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me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng. Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes. He doesn39。要點(diǎn): 1. What kind of person is he/ she?2. How did he/ she inspire you?要求: 1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名。 4. “inspire” 一詞的漢語解釋是“激勵(lì);鼓舞;賦予靈感;或啟發(fā)思考”等。短文注意到了長(zhǎng)短句的結(jié)合,并恰當(dāng)?shù)氖褂昧艘恍┻B詞,使文章表達(dá)的連貫。表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確,注意了被動(dòng)形式的使用,如He was rewarded by our school this year.。【亮點(diǎn)說明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的范文。在最后要給Tommy提一些建議,這一部分應(yīng)該用第一人稱。表格中涉及的內(nèi)容較多,寫作時(shí)要注意表達(dá)的條理性。點(diǎn)建議)…要求:表達(dá)清楚、語法正確、上下文連貫;要點(diǎn)必須包括所有相關(guān)信息,并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;詞數(shù):100 詞左右;不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight.【答案】Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his likes reading because he thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has a good effect on children’s growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school, he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crosses the road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year. However, Tommy is stressed when the exam es. And he doesn’t have enough sleep. I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. It’s better for him to manage his time wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.【解析】這篇作文要求我們按照表格里的內(nèi)容介紹一下Tommy的情況,為Tommy寫一篇綜合素質(zhì)的評(píng)價(jià)報(bào)告。今年,學(xué)校授予了他優(yōu)秀學(xué)生獎(jiǎng)(Award for Best Student)Problems面臨考試,遭受壓力痛苦,他沒有充足的睡眠.Your suggestions(根據(jù)實(shí)際情況提上學(xué)途中遵守交通規(guī)則(舉個(gè)好處)Honour他在家?guī)椭黾覄?wù)。3.臨近畢業(yè),學(xué)校在學(xué)習(xí)小組內(nèi)開展了初中階段自評(píng)和組評(píng)活動(dòng),假設(shè)你是 Moonlight 小組 的組長(zhǎng),請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格中的信息和提示,為你的組員 Tommy 進(jìn)行綜合素質(zhì)的評(píng)價(jià),寫一 份素質(zhì)報(bào)告.NameTommyCharacteristics聰明、大方(各舉一例)Hobbies喜歡看書,認(rèn)為看書有很多好處(請(qǐng)列舉它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。s a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in ,既使短文層次清晰,又豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容,使表達(dá)多樣化,是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。而First, I39。文中使用了非常好的短語,例如I39。s a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in need. I will pay more attention to protecting our environment so that we can make our Earth a better world. Also, travelling out is a good choice. While travelling, we can be close to nature and learn about different cultures. We have more chances to search the Internet. I know unhealthy websites are harmful to us. I will say no to them.I hope all of you can enjoy the ing holiday. That39。s necessary for me to learn at least one skill. I39。Dear classmates,Summer holiday is ing, and here is my plan for it.____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ I hope all of you can enjoy the ing holiday. That’s all. Thank you.【答案】Dear classmates,Summer holiday is ing, and here is my plan for it.First, I39。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。內(nèi)容提示:暑假計(jì)劃學(xué)習(xí)博覽群書;學(xué)習(xí)技能 (或自擬一點(diǎn))生活健康飲食;堅(jiān)持鍛煉 (或自擬一點(diǎn))其它熱愛公益;親近自然 (或自擬一點(diǎn))注意:1. 表達(dá)中必須包括所給要點(diǎn),可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯。2.書面表達(dá)同學(xué)們,中考后就會(huì)迎來漫長(zhǎng)的暑假了,班會(huì)課上老師組織大家討論假期學(xué)習(xí)和生活計(jì)劃。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性,也更富有條理。s our duty to help our parents do some housework. So you can help my parents wash the dishes, clean the room and make the bed. I hope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework.Of course, if yo