【正文】 door activities. I enjoy running so much because it makes me keep fit and have an excellent figure. Now, plogging is spreading all over the world. What’s plogging? Put simply, plogging is the act of cleaning up trash while running. Every Sunday I wear plastic gloves and carry a garbage bag when I run along the river. I can easily clean up trash such as plastic bottles, cans and so on . . I feel even better after returning from a run when I can do something that’s good for myself and my munity. Plogging shows how we are making the world a better place with a simple task. Everyone should be an environmental protection guard and take action to keep our home clean . To protect the earth is to protect ourselves.【解析】【分析】本篇是材料作文，要求結(jié)合自己的日常生活經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勀銓?duì)目前最環(huán)保的運(yùn)動(dòng)方式 （plogging） 的認(rèn)識(shí)以及怎樣從身邊小事做起，做生態(tài)中國(guó)，健康中國(guó)的踐行者。注意：可以圍繞主題，根據(jù)要求，進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。內(nèi)容包括：身體力行，保護(hù)環(huán)境的事例；堅(jiān)持鍛煉，增強(qiáng)體質(zhì)的事例。拾荒（clean up trash）、慢跑 （jog），不僅促進(jìn)環(huán)境衛(wèi)生，而且有益身體健康，可謂一舉兩得。7．（亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如get together，enjoy the full moon， share our stories等。m glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the MidAutumn Festival to you. The MidAutumn Festival falls on the 15th of the 8th lunar month. It’s a big day for us Chinese people. All the family members get together to celebrate the festival. In the evening, we usually have a big dinner. And then we go outside and enjoy the full moon. The moon that night looks the brightest. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together to eat mooncakes, and share our stories.For me, the best part is to enjoy the moon and eat mooncakes. Mooncakes taste very delicious. They look like the moon, big and round.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本篇寫(xiě)作是以書(shū)信的方式向筆友介紹中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)，要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)來(lái)寫(xiě)。Dear Jessica, I39。內(nèi)容須包含以下所有要點(diǎn)：1. 中秋節(jié)的時(shí)間；2. 中秋節(jié)的傳統(tǒng)習(xí)俗及慶祝方式：全家人一起吃飯, 賞月, 吃月餅等；3, 我最期待的活動(dòng)。安徽中考模擬）李華的英國(guó)筆友Jessica來(lái)信說(shuō), 她想了解中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體?！驹斀狻窟@是篇材料作文，所給的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)給的比較零碎，不完整，所以考生需要結(jié)合實(shí)際情況補(bǔ)充完整，是文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)。Purposeimprove the environmentChanges to people?s lifebeautiful buildings, …Problemslots of noise, rubbishYour advice…注意：；，意思連貫，條理清楚，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；3 詞數(shù) 80 左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。江蘇中考模擬） 為提升南京城市形象，我市已啟動(dòng)老小區(qū)出新改造工程。句型：It is ＋adj. for sb. to do sth.；when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句。文中采用first, second, finally表述自己的觀點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言層次感很強(qiáng)，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。在寫(xiě)作時(shí),要根據(jù)提出的幾個(gè)問(wèn)題為中心圍繞展開(kāi)，再進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)难由?。s important for us to develop our good learning habits. I often do some things in my daily life：First, I get ready for new lessons before class. Second, I listen to the teachers carefully and take notes of the important points in every class. Third, I always finish my homework on time. At the same time, I do much reading every day. Finally, I work hard and turn to the teachers and classmates when I have difficulties.Only in this way can I learn better and improve myself faster.【解析】【詳解】1. 題干解讀：這是一篇提綱式作文。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勀闶窃趺醋龅?，以及為什么這樣做。 良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣是成功的一半， 只有擁有了良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣， 學(xué)習(xí)才能得到提高。4．（【高分句型二】I think these rules are good for us. 我認(rèn)為這些規(guī)則對(duì)我們有好處。【高分句型一】Second, we shouldn’t go with strangers and we shouldn’t accept things from strangers. 第二，我們不應(yīng)該和陌生人一起去，也不應(yīng)該接受陌生人的東西。語(yǔ)法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。主要從1. 遵守校規(guī)，按時(shí)到校、離校；2. 不接受陌生人的物品；3. 結(jié)伴同行，天黑前到家；4. 遇到麻煩及時(shí)告知家長(zhǎng)和老師。School safety_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】School safetyMore and more people pay special attention to the school safety nowadays. Here are some rules to keep us safe.First, as students, we should follow the school rules, such as not being late for school and leaving school early. Second, we shouldn’t go with strangers and we shouldn’t accept things from strangers. Third, it’s better for us to have partners on the way home and to school and we must get home before dark. Fourth, if we are in trouble, don’t forget to tell our parents or teachers as soon as possible.I think these rules are good for us. We must obey them.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下校園安全。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以“School safety”為題寫(xiě)一篇100詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。3．（亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如be kind to, each other, be in trouble, give a hand, try one’s best to do, take care of, get on well with, help sb with等。s our duty to show kindness to others around us. _________________________________________________【答案】It’s our duty to show kindness to others around us. I think everyone should be kind to each other. When someone is in trouble, we’ll give a hand politely. In our munity, I try my best to help the neighbors and take care of the old people at weekends as a volunteer. At school, I get on well with my classmates and help them with their lessons. I also send my books and clothes to the children who live in poor areas. I’m very proud I have made many friends by helping others in need.I believe our society will bee better and better if everyone shows kindness to each other.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，談?wù)勆钪心銓?duì)他人提供善意幫助的經(jīng)歷。主要內(nèi)容包括:你對(duì)友善行為的認(rèn)識(shí)和理解，你平時(shí)做哪些友善的事情，以及你這樣做的美好愿望。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開(kāi)展以“友善待人、快樂(lè)生活”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。北京中考模擬）“友善”是一種美德，它猶如陽(yáng)光和雨露照耀并滋潤(rùn)著美德的形成。短文中還使用了一些較好的句型和短語(yǔ)，如They always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. 、In the past three years, I am hardworking and have made great progress. 、I do well in the exams. I am good at municating and I like to make friends with others.、 However, I have problems, too.、 So in the future I will do more sports and bee stronger. 、Wish my school more beautiful, and my teach