英語記敘文的寫作ppt課件-展示頁
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【正文】 he class. From this event, I learn two things. One is that with love, no illness or difficulty is terrible. The other is that love and help are twoway streets. Our classmates offered John/Jane Doe kind help partly because he/she himself/herself had always been a helpful person. So I realize that when we help others, we are helping ourselves. 范文二 In the summer sports meeting last year, one of my classmates, John/Jane Doe, suddenly fell to the ground and hurt her left foot when he/she was practicing high jump. His/Her face turned pale and showed great pain. Seeing this, our classmates immediately came to her aid. They struggled to take her to the temporary emergency room. One boy untied his/her shoe and applied ice rocks to his/her wound. Meanwhile, girls forted her in a soft voice. Soon the . teacher came. He checked his/her sound and took some emergency measures to lessen her pain. Fifteen minutes later, the ambulance arrived and she was sent to hospital. Luckily enough, with our care and concern, John/Jane Doe recovered quickly. Such an incident impressed everyone present. I realize that love and care are the best medicine for an injured person 學(xué)生作品中的常見問題 ? 在敘事時(shí)，一般用 過去時(shí) ，但在表述個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)時(shí)可以用 現(xiàn)在時(shí) 。 ? 因此，在細(xì)節(jié)的選擇上應(yīng)注意 選擇與主題密切相關(guān) 的內(nèi)容，從而點(diǎn)明文章中心。 中心段細(xì)節(jié)描寫練習(xí) 請(qǐng)找出下文與主題無關(guān)的細(xì)節(jié) An accident This afternoon I went out in the country to see my grandparents. After I got out there I decided to take a short drive. I drove down to East Greenwich, which is about eight miles from Centreville. While ing home I was obliged to follow the railroad for a mile or two. When I had gone about half a mile I heard a terrible whistling ahead of me. On ing near to where the sound came from, I discovered that an express train had run into the rear end of a freight train. Fortunately no one was seriously hurt, although I heard on man say that he never got shaken up so badly in his life before. The engine of the express train was somewhat disabled, as the cowcatcher was broken and the headlight and the smokestack were knocked off. No one seemed to know the cause of the accident. 例文 – A traffic accident 中心段： 交待細(xì)節(jié)，注重在 how。 例文 – A traffic accident 首段： 首段概括交代事件發(fā)生的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物等信息 A week ago, I witnessed a traffic accident in a rainy day on my way to school, which still sticks in my mind. 例文 – A traffic accident 中心段： 交待細(xì)節(jié)，注重在 how。 因此，在細(xì)節(jié)的選擇上應(yīng)注意 選擇與主題密切相關(guān) 的內(nèi)容，從而點(diǎn)明文章中心。 ? 記敘文通常以一般過去時(shí)為主，根據(jù)上下文用各種時(shí)態(tài)。 ? 這樣的文章也要有中心。記敘文 ? 記敘文用于記敘過去發(fā)生的事件或經(jīng)歷，以寫人、敘事為主要內(nèi)容。它可以包括歷史，游記，報(bào)道，回憶，故事，瑣事等。一般從第一或第三人稱角度出發(fā)，表達(dá)自己或他人的經(jīng)歷或感受，使讀者對(duì)事情十分明了以獲得強(qiáng)烈感受。 記敘文寫作的注意事項(xiàng) 一、交代背景 文章的開頭應(yīng)概括地介紹事件發(fā)生的 時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物以及事
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