【正文】 司未來的主推車型。語言句式準(zhǔn)確多樣流暢，體現(xiàn)了很強(qiáng)的語言運(yùn)用能力。很好地完成了寫做任務(wù)。(18分)Last Sunday, my parents and I paid a riding visit to the was a wonderful day, with sun shining on the sky and light everything prepared in our bags, we started the rode for half an hour when we were delighted to find that the surroundings had gradually changed from tall buildings into mountains and along the road, we were all absorbed in the breathtaking scenery and felt very it was already noon and we all felt a little tired, we decided to have a found a grass land under the trees and put up our tent in the took much effort when my dad and I were trying to put up the the meanwhile, my mom prepared the lunch for us such as sausages, bread and some fruits, which turned out to be a simple but pleasant having lunch, my mom took out the kites from her bag and suggested that we fly the my dad and I took a kite and ran across the grass field to make it fly we succeed in flying kites, my mom couldn’t help cheering for our notice, the sun was slowly going down on the ground together, we just watched the sunset quietly and enjoyed this moment of couldn’t move my eyes from the splendid and beautiful sky and a meaningful day，for I not only enjoyed the scenery but also spent a wonderful day with my ：文章覆蓋了所有內(nèi)容要點，細(xì)節(jié)補(bǔ)充合理，句式多樣，語言流暢自然，不乏生動的描寫，體現(xiàn)了較強(qiáng)的語言運(yùn)用能力，分段合理，內(nèi)容連貫，完全達(dá)到了寫作目的。體現(xiàn)很強(qiáng)的語言素養(yǎng)和寫作能力。語言運(yùn)用能力強(qiáng)，詞語句式準(zhǔn)確多樣。（19分）It was a peaceful sunny day when my parents and I went for a cycling tour in the few people around, the forest was as if weling us specially with its natural beauty, embracing us with the cool with all necessities in backpacks and totally amazed by the greenness, we cycled further into the forest, ready to discover more hidden appeared a piece of clearing behind the trees, and we merrily stopped to get ready for a and I busied ourselves with setting up the tent, while Mom was occupied in the preparation, spreading out the cloth and cutting everything done, we sat down close to each other to enjoy Mom’s homemade dishes, satisfying both our minds and a full stomach, Dad suggested we fly our kites, for the wind was picking up, which I instantly strings in hands and kites flying against the blue sky, Dad and I raced against each other, just like when I was a seeing this, Mom couldn’t help but applaud for us, her face lighting up with happy time fled!Noticing the sun setting, we sat side by side on the grass to admire the breathtaking by little, the sun went down as I felt a sense of contentment and joy enveloping the three of Mom told us she felt so lucky to have us around failed me at that came to realized that family was where everyone is concerned with each other, where love always ：全文涵蓋所有內(nèi)容及要點，細(xì)節(jié)補(bǔ)充合理生動。提示詞: 郊區(qū) the suburbs一、One possible version:Last Sunday, my parents and I went to the suburbs of Beijing and had a great time make it a green journey, we all agreed to cycle everything ready, we set warm sunshine and the fresh air put us all in a good arrival, we got down to our and I worked together to put up the tent, while Mum set out her homemade was enjoying the pleasant and relaxed family atmosphere in the open the meal, we couldn’t wait to fly and laughing, we watched our kites of different shapes dancing high in the couldn’t help cheering for fun it was!Dusk fell before we realized together before leaving, we quietly watched the golden sunset, wishing to have more weekends like 、學(xué)生優(yōu)秀習(xí)作(19分)Last Sunday, I, together with my parents, rode a bike to the suburbs and enjoyed ourselves, which turned out to be rewarding and in the morning, with bags wellpacked, we rode alongside the path in the the fresh air, bathed in the sunlight, we drowned ourselves in the natural long, we arrived at the camping taking some pictures of the scenery, Father and I got down to putting up the tent, while Mom was fully occupied with preparations for the lunch with the food we the noon sun shining, sweat streamed down our cheeks and made our Tshirts our joint effort, the tent was put up and the meal was delicious to lunch, 1 / 2Seeing the red sun sink slowly into the horizon, a peaceful and happy smile spread over our I wish I could freeze this moment!It was through this experience that I exercised myself by biking and enjoyed precious moments with my the day we spent was short, the memory I cherished will last long in my ：覆蓋所有要點，細(xì)節(jié)補(bǔ)充合理生動，句式豐富，用詞準(zhǔn)確，描寫地道，體現(xiàn)了非常強(qiáng)的語言運(yùn)用能力。she clapped and cheered for Father and the evening drew near, we sat together on the grass, waiting to admire the 。第一篇：西城二模作文小作文：范文（西城區(qū)提供）Dear ，I’m writing on behalf of my class to extend our wele to are some of our expectations for your English , we’d like t to have topics in class about Western are all very interested in knowing about culture behind the , we’d appreciate various activities to get everyone involved in speaking but not the least, please give us some guidance and training in our pronunciation, because we all hope to speak English fluently and clearly just as you native speakers you very forward to meeting , ChrisDear , It is with the greatest pleasure that I write to cordially to extend our warm wele to you on behalf of my would be more than grateful if you can take our expectations for the class into English is not our mother tongue, we constantly end up confused when learning it due to our lack of knowledge on western would appreciate it if you can introduce some topics about western addition to that, it would also be of great help if various kinds of activities can be organized in class as it is a good method to keep every individual but not least, would you please offer us some suggestions on how to enhance our oral English as we are in anticipation of improving our pronunciation in order to speak English more are sure to follow your am genuinely honored to express my great expectations for the class and I am looking forward to your , Chris（14分）陳一銘Dear , We wele you to be our new foreign English