【正文】 】【詳解】每年春節(jié)，每個(gè)孩子都能收到來自長輩的壓歲錢（luckymoney）。同學(xué)們該如何管理自己的錢，讓自己的錢用得更有意義？請(qǐng)結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際寫一篇文章，詞數(shù) 80 詞以上，文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名和人名。每年春節(jié)，每個(gè)孩子都能收到來自長輩的壓歲錢（lucky money）。m sure that nothing can beat me and I will win!等等。短文中使用了較豐富的句型，如When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English.、My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it.、I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult、In the future, I won39。其次短文使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，短文主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)，動(dòng)詞形式變化準(zhǔn)確，尤其注意了不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞的過去式形式，語法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理，層次清晰?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，寫了一篇演講稿。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡單句為主，穿插并列句或復(fù)合句。其次要注意英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不能按照漢語思維，逐詞翻譯。短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)為主，注意謂語動(dòng)詞的正確形式。題目中用問題的形式給出了提示，審題可知，文章應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：首先敘述你生活中遇到的一件困難的事；然后介紹你是如何克服了這個(gè)困難，最后取得成功的；最后說一下你自己的感受。t be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I39。（3）詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。提示：（1）What was the event?（2）How did you make it?（3）What’s your feeling?要求：（1）發(fā)言稿中須包括所有提示內(nèi)容, 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。此處turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, make mistakes, of one’s own等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。 advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl；let herhave more friends and social activities；and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，對(duì)學(xué)生家長的博客進(jìn)行回復(fù)。3. 提出至少2條建議。 I’m the mother of a fourteenyear –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ? 寫作要點(diǎn)：1. 表明自己的看法。2． 寫作假定你是李華，在一位名叫Tiger Mom的學(xué)生家長的博客上，你看到以下內(nèi)容。Xalsoabout,mighteffectsabovementionedtoIndisadvantages.overweighoftheIbothtruthisargument:ofthecanAn________________________反對(duì)Xoutfirmlydoharmfulconsiderdifferentonpeople第三段：However,_____________________________支持XargueThey的第一個(gè)原因。thatthepointdoingideaofinpeople第一段：提出現(xiàn)象。注意多使用固定短語，固定句型，使文章增色。文章需要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第三人稱。學(xué)生們認(rèn)為，學(xué)習(xí)更感興趣3.……家長們認(rèn)為你的觀點(diǎn)1.……2.……注意：1）表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；2）所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中所有的相關(guān)信息，觀點(diǎn)可作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3）詞數(shù)：90詞左右（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等?！居⒄Z】中考英語書面表達(dá)易錯(cuò)題集錦名師教育一、中考英語書面表達(dá)（含答案詳細(xì)解析）1．近日，某中學(xué) “iPad進(jìn)課堂”的消息引起了學(xué)生和家長們的討論。你們學(xué)校的English Newsletter正在以iPads, ing into the classrooms為題舉行征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)右側(cè)表格提示的內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇征文。iPads, ing into the classroomsCan you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】iPads, ing into the classroomsCan you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method.The students don’t think they have to carry heavy bags any more. It’s cool to have lessons over iPads. It’s very interesting to study like that. They believe that they will learn more and better.However,parents think using ipads for too long will influence children’s eyesight. And some poor families can’t afford to buy iPads.I think in some ways iPads are good for us. We can search for information on the Internet at any time. It’s easy for us to chat with our classmates and teachers about our lessons.【解析】根據(jù)題目要求，需要書寫一篇議論文，探討iPad進(jìn)課堂這一現(xiàn)象，以及人們對(duì)此的不同觀點(diǎn)和態(tài)度。結(jié)合觀點(diǎn)式議論文的段落格式，首先在第一段提出問題現(xiàn)象，第二段表達(dá)支持這種行為做法的原因和好處，第三段描述反對(duì)人的觀點(diǎn)及原因，最后一段表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)式第二段：SomearefavortheofX.Theyoutfact_______________________支持Xalsothat的另一個(gè)原因。otherstandaground.TheyittoX.Theypointthat的第一個(gè)理由。examplegivedetailsthis________________一個(gè)例子。第四段：Theresomeinarguments.ButthinkadvantagesXtheadditionthenegativeitbringXmay的有一個(gè)壞處。 請(qǐng)你根據(jù)博客內(nèi)容，寫作要點(diǎn)和要求，給這位家長回復(fù)。 2. 陳述自己的理由。【答案】Hi,TigerMom,What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many