【正文】 d?”為題寫一篇短文。which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parentchild ?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縒hen children find themselves under surveillance, how can they confide in us in the future? 當(dāng)孩子們發(fā)現(xiàn)自己受到監(jiān)視時，他們將來怎么能向我們吐露心聲呢？句子When children find themselves under surveillance是由when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句。語法要正確，表達要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。注意作文中必須包含圖片中的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。s learning is of little significance. We should always do our part well. Let children learn and grow in a relatively independent environment.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖畫作文，根據(jù)圖片中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下父母為了關(guān)心孩子的學(xué)習(xí)，想隨時監(jiān)控孩子的學(xué)習(xí)狀況，就這樣對嗎？仔細分析所提供的圖片內(nèi)容，主要從你的看法和建議這個方面去介紹。s point of view, children may yearn for independence. What they want is affirmation of their own abilities. But excessive supervision itself denies and distrusts their own abilities. Although we never mean to look down on their own children, maybe they don39。s study. She was wrong to do so. First of all, he violated the right to privacy. It also disturbs Tony39。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Tony39。浙江中考模擬）如今，很多父母很關(guān)心孩子的學(xué)習(xí)，想隨時監(jiān)控孩子的學(xué)習(xí)狀況如下圖中 Tony 的母親。China is a nation of etiquette（禮儀），中國是一個禮儀之邦?？梢赃m當(dāng)使用高分句子?！军c睛】寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系，上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。細心檢查避免疏漏。表格中列舉了三個要點，寫作時注意不要漏寫。 參考詞匯: civilized 文明的Dear Danny,I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization（文明） of China, I would like to share something with you. I hope you can e to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hear from you soon.All the best,Li Hua【答案】Dear Danny,I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization（文明） of China, I would like to share something with you.Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world. China is a country of 56 nationalities. Different nations have difficult cultures. In my country, we have many traditional festivals, such as, the Spring Festival, MidAutumn Festival and the Dragon Boat Festival . They are also called “three major Chinese holidays” in China. Here are the customs of eating Zongzi and racing dragonboat on the Dragon Boat Festival.China is a nation of etiquette （禮儀）. Chinese people can respect, trust and help each other. We all learn and grow together. Everyone in my school should protect the whole public environment. Climbing the trees, picking the flowers and throwing garbage at random are not allowed there.I hope you can e to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hearing from you soon.All the best.Li Hua【解析】【分析】本文要求給你的印度朋友Danny寫一篇關(guān)于華夏文明的回信。2. 回復(fù)必須包括所以要點，可是當(dāng)發(fā)揮，是短文連貫，通順。假設(shè)你是李華，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示用英語寫一封回信給Danny。4．（亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，主謂一致，在文中使用了時間狀語從句，定語從句，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如have fun，in order to，as for，in my opinion等。遼寧中考模擬）（B）根據(jù)要求完成大作文,詞數(shù):80100 We Get from Sports 的短文,應(yīng)該包含以下要點:1,學(xué)生參加體育運動的興趣不同,理由各異.,通過運動來放松自己.,希望運動能使自己更強壯.，希望運動使自己減肥和保持健康,苗條..:文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的名字和學(xué)校的名字,不計入詞數(shù).:keep slim （保持苗條）What We Get from SportsStudents in our school have one thing in mon an interest in 【答案】Students in our school have one thing in mon an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to bee stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise.In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作主要是談?wù)撟约簩\動的觀點和看法，應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，寫作要點要包括：。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)?！军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。而復(fù)雜并列結(jié)構(gòu)Moreover, we need to pay much money for these classes, and it will surely increase the cost/ It’s not only improve our abilities but also give us much students think it takes so much time to have these lessons that they can’t pay attention to their grades. / I think it’s good to have special ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的亮點。Views on Special Courses贊同1. 有助于增加我們的技能；2. 有利于培養(yǎng)我們不輕易放棄的精神；3. ……不贊同1. 過多占用學(xué)生時間，耽誤學(xué)習(xí)；2. 需要投入更多的錢，增加家庭壓力；3. ……你的觀點1. ……2. ……要求：1. 表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；2. 必須包括表格中所有相關(guān)信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3. 詞數(shù)：100左右（文章開頭已給出，不計入）4. 不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。江蘇中考模擬）寫作: 81. 目前，很多高中都開設(shè)了特色課程，涵蓋烘焙、舞蹈、鋼琴、跆拳道、足球等內(nèi)容，很大程度上增加了校園生活的趣味性，但也有人持不同的看法。句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主，也使用了并列句、賓語從句、狀語從句等復(fù)合句，還有一些好的句型，如The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats、Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on.、What’s more, e and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!、I’m looking forward to seeing you here!等。第二，短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語的表達習(xí)慣。短文先對Dave發(fā)出邀請，然后具體介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的位置、景點、文化等，并提出了建議。【點睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求邀請Dave來自己的家鄉(xiāng)旅游，并介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的景點和文化。如可以使用簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)，易于掌握，不容易出錯。寫作時應(yīng)合理安排幾個內(nèi)容，分清主次，并注意上下文的連貫。,不計入總詞數(shù)Dear DaveI know that you are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not e to Anhui, my home town, to have fun?【答案】Dear Dave，I know you are interested in