【正文】 s in Our HometownIn the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were terrible. People were not rich. They went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in our hometown. We can see the clean river and the clear water . Even we can see fish in the water. There are many wide and clean roads. Our life is better and better The environment around us is more and more fortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it’s still important to remember the past. It tells that we should cherish the present life.【解析】【詳解】亮點說明：這篇習作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。整篇文章語句通順、意思連貫、表達流暢。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章以第一人稱、一般將來時和一般現(xiàn)在時為主，謂語動詞形式準發(fā)，語法規(guī)范，符合英語句子的表達習慣。作者主要從三個方面敘述：首先介紹了自己的身份和寫留言的目的；接下來詳細介紹了自己參加這次冬令營的愿望；最后是一個簡單的結(jié)尾。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。另外還應注意語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫。通過分析可知，這篇短文應使用第一人稱I來敘述，時態(tài)應以一般將來時態(tài)和一般現(xiàn)在時為主。文章內(nèi)容主要包括三個部分：首先是介紹自己的身份；然后寫留言的目的，包括冬令營的時間、想要去參觀London Canal Museum以及聽Liz Payne的講座；最后簡單介紹一下你的預期的收獲。作文的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計入總詞數(shù),也不必抄寫在答題卡上。內(nèi)容包括：；（包含冬令營的時間,聽Liz Payne的講座）；。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)?！军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。而To begin with,/ Moreover,/ Last but not least,等短語的運用，既豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，更使短文很有條理，是本文的亮點?！敬鸢浮縄39。2. 短文中不能出現(xiàn)正式姓名，校名。2．“揚帆起航新學期，學姐學長提建議”。開頭表示很高興收到Billy的來信，接下來介紹我平時的鍛煉情況，最后指出鍛煉給我?guī)淼暮锰幰约拔医ㄗhBilly要多鍛煉。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：I am busy……，because I have……，Doing exercise can help……，So I advise you to……等句式的應用。4. 至少80詞。2. 可適當加入細節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實，行文連貫。3. 談談鍛煉給你帶來了哪些好處。（2）偶爾不鍛煉的原因：作業(yè)多，沒時間。寫作要點：1. 你最近正忙于為即將到來的體育測試（physical test）做準備。【英語】 【初中英語】 中考英語書面表達練習題 人教版一、中考英語書面表達（含答案詳細解析）1．書面表達假如你是九年級學生李華，你的美國筆友Billy發(fā)來郵件詢問你平時鍛煉的情況。請你根據(jù)以下信息，給Billy回封電子郵件，并建議他每周都要花些時間鍛煉身體。2. 介紹你平時鍛煉的情況：（1）每天鍛煉的時間：不到一個半小時。（3）擅長的體育運動：球類運動。寫作要求：1. 不得使用真實的姓名和學校名。3. 字跡工整，語言精練，表達準確，條理清晰。Dear Billy,It’s my great pleasure to receive your . ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Billy,It’s my great pleasure to receive your . You wanted to know about my usual exercise. I’ll tell it to you. I am busy preparing for the ing physical test. So I take exercise less than an hour every day. Sometimes I don’t do exercise, because I have so much homework that I have no time to do it. I do well in playing balls.Doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is good for my health. Besides, I think it can make me relaxed by doing exercise. So I advise you to spend more time doing exercise every week.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，給Billy回封電子郵件，介紹自己平時的鍛煉情況，并建議他每周都要花些時間鍛煉身體。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用?！军c睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。此處be busy doing sth, prepare for, do well in, be good for, advise sb to do sth等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。你馬上就要畢業(yè)了，在初中的學習和生活中你一定有很多收獲，請給學弟學妹們提幾點建議吧！要求：1. 內(nèi)容完整，語言流暢，書寫規(guī)范清晰。100 詞左右。m going to graduate from junior high school. As your senior, I have some suggestions to the young.As old saying goes, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. To begin with, you should arrange both your study and life properly.Moreover, you should get along well with others. To have more friends, not enemies.Last but not least, you could be active in school team work. Ability is as important as your study, you can also enjoy your colorful school life as wellI hope these suggestions could make your junior schoollife more wond