a harmonious societyBuilding a “harmonious society” plays an important part in achieving Chinese Dreams. As middle school students, what should we do?First of all, we should love our motherland. Let’s take a great interest in the development of our hometowns and take an active part in our school’s activities. Secondly, let’s fill the world with love. We should show our respect for old people, our parents and our teachers. We should also care for each other and help those in need. Finally, let’s work together to save energy and protect our environment, including animals, trees, flowers and grass.Let’s start right now and try our best a little bit every day, every hour, and every minute!（B） My friend Li Ming had an accident yesterday.When school was over, Li Ming went to play basketball with his classmates on the playground. They played very happily. Suddenly, Li Ming fell down and hurt his legs. He couldn’t help crying. His classmates hurried to take him to the hospital. The doctor looked him over carefully and he had to stay in hospital for a few days. His classmates all went to see him with some flowers. Li Ming felt very happy.What good children his classmates are!【解析】【詳解】A篇：這是一篇話題作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下如何才能構(gòu)建文明和諧的社會。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一人稱。寫作時，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。本題是由and 連接的句子。這句話的語言很好。圖片顯示的內(nèi)容是：圖一，打籃球；圖二，有一個學(xué)生摔倒了，腿受傷了；圖三，同學(xué)們趕忙送他去醫(yī)院。主要從這四個方面去介紹。注意作文中必須包含圖片上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。語法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。【高分句型一】The doctor looked him over carefully and he had to stay in hospital for a few days. 醫(yī)生仔細(xì)地檢查了他，他不得不住院幾天?！靖叻志湫投縒hat good children his classmates are! 他的同學(xué)們多好??！這句話是由what引導(dǎo)的感嘆句。從寫作體裁上看，可說明介紹，可敘事記人、可寫景狀物，也可以發(fā)表議論。想寫好看圖作文，必須遵循以下步驟：1. 仔細(xì)審題、弄清題目要求首先，必須通讀試題中的每一個字，認(rèn)真觀察所給的每一幅圖畫，正確理解提示所提出的各種要求，從而明確作文的中心思想，判斷文章的類型、特點(diǎn)，了解文章的重點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，力求切中題意。4. 列出要點(diǎn)，組織語言在認(rèn)真審題、弄清題意的基礎(chǔ)上，我們應(yīng)逐個完整無誤地把內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)列出來，我們可以在每幅圖畫的旁邊用簡單的詞語標(biāo)出其所表達(dá)的要點(diǎn)，這樣，既可以提醒自己不要漏寫了要點(diǎn)，又能防止過分發(fā)揮。要注意使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞或過渡性語句，以使上下文更為連貫，過渡自然。如果是可有可無的細(xì)節(jié)，則可視具體情況進(jìn)行增刪。6. 仔細(xì)檢查、修改文章寫完后，應(yīng)進(jìn)行必要的檢查、修改，力求全文內(nèi)容表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、完整，并最大限度減少錯誤。天津中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假定你今天是英語課上的值日生，請根據(jù)表中信息完成主題為“班級新聞”的值日報告。好人好事1. 昨天全班為希望工程捐書200本，捐書包50個，捐款4200元；2. 李明周一生病了，班長把他送到了醫(yī)院簡要評價要求：（1）報告必須包括表中全部內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，但不要逐條翻譯；（2）報告的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出（不計入總詞數(shù)），你只需接著寫；（3）詞數(shù)在80100左右。本文人稱主要是第一和第三人稱，使用的時態(tài)有一般現(xiàn)在時、一般過去時、現(xiàn)在完成時和一般將來時，一定注意時態(tài)的轉(zhuǎn)換。短文必須包含所給要點(diǎn)，條理清楚，字?jǐn)?shù)80100左右。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語法錯誤（時態(tài)、主謂一致等）。我來告訴你一些演講比賽的情況。在老師的幫助下，她努力工作，在周三下午的英語演講比賽中獲得了第一名。為“希望工程”捐贈了200本書、50個書包和4200元。我們豐富多彩的學(xué)校生活帶給我們?nèi)绱硕嗟男腋?，我們將永遠(yuǎn)記住這些日子。考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號等的正確運(yùn)用。寫作六步法：：文體，時態(tài)，人稱。：通過增加狀語，定語，連詞，使句子意思飽滿充實。：拼寫是否錯誤，語法時態(tài)是否正確，連詞是否恰當(dāng)?shù)取?0．（請根據(jù)下表所提示的內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇短文，并發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。（2）開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。The survey shows that many students have bee shortsighted at a very young age. At present,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The survey shows that many students have bee shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes.Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use puters for a long time.In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表作文。內(nèi)容包括：學(xué)生近視原因：（not enough）、做作業(yè)、用電腦等（for a long time）防止近視的方法：，多進(jìn)行體育活動（eye exercises）（have the good habit of）個人觀點(diǎn)：如：我認(rèn)為，我們應(yīng)該了解保護(hù)眼睛的重要性，盡最大努力保護(hù)我們的眼睛。s best to do sth.）。11．（要求：、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個；、校名，否則以零分計；3. 請將短文寫在答題卡上。【答案】I’d Like to Say “Sorry” to My TeacherHow time flies! I will graduate in a few months. I always feel sorry for one thing in my heart. I’d like to say sorry to my English teacher, Mrs. Chen.When I began to learn English, I hated remembering new words. So I wasn’t good at English. Once I copied my deskmate’s paper during an English exam and handed it in. I got an “A”. Mrs. Chen didn’t know the truth and praised me in class. Now I still remember her words clearly, “ It’s a good beginning. I believe you will be better and better.” When I heard these words, I really felt regretful in my heart. I decided to tell Mrs. Chen the t