【正文】 ，審題可知，短文應(yīng)從以下幾個(gè)內(nèi)容敘述：首先介紹家鄉(xiāng)的位置；然后介紹來(lái)這里最好的時(shí)候；接下來(lái)是介紹家鄉(xiāng)的景點(diǎn)和文化，并給出建議。t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.、My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class、In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies等等。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式準(zhǔn)確。但為提升作文檔次，應(yīng)穿插使用并列句和復(fù)合句，或使用一些復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)，如非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞、被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)等。題目中只給出了大概的提綱，其中具體的內(nèi)容應(yīng)由學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力來(lái)補(bǔ)充，并用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)。t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.I was always under pressure, too. My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class. They always sent me to all kinds of afterclasses on weekends.就此問(wèn)題，老師要求你在英語(yǔ)課上做一個(gè)以“Less Pressure Makes Life Better”為題的報(bào)告，談?wù)勀愕淖龇?，與同學(xué)分享經(jīng)驗(yàn)。動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，寫作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！敬鸢浮縀very Spring Festival I receive a lot of lucky money from my parents and relatives. Now I even get it through WeChat or Alipay. I usually buy some of my favorite books, school things and some fancy clothes. Sometimes I also buy some gifts for my parents.In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games. Second, it is a good idea to buy something useful for our parents or teachers so that we can show our love to them. What is more, why not donate our lucky money to the poor kids in need? Helping others makes us happy.All in all, let us manage our lucky money properly. We should use our money in a meaningful way.【解析】【詳解】每年春節(jié)，每個(gè)孩子都能收到來(lái)自長(zhǎng)輩的壓歲錢（luckymoney）。每年春節(jié)，每個(gè)孩子都能收到來(lái)自長(zhǎng)輩的壓歲錢（lucky money）。短文中使用了較豐富的句型，如When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English.、My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it.、I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult、In the future, I won39。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理，層次清晰。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，穿插并列句或復(fù)合句。短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。t be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I39。提示：（1）What was the event?（2）How did you make it?（3）What’s your feeling?要求：（1）發(fā)言稿中須包括所有提示內(nèi)容, 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。 advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl；let herhave more friends and social activities；and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，對(duì)學(xué)生家長(zhǎng)的博客進(jìn)行回復(fù)。 I’m the mother of a fourteenyear –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ? 寫作要點(diǎn)：1. 表明自己的看法。Xabout,effectstodisadvantages.ofIbothisargument:theAn________________________反對(duì)Xfirmlydoconsiderdifferentpeople_____________________________支持XTheythatpointdoingofpeople注意多使用固定短語(yǔ)，固定句型，使文章增色。學(xué)生們認(rèn)為，學(xué)習(xí)更感興趣3.……家長(zhǎng)們認(rèn)為你的觀點(diǎn)1.……2.……注意：1）表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；2）所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中所有的相關(guān)信息，觀點(diǎn)可作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3）詞數(shù)：90詞左右（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。你們學(xué)校的English Newsletter正在以iPads, ing into the classrooms為題舉行征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)右側(cè)表格提示的內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇征文。結(jié)合觀點(diǎn)式議論文的段落格式，首先在第一段提出問(wèn)題現(xiàn)象，第二段表達(dá)支持這種行為做法的原因和好處，第三段描述反對(duì)人的觀點(diǎn)及原因，最后一段表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。第二段：SomefavorofTheyfactthatotheraTheytoTheythatgivethis第四段：ThereinButadvantagestheadditionnegativebringmay 請(qǐng)你根據(jù)博客內(nèi)容，寫作要點(diǎn)和要求，給這位家長(zhǎng)回復(fù)?！敬鸢浮縃i,TigerMom,What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in idea is that it is not quiteright for you to do so.Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some allA students in school have turned out not to be as successful insociety as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment