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語俱樂部正在開展主題為“多讀書,讀好書”的活動(dòng)?!军c(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá),例如save energy;brush our teeth;put it into different bins;take action;make a big difference。高分亮點(diǎn):短語:save energy;brush our teeth;put it into different bins;take action;make a big difference。提示詞語: pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action提示問題:● What are the main environmental problems we have?● What can we do in our daily life? ● What’s your wish?Now there are many environmental 【答案】例文Now there are many environmental problems. Such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to school by bike or on foot. We can use less water by turning off the tap while we brush our teeth, and taking shorter showers. When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins. I hope everyone can take action. Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference. Let’s work together to make a better place to live.【解析】【詳解】題干解讀:該題目屬于說明文寫作,寫作時(shí)要把我們面臨的主要環(huán)境問題是什么,為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么,以及你的期望全部包括。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“Going Green”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。點(diǎn)睛:這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語,為文章增色不少,如at the beginning of; know about;make a speech等;When ;Although ;Then ;From then on,等的運(yùn)用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理;同時(shí)語言流暢,內(nèi)容完整,是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。語言力求準(zhǔn)確,簡潔。s very important to be confident【答案】It’s very important to be confident. Selfconfidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do. So it’s valuable to us.When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can’t believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have bee more and more confident.To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can finally make it and gain more confidence.【解析】本文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含表格中所提供的所有信息。假如你是李華,請(qǐng)你為??⒄Z園地“自信助我成長”專欄寫一篇短文,談?wù)勛孕诺闹匾?,分享一次使你更加自信的?jīng)歷,并說說我們?nèi)绾胃幼孕拧?.自信賦予人力量,帶給人快樂。亮點(diǎn)說明:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣,準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài),主謂一致,在文中使用了時(shí)間狀語從句,定語從句,特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句,如have fun,in order to,as for,in my opinion等。2.(B)根據(jù)要求完成大作文,詞數(shù):80100 We Get from Sports 的短文,應(yīng)該包含以下要點(diǎn):1,學(xué)生參加體育運(yùn)動(dòng)的興趣不同,理由各異.,通過運(yùn)動(dòng)來放松自己.,希望運(yùn)動(dòng)能使自己更強(qiáng)壯.,希望運(yùn)動(dòng)使自己減肥和保持健康,苗條..:文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的名字和學(xué)校的名字,不計(jì)入詞數(shù).:keep slim (保持苗條)What We Get from SportsStudents in our school have one thing in mon an interest in 【答案】Students in our school have one thing in mon an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to bee stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise.In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作主要是談?wù)撟约簩?duì)運(yùn)動(dòng)的觀點(diǎn)和看法,應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),寫作要點(diǎn)要包括:。整篇文章在謀篇布局上,比較嚴(yán)密。接下來說出自己對(duì)此事件的看法,不信守承諾會(huì)導(dǎo)致失去別人的信任