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hat we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. In addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world.Best wishes,Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文,向我的英國朋友Peppa寫信,介紹我們班就低碳生活方式進(jìn)行的討論情況。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用?!军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言簡練。此處ask about, turn off, sort out, in addition, instead of, contribute to等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文,談?wù)勀銓?duì)現(xiàn)代通訊工具的使用及看法。開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)?!驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱為第一,三人稱,注意主謂一致問題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用,比如:there are……,I prefer to……,Mobile phones bring……,we can……,we should……,So let’s……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。開頭介紹了我喜歡使用的通訊方式有哪些;接下來介紹它們的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)是什么,以及使用現(xiàn)代通訊工具要注意什么;最后呼吁號(hào)召大家合理使用現(xiàn)代通訊工具。3. 誠信是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德,也是社會(huì)主義核心價(jià)值觀內(nèi)容之一。上周末,他本來和Lingling相約一起去電影院看電影,但是他卻因?yàn)樵诩覐?fù)習(xí)考試,把這件事忘了,直到第二天才想起來。請(qǐng)你就此事給校報(bào)投稿,以“The Importance of Promise”為題,內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下:簡述事件;談?wù)勛约旱目捶?,并給Daming一些建議。The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize(強(qiáng)調(diào)) the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise. Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it. Yours,Tony【答案】The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize(強(qiáng)調(diào))the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.Recently, a thing happened to my friend, and I think it was really his fault. Last weekend, my friend Daming had a date with his friend Lingling to watch a movie. But he totally forgot it that day because of his review for his exam. So Lingling got too angry to forgive him. In my opinion, it was really his fault. Forgetting the date not only led to Lingling’s anger, but also made her lose trust in him. Keeping promises is always the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. What Daming should do now is to ask for forgiveness and promise that he will never do that again.Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it. Yours,Tony【解析】【分析】本文為一篇稿件,需要學(xué)生通過大明和玲玲之間,大明沒有信守承諾的事情,談自己的看法。【詳解】首先,第一句話直接點(diǎn)明作者的觀點(diǎn),大明是犯錯(cuò)了的。接下來說出自己對(duì)此事件的看法,不信守承諾會(huì)導(dǎo)致失去別人的信任,對(duì)大明的建議是除了認(rèn)錯(cuò)之外,還需要再次保證永不再犯。整篇文章在謀篇布局上,比較嚴(yán)密。4. 假如你是李華, 你的美國筆友Bill給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件, 想了解你的夢(mèng)想職業(yè)。To: lihua china. From: bill006 america. Subject: Your dream jobDear Li Hua,Our teacher told us China is developing fast. You are lucky enough to live in China.Would you please tell me about your dream job in the future?◆What is your dream job?◆ Why do you like the job?◆ Do you think your personality is suitable for the job? Why or why not?◆ What do you need to do for your dream job?Drop a few lines if you have time.Best wishes,Bill要求:1. 參考提示語, 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;2. 語句通順, 意思連貫, 書寫工整;3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)你的任何真實(shí)信息(姓名、校名和地名等);: 不少于70詞(開頭已給出, 但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。s environment appeals to me and staying with students helps to keep me young and alive. To realize my dream, I have to make full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and enter a good university. What efforts are you making for your dream?Tell me about your ideal job!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本題通過描寫夢(mèng)想中的職業(yè),讓學(xué)生對(duì)未來有憧憬,給一部分提示詞,讓學(xué)生有話可說。然后解釋為什么喜歡該工作,因?yàn)榭梢园炎约旱闹R(shí)分享給孩子們,并且喜歡學(xué)校的環(huán)境。最后向Bill提出問題,結(jié)束全文。5.假設(shè)你是來自中國的中學(xué)生李華,打算參加當(dāng)?shù)亟M織的國外冬令營,看完了這個(gè)網(wǎng)頁后,你打算給Liz Payne留言,表達(dá)你在冬令營期間想去London Canal Museum參觀的愿望。作文要求:;不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實(shí)的名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名;,詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。Dear Liz Payne,I’m Li Hua,__________________________