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述對 Jobs作出結(jié)論性評述 ——他創(chuàng)造了一個自己的真實世界并真的做到了 “青史留名 ”。全文共 9個自然段。 Colleges Open Their Doors Wider(見圖表四) According to the bar chart, we can see that about million high school graduates entered university in 2022, pared with nearly million 2 years ago and this figure increases to 227 percent during a period of 2 years. It can be expected that Chinese universities are going to enroll more students in the years to e. What has brought about the quick expansion? There are many factors, I think, that underlie the development. The primary one is, clearly,develop , expansion of college enrollment will enlarge the domestic demand and stimulate economic development through education consumption. And a third reason is probably that the Chinese job market cannot absorb the big army of high school graduates. Obviously, with the development ofhigher education and with more and more people graduated from colleges, I believe that the national education will reach a new, higher level and our country will bee more powerful and prosperous in the world. So I am sure that the rise in college enrollment will do us more good than harm in the long run. Part II Reading Comprehension ( Skimming and Scanning) 篇章層次分析: 這是一篇評述英年早逝的著名 IT 創(chuàng)始人 Steve Jobs的說明文。 根據(jù)圖表內(nèi)容和寫作指令的要求,圖表作文大致有以下二種展開模式: Pattern I揭示根源及潛在問題的圖表 Title As indicated by the figures/data given in the picture/graph, it is obvious that ① … fell/rose/climbed significantly ( greatly/sharply/steadily) from (數(shù)字) in (時間) to (數(shù)字) in (時間) . It can also be seen that there was a sharp ( great) rise ( decline/drop) in(方面) from (數(shù)字) to (數(shù)字)( by n times/ n percent) during the same period. There are several causes contributing to the development ( change/rise/fall) shown in the graph. Among other things, ② …. Besides , ③ …. And finally , ④ … But there are also some problems/advantages underlying/behind this development/ change, and ⑤ … is one of them. Therefore , whether this trend is a blessing or a curse in the long run, only tell can tell. ① 插入名詞性從句的主語;概述圖表中變化的某個方面; ② 、 ③ 、 ④ 插入名詞性從句;揭示圖表變化的三個內(nèi)在原因; ⑤ 插入名詞短語;提出這種變化背后可能引起的問題。闡述導致該社會現(xiàn)象或發(fā)展變化的深層次原因; 第三段 結(jié)論或評述。實踐中,不論圖表以何種方式出現(xiàn),這類作文都可以采用下列統(tǒng)一的標準提綱: 第一段 圖表描述。考生讀圖時務必要把握這兩方面的內(nèi)容,僅對圖表表層信息作一簡單描述不是這類作文的命題目的??忌仨毾茸屑氀凶x圖表,使圖表中的數(shù)據(jù)、曲線 、圖形等成為與短文標題相關(guān)并能為我所 用的有意義的信息。 圖表作文是一種特殊的提示作文,即通過圖表提供作文的話題,寫作的要點隱含在圖表之中。2022年 12月大學英語四級真題答案與解析 Part I Writing 參考范文: 第一種圖表(即我們試題部分的圖表) Education Pays The bar graph describes the unemployment rates in 2022 for social groups with different education degrees in theUnited States. According to the US Bureau of Labor Statistics, the better you are educated, the more likely you are to get employed. For example, there are only about unemployed, while people with only a high school diploma or less suffer a much higher unemployment rate ( % and % respectively) . These data clearly indicate that education pays in the long run and it is a worthy investment. In this IT age especially, when knowledge of science and technology is power, people need to be well equipped with knowledge and skills in order to be petitive in job hunting and be better paid. A higher degree is definitely an advantage in the first place in the job market. It must be added, however, a high degree alone is not enough. It will not ensure a better employment opportunity. In order to succeed in the career, people must also develop practical skills and techniques as well as good munication, teamwork and social experience. 第二種圖表(這也是本次考試的另一份試卷的圖表) (見圖表 2) Education Pays As is shown in the bar chart above, the social groups with higher degree are not only more likely to be employed in the first place, but they are also better paid later in the workplace. Those with doctoral and professional degrees enjoy a much higher weekly median earning ( $1551 and 1665 respectively) and suffer a much lower unemployment rate ( % and %) . On the other hand, those with less education suffer a considerably higher unemployment rate and have a much lower weekly ine. For example, there are a total of % ( %+%) of people unemployed with high school diploma or less, who have only a median weekly ine of $545, as pared with the average $797. These data clearly indicate that education pays in the long run and it is a worthy investment. In this IT age especially, when knowledge of science and technology is power, people need to be well equipped with knowledge and skills in order to be petitive in job hunting and be better paid. A higher degree is definitely an advantage in the first place in the job market and a petitive edge for workplace promotions. It must be added, however, a high degree alone is not enough. It will not ensure a better employment opportunity and higher salary. In order to succeed in the career, people must also develop practical skills and techniques as well as good munication, teamwork and social experience. 概述 四級考試主要的作文命題形式是 “文示 ”提綱作文,但不時也考應用文(書信、演講詞等)和圖表作文,圖表作文曾在 1991年 6月(表格: )和 2022年 6月(柱狀圖: Student Use of Computers),似乎是 10年考一次, 但不排除今后會更頻繁地考到。圖表作文包括表格作文( table)、曲線圖作文( curve)、餅狀圖作文( pie)和柱狀圖作文( bar), 圖表作文既有圖表為考生提供大量數(shù)據(jù)信息,有時又有文字提示對作文的要點和展開方向作出規(guī)定。所以這類作文的構(gòu)思過程與普通的提示作文大同小異,主要的不同是要在構(gòu)思前增加一個讀圖(即對圖表的解讀)的過程。任何圖表都含有表層信息和深層含義。這類作文主要考的是考生對圖表深層次信息(原因、根源、發(fā)展可能等)的挖掘和闡述。概要描述圖表所揭示的某種社會現(xiàn)象的變化發(fā)展情況,注意盡可能少地直接引用圖表數(shù)據(jù),要將圖表數(shù)據(jù)進行分析,歸納后進行概括性綜述; 第二段 原因或根源。對該社會現(xiàn)象發(fā)展變化進行理性預測或利弊評述,也可闡述本人的看法或觀點。 Sample Health Gained in Developing Countries(見圖表三) As indicated by the data given in the graph, it is obvious that life expectancy in developing co , increasing by 20 years within 3 decades. It can also be seen, as a sharp contrast, that there was a sharp drop in infant mortality, by 15%, from 250 deaths per 1000 births to about 100 deaths per 1000 during t