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nce of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.Recently, a thing happened to my friend, and I think it was really his fault. Last weekend, my friend Daming had a date with his friend Lingling to watch a movie. But he totally forgot it that day because of his review for his exam. So Lingling got too angry to forgive him. In my opinion, it was really his fault. Forgetting the date not only led to Lingling’s anger, but also made her lose trust in him. Keeping promises is always the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. What Daming should do now is to ask for forgiveness and promise that he will never do that again.Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it. Yours,Tony【解析】【分析】本文為一篇稿件,需要學(xué)生通過(guò)大明和玲玲之間,大明沒(méi)有信守承諾的事情,談自己的看法。請(qǐng)你就此事給校報(bào)投稿,以“The Importance of Promise”為題,內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下:簡(jiǎn)述事件;談?wù)勛约旱目捶?,并給Daming一些建議。上周末,他本來(lái)和Lingling相約一起去電影院看電影,但是他卻因?yàn)樵诩覐?fù)習(xí)考試,把這件事忘了,直到第二天才想起來(lái)。合肥市五十中學(xué)東校中考模擬) 誠(chéng)信是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德,也是社會(huì)主義核心價(jià)值觀內(nèi)容之一。所以,考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式,盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。【點(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。而非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu)The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation./ Reading books can make people smart and develop believe that reading can increase ,豐富了短文內(nèi)容,使表達(dá)多樣化,是本文的亮點(diǎn)。m writing to tell you something about our discussion today.The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation. Half of the students plan to travel at home and abroad. They want to relax and enjoy the beautiful scenery. Thirty percent of students plan to read more books. They believe that reading can increase knowledge. Reading books can make people smart and develop interests. 20% of them plan to take part in social practice activities. They want to exercise themselves and make new friends. I39。你的計(jì)劃? (至少一個(gè))?(請(qǐng)你補(bǔ)充)注意:(1)郵件應(yīng)包含所有要點(diǎn)(2)詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右(開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入詞數(shù));(3)不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息,否則不予評(píng)分注:社會(huì)實(shí)踐 social practice activitiesDear DavidI39。比例計(jì)劃原因50% 去國(guó)內(nèi)外旅游。你們班的外教David對(duì)此很感興趣。2.(人稱是第一和第二人稱英語(yǔ)作文一般是三段式第一段:開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題,交代寫(xiě)作目的——保護(hù)眼睛的重要性,以及提建議第二段:文章主體部分——保護(hù)眼睛的措施:①不要長(zhǎng)時(shí)間讀書(shū)看報(bào);②不要在太強(qiáng)或太弱的光線下看書(shū);③堅(jiān)持做眼保健操。It’s important to protect our eyes___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】It’s important to protect our eyesThe eyes are the window of our mind. We use our eyes to see everything around us. Without eyes, nothing is left beside you but darkness. How to protect our eyes? It’s not right to keep your eyes working for a long time. You’d better not read in strong or poor light. Don’t read in bed or on a moving bus. Remember to keep your books away from your eyes for about a foot and do eye exercises every day. What’s more, a balanced diet is necessary. Follow my advice and form a good habit. It’s time to say goodbye to thick glasses.【解析】【分析】這是一篇材料作文。要求:(1)詞數(shù)在80?100詞之間。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合實(shí)際生活寫(xiě)一篇題目為“It’s important to protect our eyes”的英文稿。從小保護(hù)好眼睛很重要。【英語(yǔ)】初三英語(yǔ)英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)匯編各地方試卷集合匯編一、中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)匯編1.(黑龍江中考模擬)Writing現(xiàn)在視力不好的人越來(lái)越多,有的孩子很小的時(shí)候就戴上了眼鏡。六月六日是“全國(guó)愛(ài)眼日”。內(nèi)容:(1)眼睛的重要性;(2)保護(hù)眼睛的措施:①不要長(zhǎng)時(shí)間讀書(shū)看報(bào);②不要在太強(qiáng)或太弱的光線下看書(shū);③堅(jiān)持做眼保健操。2)要求字跡工整,語(yǔ)法正確,意思連貫,合乎邏輯,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮?!驹斀狻扛鶕?jù)題目要求可知,本文說(shuō)的時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。第三部分:再次點(diǎn)題,并提出號(hào)召——現(xiàn)在開(kāi)始養(yǎng)成保護(hù)眼睛的好習(xí)慣。廣東中考模擬)假如你是班長(zhǎng)李華,今天你們班對(duì)即將到來(lái)的暑假計(jì)劃進(jìn)行了討論。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下信息,給 David寫(xiě)一封電子郵件,告訴他討論的情況及你自己本人的計(jì)劃及原因。30% 多讀一些書(shū);20% 參加社會(huì)實(shí)踐。m writing to tell you something about our discussion today.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!YoursLi Hua【答案】Dear DavidI39。m going to take part in social practice activities, too. I want to learn something new and get good experience from these activities.Best wishes!YoursLi Hua【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ),為文章增色不少,如how to do,spend a meaningful summer vacation,half of,plan to do,travel at home and abroad,enjoy the beautiful scenery,take part in,social practice activities,make new friends 等。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性,也更富有條理。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維,考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。3.(而你的朋友Daming最近卻被誠(chéng)信危機(jī)所困擾。因此,Lingling很生氣,并且不愿接受Daming的道歉。注意:詞數(shù)80—100;行文連貫,邏輯合理;文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名; 文章的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。信守承諾是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德,在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中,注意文章結(jié)構(gòu),先寫(xiě)出大明和玲玲之間的事情,然后再說(shuō)自己對(duì)此的看法。然后仔細(xì)闡述了事情發(fā)生的經(jīng)過(guò)?!军c(diǎn)睛】文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,符合邏輯,先表明自己觀點(diǎn),然后闡述事情,提出自己的觀點(diǎn)和建議。除此之外,中間也使用了一些連接詞,例如but,so,because of等,使文章更加通順。天津中考模擬)請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示,為學(xué)校廣播站英語(yǔ)專欄寫(xiě)一篇短文,介紹發(fā)生在你好朋友王強(qiáng)Wang Qiang身上的一件事。,所有車輛都一個(gè)接一個(gè)通過(guò)十字路口。,主動(dòng)上前攔住了車輛領(lǐng)著老人安全過(guò)了路口。,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。開(kāi)頭部分已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)?!驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí),人稱為第三人稱,注意主謂一致問(wèn)題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用,比如:The lady hesitated……,but she was afraid……,he offered to……,Wang Qiang is…..等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。開(kāi)頭介紹了王強(qiáng)騎車回家的路上看見(jiàn)一位老太太不敢過(guò)馬路,接下來(lái)介紹他主動(dòng)上前攔住了車輛領(lǐng)著老人安全過(guò)了路口,最后我就這件事談?wù)勎业南敕ā?.(白楊是我的同學(xué)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容介紹白楊,并談一談她對(duì)你及同學(xué)們的影響。人物身份為同學(xué)白楊,介紹分四個(gè)要點(diǎn):她家境貧寒;她精心照顧患病母親;她學(xué)習(xí)刻苦,成績(jī)優(yōu)異;她關(guān)心同學(xué),樂(lè)于助人;她經(jīng)常利用空閑時(shí)間做志愿者工作。注意語(yǔ)法正確,善用連詞,使各個(gè)要點(diǎn)連貫。who has a serious illness為定語(yǔ)從句。No matter how hard the life is為讓步狀語(yǔ)從句。山東中考模擬)書(shū)面表達(dá)今天早上你目睹了一起事件(下圖),你想以Mother Stops Him為題寫(xiě)一篇短文,向你校英語(yǔ)報(bào)社投稿。2. 發(fā)表你的想法。 、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。參考詞匯:lift…up扶起, knock…down撞倒,trust信任Mother Stops Him_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】This morning, my mother took me to school. On the way, I saw a car knock an old man down and the car ran away. The old woman fell to the ground and could n