【正文】 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hi, Jack! I am Tim. Today I will tell you something about the project “Renovation of the old munities” in Nanjing. This project is aim to improve the environment. After this project, there will be more beautiful buildings, some parks and a big shopping store. Our life will be more convenient. But there are some problems which influence our life. For example, lots of noise is around us all day long, and we can see the building rubbish anywhere. In my opinion, the project team only work in daytime and the building rubbish can be put at a fixed place. Of course, everyone in the old munities can do what they can do to renovate our munities.【解析】【分析】這篇書面表達(dá)是描述老社區(qū)改造工程，話題較新。在寫作時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，這樣才可以更好的駕馭。3．（____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My English StudyHow time flies! My threeyear middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.First, listen more. Listening to the radio is a good way to learn English. We can relax ourselves by listening to English songs. Second, say more. Use spoken English when municating with classmates. Speaking English can enhance the ability and confidence to learn English well. Third, read more English books. Reading can broaden our horizon and help us understand English culture. In addition, learn some grammar rules to better understand and use English. Finally, we can write about our daily life.In a word, only when we develop interest in studying English can we learn it well.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如look back，listen to the radio，a good way to learn English，relax ourselves，municate with，help sb. do，do more reading，in addition，in a word等。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。4．（要求不少于80個字。而并列結(jié)構(gòu)Communicate more with you parents, and ask your teacher for help if necessary!和You should let them know that you’re serious about learning art and you’re clever enough to plan the future for yourself./ So this is the best chance for you to achieve your dream, though it’s just the very beginning to enter an art school./ If you fail, both your dream and your parents’ wish won’t be able to be ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。【點(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。江西中考模擬）健康的體魄離不開好的生活習(xí)慣。請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，以“How to Develop Good Study Habits”為題寫一篇英語短文談?wù)勛约旱目捶?。要求?. 內(nèi)容必須包括以上提示要點(diǎn)可以，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 90詞左右，短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。t feeling sleepy. Second, find a fortable place to study, but not too fortable or you may go to sleep! Third, you39?！驹斀狻靠忌鶕?jù)提示的3點(diǎn)進(jìn)行發(fā)揮。6．（從小保護(hù)好眼睛很重要。請你結(jié)合實(shí)際生活寫一篇題目為“It’s important to protect our eyes”的英文稿?！敬鸢浮縄t’s important to protect our eyesThe eyes are the window of our mind. We use our eyes to see everything around us. Without eyes, nothing is left beside you but darkness. How to protect our eyes? It’s not right to keep your eyes working for a long time. You’d better not read in strong or poor light. Don’t read in bed or on a moving bus. Remember to keep your books away from your eyes for about a foot and do eye exercises every day. What’s more, a balanced diet is necessary. Follow my advice and form a good habit. It’s time to say goodbye to thick glasses.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，闡述眼睛的重要性以及如何保護(hù)眼睛。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如the window of our mind, had better do, remember to do, keep away from, what’s more, follow one’s advice, it’s time to do以及it is adj to do?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。初寫短文。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。修改潤色。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。黑龍江中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假如你是Jack，中學(xué)英文報 WARM HEART專欄的編輯，近期你收到一封署名為 Asking的求助信，該同學(xué)在信中訴說了自己當(dāng)前焦慮的情緒，請根據(jù)以下信息，給他寫一封回信。2. 求助人焦慮情緒產(chǎn)生的原因。（2）盡管準(zhǔn)備了很長時間，對成績?nèi)詻]有把握。寫作要求：1. 不得使用真實(shí)姓名、地名和學(xué)校名。3. 字跡工整、語言精練、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、條理清晰。Hi, Asking,I’m the editor of WARM HEART. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Editor,Jack【答案】I’m the editor of WARM hear from you that you are worried about the exam that will be held next week. You said that though you have prepared for a long time, you are still not sure you can get good grades. I can understand your situation. As far as I am concerned, the more you prepared, the better grades you will get. You’ll get rid of worries as long as you do as follows.First of all, have a good rest. Get enough sleep and don’t stay up late. If you have enough sleep, you’ll be more energetic to prepare for the test.What’s more, don’t forget to do exercise. Doing exercise, such as playing basketball and playing soccer, can make you relax.Only by doing these simple things can you relax yourself.