【正文】 y healthy for a small child is therefore provided by a television series in which a boy and a girl are supposed to be exploring distant plas with their parents. In each story, they encounter strange monsters and find themselves in dangerous situations but the parents are reassuring and sensible, as a child’s paprents should be in real life. There is an adult character who is a coward and liar, but both the children are brave and , of course, every story ends happily. In my view, children should be exposed to the problems of real life as soon as possible, but they cannont help seeing these through news programs. When they are being entertained, the healthiest atmosphere is one which the hero and heroine are children like themselves who behave naturally and confidently in any situation. 7. The ony thing people are interesed in today is earing more money Once upon a time there lived a beautiful young woman and a handsome young man. They were very poor, but as they were deeply in love, they wanted to get married. The young people’s parents shook their heads. ―You can’t get married yet.‖ They said. Wait till you get a good job with good prospects. So the young people waited until they found good jobs with good prospects and they were able to get married. They were still poor, of course, they didn’t have a house to live in or any furniture, but that did’t matter. They young man had a good job with good prospects, so large anizations lent him the money he needed to buy a house, some furniture, all the latest electrical appliances and a car. The couple lived happily ever after paying off debts for the rest of their lves. And so ends another modern romantic fable. We live in a materialistic society and are trained from our earlist years to be acquistive. Our possessions, yours and mine are clearly labeled from early childhood. When we grow old enough to earn a living, it does not surpise us to discover that success is measured in terms of the money you earn. We spend the whole of ourlives keeping up with our neighbors, the Joneses. If we buy a new television set , Jones is bound to buy a bigger and better one. If we buy a new car, we can be sure that Jones will go one better and get two new cars: one for his wife and one for himself. The most amusing thing about this game is that Joneses and all the neighbors who are struggling frantically to keep up with them are spending borrowed money kindly provided, at a suitable rate of interest, of course, by friendly banks, insurance panies, etc. It is not only affluent societies that people are obsessed with the idea of making more money. Consumer goods are desirable everywhere and modern industry deliberately sets out to create new markets. Gone are the days when industrial goods were made to last forever. The wheels of industry must be kept turning. Builtin obsolescence provides the means。根 據(jù)近年博士生入學(xué)英語考試的作文試卷統(tǒng)計(jì)，許多考生未熟練掌握造句技能甚至不能保證單詞拼寫正確 、句子無重大語法錯(cuò)誤。 、 3． 語言規(guī)范 語言的規(guī)范涉及面廣。由于受漢語“意合”的影響，中國(guó)學(xué)生常忽略過渡詞語的運(yùn)用。所以，在英語文章內(nèi)，諸如等過渡詞語特別多。 2） 過渡詞語的運(yùn)用 —— 語篇的外在連貫手段 有時(shí)，單靠邏輯上的連貫對(duì)英語語篇來說是很不夠的，因而過渡詞語的運(yùn)用必不可少。高潮形成系指按照其重要性或嚴(yán)重性安排各個(gè)發(fā)展點(diǎn)（指段落）或發(fā)展段（指文章）的順序，這種語篇發(fā)展方法在描寫、敘述、說明和議論文中均常出現(xiàn)。 1） 邏輯順序 按照時(shí)間先后，或空間位置的相互關(guān)系，我們可以寫出眉目清晰、符合邏輯的段落或文章。我們寫漢語文章的要求是首先不能跑題，實(shí)際上就是對(duì)統(tǒng)一性的要求。所謂統(tǒng)一性，就是指短文必須圍繞著主題擴(kuò)展，不能多中心。 四．如何寫出漂亮的文章 文章要內(nèi)容切題，表達(dá)清楚，意思連貫，語言比較規(guī)范。 （ 4） 混淆可數(shù)名詞和不可數(shù)名詞，例如： help， practice 等。 difficult 和 difficulty。 7． 語法錯(cuò)誤。例如： Our English class often told : Stories are often told on our English class. 6． 不會(huì)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞轉(zhuǎn)承上下句和段落。 4． 詞匯量小，表達(dá)困難，拼寫錯(cuò)誤。常見考生用漢語構(gòu)思文章，同時(shí)將漢語句子硬譯成英語。 萬能框架 As is implied in the table (or cartoon) and well known to all of us, … Take … in the table(cartoon) for example, it’s … for the … to… But when… On the other hand, there do exist some… that… They are making all possible means to … and trying their best to… Compared with what those… , It’s a pity that… And what’s more, with the deepening and furthering of our country’s opening and reforming, more… are allowed to… With China entering the WTO, … are also permitted to … If still blind to this, the … is sure to … So, it’s urgent and essential for … to analyze… more rationally and must keep in mind that … should never be unheard. Although the condition is unsatisfactory now, with the awareness of the … in the table (or cartoon) and all the society efforts, improvement and an even brighter future are not only possible but also inevitable. 三 歷年考試中存在的典型 問題分析 1． 不會(huì)審題，偏離主題。 附： 14 分樣卷 Topic： With her entry into WTO, China is being plunged into an international petition for talents, and in particular, for higher level talents. To face this new challenge, China must do something, among other things, to reform her graduate(postgraduate) education system. State your opinion aobut this reform, and give the solid supporting details to your viewpoint. With China’s entry into WTO, she is facing a lot of chances and challenges in many aspects. As far as talents are concerned, China is being plunged into an international petition for talents, especially for higherlevel talents. In order to adapt this new challenge, China must do something, among other things, to reform her graduate education system. In my opinion, we must make some reform and adjustment in graduate education system in many aspects as follows. First of all, from the view of the government, it must adjust its policy of using talents, especially higherlevel talents. For example, it may provide many privileges for them. Secondly, for the viewpoint of the universities, they should adjust their constructure of curriculum. They should pay more attention to the cultivation of graduate’s capability. They should take effective measures to direct their educational goal from