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________________________________________________________________________Best wishes,Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Peppa,Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on lowcarbon lifestyle. Here is something about it.We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of low carbon life. First, we’d better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also matters much. Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. In addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world.Best wishes,Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文,向我的英國朋友Peppa寫信,介紹我們班就低碳生活方式進行的討論情況。請你用英語寫封回信,簡單介紹以下討論結(jié)果:1.節(jié)水節(jié)電. 2.垃圾分類 3.少用紙巾,重拾手帕4.步行、騎自行車或公交出行、參考詞匯:low carbon低碳;tissue紙巾詞數(shù):100詞左右。所以,考生不能遺漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)?!军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。而固定結(jié)構(gòu)But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?和I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. /Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? / If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their ,豐富了短文內(nèi)容,使表達多樣化,是本文的亮點。t be cut down again. If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm. Don39。作為中學(xué)生,我們應(yīng)該怎樣做呢?談?wù)勀愕南敕ā?.書面表達地球是我們的家園,我們作為地球的主人,就應(yīng)該好好保護地球。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準確表達意思的能力。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章表達更有邏輯性,也更富有條理。m going to take part in social practice activities, too. I want to learn something new and get good experience from these activities.Best wishes!YoursLi Hua【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語,為文章增色不少,如how to do,spend a meaningful summer vacation,half of,plan to do,travel at home and abroad,enjoy the beautiful scenery,take part in,social practice activities,make new friends 等。m writing to tell you something about our discussion today.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!YoursLi Hua【答案】Dear DavidI39。30% 多讀一些書;20% 參加社會實踐。請你根據(jù)以下信息,給 David寫一封電子郵件,告訴他討論的情況及你自己本人的計劃及原因。英語中考英語書面表達訓(xùn)練(word)1一、中考英語書面表達(含答案詳細解析)1.假如你是班長李華,今天你們班對即將到來的暑假計劃進行了討論。你們班的外教David對此很感興趣。比例計劃原因50% 去國內(nèi)外旅游。你的計劃? (至少一個)?(請你補充)注意:(1)郵件應(yīng)包含所有要點(2)詞數(shù)80個左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入詞數(shù));(3)不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個人信息,否則不予評分注:社會實踐 social practice activitiesDear DavidI39。m writing to tell you something about our discussion today.The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation. Half of the students plan to travel at home and abroad. They want to relax and enjoy the beautiful scenery. Thirty percent of students plan to read more books. They believe that reading can increase knowledge. Reading books can make people smart and develop interests. 20% of them plan to take part in social practice activities. They want to exercise themselves and make new friends. I39。而非謂語動詞結(jié)構(gòu)The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation./ Reading books can make people smart and develop believe that reading can increase ,豐富了短文內(nèi)容,使表達多樣化,是本文的亮點?!军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。所以,考生不能遺漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)?,F(xiàn)在正在倡導(dǎo)“低碳”生活,只要我們不污染地球的環(huán)境,不浪費地球的能源,就能夠讓我們的周圍變得更綠,生活變得更美好。內(nèi)容應(yīng)該包括以下幾點:1. 節(jié)約用水、用電;