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________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hello, my classmates! Pressure is a serious problem in today39。就此問題,老師要求你在英語課上做一個(gè)以“Less Pressure Makes Life Better”為題的報(bào)告,談?wù)勀愕淖龇ǎc同學(xué)分享經(jīng)驗(yàn)。【點(diǎn)睛】文章使用了很好的短語和句子:In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video 。動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱,寫作中注意語義通順,符合邏輯關(guān)系。同學(xué)們?cè)撊绾喂芾碜约旱腻X,讓自己的錢用得更有意義?這是一篇給材料作文,本題所給材料比較詳細(xì),寫作中注意將所給內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來,不能逐字翻譯?!敬鸢浮縀very Spring Festival I receive a lot of lucky money from my parents and relatives. Now I even get it through WeChat or Alipay. I usually buy some of my favorite books, school things and some fancy clothes. Sometimes I also buy some gifts for my parents.In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games. Second, it is a good idea to buy something useful for our parents or teachers so that we can show our love to them. What is more, why not donate our lucky money to the poor kids in need? Helping others makes us happy.All in all, let us manage our lucky money properly. We should use our money in a meaningful way.【解析】【詳解】每年春節(jié),每個(gè)孩子都能收到來自長(zhǎng)輩的壓歲錢(luckymoney)。同學(xué)們?cè)撊绾喂芾碜约旱腻X,讓自己的錢用得更有意義?請(qǐng)結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際寫一篇文章,詞數(shù) 80 詞以上,文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名和人名。每年春節(jié),每個(gè)孩子都能收到來自長(zhǎng)輩的壓歲錢(lucky money)。t talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face.、If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out.、He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and pingpang.、He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he 。用詞準(zhǔn)確,語言得體,句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整,符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理,主次分明。【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,短文作者根據(jù)題目要求,介紹了一個(gè)曾經(jīng)激勵(lì)過自己的人。為提升文章檔次,應(yīng)使用高級(jí)詞匯以及復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)。應(yīng)該從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)入手,寫完整的句子。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意:首先要符合題目要求,包括題目中要求的所有信息,不能遺漏要點(diǎn),可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,注意上下文的銜接。學(xué)生們可以這兩個(gè)問題為提綱,發(fā)揮想象力,充實(shí)細(xì)節(jié)信息,組織語言,連貫成文。s pingpang petition.You can see the good personality and the spirit of persistence in this small body. He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以The person who inspired me為題,介紹一個(gè)曾經(jīng)激勵(lì)過你的人?!敬鸢浮縏he person who inspired meMany people around gave me deep impressions. They helped me, encouraged me and inspired me. But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng. Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes. He doesn39。要點(diǎn): 1. What kind of person is he/ she?2. How did he/ she inspire you?要求: 1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名。3. “inspire” 一詞的漢語解釋是“激勵(lì);鼓舞;賦予靈感;或啟發(fā)思考”等。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。同時(shí)First of all,/ Second,/ Third等時(shí)間副詞和However/ Moreover / As a result等結(jié)構(gòu)副詞的運(yùn)用,既使文章的思路清晰、層次分明,還豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容,使表達(dá)多樣,是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。s start reading now!【解析】亮點(diǎn)說明:這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰,內(nèi)容飽滿,表達(dá)流暢。t have enough time for reading.Moreover,some of us don39。短文的開頭已為你寫好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);2. 短文須包括所有要點(diǎn),不要逐詞翻譯,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使短文連貫、通順;3. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。假如你校將開展“讀好書,促成長(zhǎng)”活動(dòng),請(qǐng)你根據(jù)這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)的主題,向全校同學(xué)發(fā)出倡議。所以,考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。【點(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。而To begin with,/ Moreover,/ Last but not least,等短語的運(yùn)用,既豐富了短文內(nèi)容,使表達(dá)多樣化,更使短文很有條理,是本文的亮點(diǎn)。【答案】I39。2. 短文中不能出現(xiàn)正式姓名,校名。英語中考英語書面表達(dá)100及答案(word)1一、中考英語書面表達(dá)(含答案詳細(xì)解析)1.“揚(yáng)帆起航新學(xué)期,學(xué)姐學(xué)長(zhǎng)提建議”。你馬上就要畢業(yè)了,在初中的學(xué)習(xí)和生活中你一定有很多收獲,請(qǐng)給學(xué)弟學(xué)妹們提幾點(diǎn)建議吧!要求:1. 內(nèi)容完整,語言流暢,書寫規(guī)范清晰。100 詞左右。m going to graduate from junior high school. As your senior, I have some suggestions to the young.As old saying goes, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. To begin with, you should arrange both your study and life properly.Moreover, you should get along well with others. To have more friends, not enemies.Last but not least, you could be active in school team work. Ability is as important as your study, you can also enjoy your colorf